The Locket (12) MG FF, new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 52

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

😛

bura haal hone wali hai Maan babu...
kitna bhi karlo... phele tho Geet ko khud se nikal nahi pavoge...
Aur Geet itna pareshaan karegi ki 😆
nakul bhi tho saath hai irritate karne...
Dadimaa tho badi fast hai ...😆
Aniee ke delivery ke baad Geet Aur NT dono ka karene keliye ready hai...
blog ho yaha ho hume chinta nahi hai Tongue
update super soon Maan ki halat dekhne ke liye aanken taras rahi hai 😆

Geet sample piece hai.. 😆 Apni creator ki tarah...
He is not going to know if he is going or coming...😆
Thanks Praf
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurti30

awesome dear😊

maan took everything in other sense and dont want to come between his brother's happiness but glad geet didnt take his anger on heart but hope he wiil not hurt her too much in his pain and confusion
dadima again on matchmaking 😆
and loved the precap😃

Geet ko koi nahi hurt kar sakta..
Avi hai na...😆 Maan ko theek karne ke liye...😆
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Raina123

My heart aches for.maan ,I feel like crying.
I hope mu is cleared soon .
Omg nakul ,poor guy.
Aww geet took the trouble to make maan breakfast.
Dadima ,lolI can actually imagine her rubbing her hands deviously
And twirling with a grin plastered on her face.
Office people are so dead.Becharey.
Everyone burns in the flames of a broken heart-raina lol.
Precap- -_- maans plans going to fail with our dear chatterbox.
^_^ bf !!!!!!!Waiting for maan reaction.
Beautiful update I loved it.
Continue soon.

Yes, that's the way I had planned.
He is being dusht but for a pure reason.
It won't be long to solve the MU so please stay with me.
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fict

loved the update. waiting for Maan's reaction on knowing the truth.👍🏼

Soon..
First let Avi play with him and make him J... drive him out of his mind, then 😆😆
Thanks..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: romanceorlove

Aw!!! Poor Mann got so disheartened😭. In a weak moment tore away and burnt his diary, his feelings for his Mishty, their memories💔.

She had read the important parts on the night before..😃
Koi na jab sach pata jalega to bahut repent bhi karenge😳!!!! Lekin fayda ye hai ki DD is back☺️😳!!!!
Hehe I had guessed "best friend" 😳but this being her, anything is possible...😆😆🤣Abhi toh Maan Sir HP jaayenge... bohut masti planned hai..😆

Deadly combination - DD, Mishty, BF, smart Dev and matchmaker Dadi 😆😆🥳

Great work girl 👍🏼😊👏

As for short/long updates, completely your choice based on your demanding schedule, your readers are with you!!!! 😊😊😊Thanks so much. I am writing for everyone's happiness too so I am always glad to read the responses.

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
oh no maan thinks geet is the girl whom dev loves

so he wants to stay away from them
maan dreaming about geet😳
geet preparing breakfast for maan😃
aur maan tho apne DD mode mai agaya
dadi ne apna hobby shuru kardiya matchmaking
staff is happy that dev and dadi are out of office
arre tum log ko nahi patha ye toofan se phele ka sanata hai😆
ab dekho real DD ko poor KC staff
haha geet maan ko sun rahi hai ki she has seen people who are foreign return but doesn't behave like him
but geet to geet hai BF(bachpan ka friend)
ab ye maan thodina samjhega😕
dear BF ka maine break fast , boy friend patha hai but bachpan ka freind ye tho hamari jhalli hi soch sakthi hai👍🏼

eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please get rid of this confusion soon, but the angry young man is also very appealing. Thank you for the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago


Originally posted by: miss_dreamy

nice...nicely written... in fact it was fantastic !!!! never read the transition of maan to dd written so beautifully... in most of the ffs (in fact in all i have read) either they are dd right from start or they put a leap to avoid writing the difficult part...nut u not only showed the courage to write it but wrote it beautifully too (sorry for comparing) ... and geet as usual ...is sweet...

For me even in the show HP Maan was the one with the most character. Here too, he will try his dusht-ta but he is in love already..😆

waiting for some romantic moments 😳😳 (in fact double romance -- devtara and maneet)

soon..

while writing this i got an idea (its very difficult to implement even i dont have courage to do it but still... )

can u show the romance btw two of them parallelly ... one will be angry and harsh kind in fact ore of obseesion (maneet) and other will be sweet and caring and very fun and jolly type (dev-tara)

i will be kind of fun reading them (and difficult writing them as either u can make ppl enjoy giving essence of diffrent types of love all in one update ... or u leave readers confused...😕 or worser boring that they actually feel like banging their heads on wall or something...🤢 ) I am sure u will be doing it former... U will make it awesome ..I am 101% sure abt it...

P.S its just a suggestion.. expecting grt things...😉

miss_dreamy

Ideas are nice but my outline was made in March, with song selection already..😕
The basic story I had planned was this only😃 Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: srikrithi

So maan decided to act to safeguard his heart & feelings.

Geet has decided to manaofy him. Hope he doesn't hurt her.
Office staff have no idea dd is here!😈
Precap: geet's abbreviation of BF!! 🤣
Poor maan. Continue soon.


No Maan decided to sacrifice himself for their happiness.

Thanks 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anisha_maaneet

MSK in angry avataar :(diary jala di :(poor nakul itna gussa sahna pad raha hai. And maaneet in office hmm maza aayega ;).hope maaneet ki misunderstanding jaldi khatam ho jaye..lagta hai dadi ko kuch pata nahi hai jab pata chalega tho kya hoga lol.awesome part.Thanks for update and pm :)


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