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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: LILY111144

babie updtt kar do ,,,,merii taraf hein ghurtiii negahen,,,,😆

babie hw much tym,,,,??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93


For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.












Part - 13



Geet entered in d Hall and witnessed that unpleasant sight in front of her ,, There Sameera's maa Promila was sitting with Dadima and shedding her tears ,, Brij was also sitting there on other side. All looked at Geet , but Geet threw a burning glare at both of them and went to her room ,, she shut d door and sat there seething in anger.

On the other side in Neemrana , Maan got a msg and a/c informatin from his bank regarding his excess withdraw of money in last two days ,, he was confused with the msg ,, he was away from city then how could he withdraw d money from ATM . He checked d amounts and then called d bank manager ,, manager too checked and conformed that in last two days there was a big amount of money was withdrawn from his a/c and d number is ***********. Maan checked her wallet and find an ATM card less,, then he remembered that he gave that to Sameera for shopping ... Damn that B****. He was already in a worst stage of his temper and this info increased that many folds ,, he requested d manager to stop that A/C at once and he was coming there right now. First she played with his and his family's respect and now with his money.


Maan packed all d things and started to move back for bank ,, he was driving very fast in his anger and within 2 hours he was in d bank with bank manager ,, he discussed with him and closed that a/c right there. He was cursing himself to trust her and gave her that card ,, she was using him for her benefits. He was back and decided to go back home thinking about his Dad and Dadima ... pata nahi unhe kya- kya sahana pad raha hoga?


Geet was in her room full of rage when Promila entered there and Geet turned at her .


Geet: Tum , tum yahan kya lene aai ho? Apna drama neeche dikha diya hoga ab niklo yahan se.


Promila: Mei to nahi aati lekin Maaji ne kaha tumse ek bar milne ko to mei aa gai.


Geet: niklo yaha se bahar, mei tumhare ghar mei nahi aati ,, tumhe mere mei aane ki jaroorat nahi hei ,, aaj ke baad yahan kadam matt rakh dena.


Promola: ye sab meir beti ka hota aaj ,, lekin wo badkismat to sabko thoker marker chali gai .


In her anger Geet held her arm and dragged her out of her room and pushed her to go from there saying dafa ho jao yahan se aur apni surat matt dikhana ,, she was near staircases and Maan was coming up to go in his room and he was also in a very furious mood ,, he saw Geet pushing Promila and thought that she is misbehaving with her ,, Promila saying her .. Geet ... Geet ,, his bottled anger wanted to burst out and he find Geet a soft target ,, he can't say anything to Promila as an elder lady ,, listening her name and seeing her again there he roared at her ... This is my house and u have no right to insult anybody here ,, jagah to tumhari bhi yahan nahi hei .. Samjhi.


Geet was blind in her anger and replied back ... Mujhe meri jagah pata hei aur aapko beech mei bolne ki jaroorat nahi hei ,, inke sath kaise baat kerni hei mujhe acche se pata hei.


Her blunt reply fuelled his anger and he raised his hand.


Slap ...


Maan : apni hadd mei raho ,, he turned to Promila and told her ,, Aap jao yahan se.. Please and he left from there. Promila too left from there quietly fearing from his anger,, she knew it was all because of her daughter.


Geet was numbed with d sudden hit ,, she felt a burning sensation on her cheek and some wetness in her nose ,, she sniffed but that was increasing every passing seconds and next some drops of blood fell on her hand and dress ,, she covered her nose with her dupatta and rushed to her room's washroom , , blood was oozing out heavily from her nose ,, she was cleaning that again and again then Geet pressed her nose tightly and lay down on bed for few mins . After five min her bleeding was stopped but d feel of that slap was still there in her heart and mind.


Her cheek has d marks of his fingers and skin was still burning ,, his this inhuman act was burning her,, no one raised a finger on her in her whole life and today that unknown person hit her without any reason ,, she cheated him and here he still showing sympathy for her maa ,, ho bhi ku na uski darling ki maa jo hei ,, sasumaa,,huuhhh. Agar uski maa se sympathy hei to mujh se nafrat ku hei..? maine kya bura kiya iss ghar ka..? Yash uncle ki wajah se maine isse shaadi ki ,,Waana Sameera ke mangetar se mei to kya meri juti bhi shaadi na kare ,, kya musibat hei isse kuch kaha bhi nahi sakti ,, abhi aaya hei ,, fir se ghar chod ker chala jayega aur agar Dadima aur Yash uncle ko pata chala ki maine kuch argument ki hei to unhe bura lagega. Kahan fass gai meri zindgi? Kya karu mei? Ye bhi pata nahi iss rishtey ka kya anzaam hoga? Aaj hei Kal nahi .Kya karu mei ..? Ye kaisi bebasi hei.?


Mujhe iss Angry Bird se door hi rahana hoga , wahi theek hei aur koi rasta nahi hei ,, Geet tu apna dekh ,, Tu jo ker sakti thi ker diya , inka ghar ab ye jane. In sabse dur hi rahana accha hei ,, specially wo Maan Khurana.. The angry Bird .. samjhta kya hei khud ko ,, mujh per hath uthaya apni uss Bhagodi GF ki maa ke liye huuhh ,, Sameera ke BF aur mangetar se hope bhi kya ki ja sakti hei ,, Jaisi wo waisa ye ,, Bhaad mei jao. I hate him and everything related to that bloody leach sam.


Geet was seething in her anger and cursing Maan and decided to keep her away from all ,, she got up and settled her stuff in proper place which she brought from her hostel and made d room to live comfortably for her . It was lil better than her dormitory .



Precape - life on track...







Sorry for mistakes.
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Part -14

Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
😉 ,,,,me ist aaj koi hei hi nehiii,,,😆😆maan slaped geet,,😲
smeera ki trah hi geeteha ko samajh rha hei,,maan ka to fir bhi samajh aata hei,,,,dadi aur yash knha hei,,,sirf apni isat ki fikar thi jo bach gayee,,,geet ki koi fikar nehiii...
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
babie knha gayeee,,,??
bohut neend aa rehii hei,,,
Gud NYt dear,,,😳
kal fir se bahar jana hei mrng mei,,,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😉 ,,,,me ist aaj koi hei hi nehiii,,,😆😆maan slaped geet,,😲
smeera ki trah hi geeteha ko samajh rha hei,,maan ka to fir bhi samajh aata hei,,,,dadi aur yash knha hei,,,sirf apni isat ki fikar thi jo bach gayee,,,geet ki koi fikar nehiii...
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Itni late hum hi jaag rahe hei .. ulluo ki tarah se..
sab maze se so rahe hei...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: LILY111144

babie knha gayeee,,,??

bohut neend aa rehii hei,,,
Gud NYt dear,,,😳
kal fir se bahar jana hei mrng mei,,,


😆 I was too searching GN pic for u..
GN dear...



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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
urrghh maan 😡
khurana are so selfish
apni izat bachane k liye geet ko bali ka bakra bana diya
and that maan apna saara gussa geet pe nikal rha hai
and geet urrrggghhh
c'mon geet chup mat baith...kheecha k maan ko bhio ek thapad laga aur uski akal theekane pe le aa
and geet k papa k baare main toh main kya kahu
spineless creature
hate him
except geet n her friends hate every charcter
Edited by -kitty- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
wat wrong she saved their so called izzat and slap fr her
maan is disturb geet ka kaya kasor poor geet have to live their
wonderful update waiting fr nxt

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wish I could slap maan in return...wanted geet to do dat...ek to uski n uske pure ghar ki IZZAT bacahi...n he is treating her in dis way...bloody idiot...worst den sameera...

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