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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

awesome superb lovely teaser yar Avi :)



Thanks Sona 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
After reading the teaser my imagination is just flying high thinking of My geetu in Maans arms.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi, this is my first post in this forum. I have been an irregular silent reader until now. I don't remember how I came across this forum but now I don't know how I ever survived without it. I'm amazed by the talent of the writers on this forum and I love to read the stories . yours is my most favorite along with shackles of love.
I have visited the forum after a long time and missed ur posts in which u hav urged silent readers to reply. read them all in one go. you're right that when u spend so much time and effort into the story it is only fair that u get feedback for it. I apologize for being silent till now. I really am sorry for not voicing my appreciation.
cuming to ur story-this is my favorite and im not just saying that. the way u have written this story, the small details, every loose end is tied. you've balanced both past and present beautifully. what I love most about this is that u have thought out each detail, u've given a background story to all ur characters and have even significant time to the side characters and r finishing their stories as well. u've written them in such a way that u've made me root for them as well (ponnam, chandan & kabir megha). I already love maan and geet or I wudnt be on this forum but u have written this story so beautifully that u have made me love dev taara as well. in the serial I forwarded all the scenes in which they were in but in this story they make me sooo happy.
whenever I hav come to this forum and seen that u've uploaded a new part I feel so happy and I always smile seeing ur update or reading it. my mom passed me a couple of times and saw me smiling widely at my laptop screen and looked at me suspiciously-she thinks sumthing fishy is going on😃.
anyone reading the story can tell how much effort has gone into it. the story is brilliantly thought out and wriiten. I loved the additional things- the dialogues-the dev ji- dev veer ji- devarji part was simple yet brilliant. the dev taara scenes in which dev annoys her by singing different songs- that was very creative and brilliant (im running out of adjectives). u've depicted every characters feelings so wonderfully that u've made me feel for every one of them.
you hav created such chemistry between the characters especially dev taara- I love all their scenes. you should have been the writer of this serial.
cuming to the update- please let chandan and poonam get their happy ending (together), they hav suffered for so long. it was good to see kabir and megha finally happy. and my dearest maan- don't make him suffer too much- hav mercy on him and let him have mercy on geet-bechari uske dusht danav mood mein office puhnch gai. I cant wait to read the upcoming scenes.
I would also like to read what became of dev taara if u allow me access to it. but its upto u-its ur story and if u decide that my comment came too late then I accept that.
at the end I will say again that I love this story and this has become my sole reason for visiting the forum. this is me giving a standing ovation for ur story 👏. very well written.⭐️
ps. if u decide to allow me access cud u also tell me the procedure for pm/ buddy request, etc. since this is my first post, I hav no idea about any of the stuff.
pps. enjoy ur holidays
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyangel23

<font size="3">hi, this is my first post in this forum. I have been an irregular silent reader until now. I don'trememberhow I came across this forum but now I don't know how I ever survived without it. I'm amazed by the talent of the writers on this forum and I love to read the stories . yours is my most favorite along with shackles of love.</font>

<font size="3">I have visited the forum after a long time and missed ur posts in which u hav urged silent readers to reply. read them all in one go. you're right that when u spend so much time and effort into the story it is only fair that u getfeedback for it. I apologize for being silent till now. I really am sorry for not voicing my appreciation.</font>

<font size="3">cuming to ur story-this is my favorite and im not just saying that. the way u have written this story, the small details, every loose end is tied.you've balanced both past and presentbeautifully. what I love most about this is that u have thought out each detail, u've given a background story to all ur characters and have even significant time to the side characters and r finishing their stories as well. u've written them in such a way that u've made me root for them as well (ponnam, chandan & kabir megha). I already love maan and geet or I wudnt be on this forum but u have written this story so beautifully that u have made me love dev taara as well. in the serial I forwarded all the scenes in which they were in but in this story they make me sooo happy.</font>

<font size="3">whenever I hav come to this forum and seen that u've uploaded a new part I feel so happy and I always smile seeing ur update or reading it. my mom passed me a couple of times and saw me smiling widely at my laptop screen and looked at me suspiciously-she thinks sumthing fishy is going on😃.</font>

<font size="3">anyone reading the story can tell how much effort has gone into it. the story is brilliantly thought out and wriiten. I loved the additional things- the dialogues-the dev ji- dev veer ji- devarji part was simple yet brilliant. the dev taara scenes in which dev annoys her by singing different songs- that was very creative and brilliant (im running out of adjectives). u've depicted every characters feelings so wonderfully that u've made me feel for every one of them. </font>

<font size="3">you hav created such chemistry between the characters especially dev taara- I love all their scenes. you should have been the writer of this serial.</font>

<font size="3">cuming to the update- please let chandan and poonam get their happy ending (together), they hav suffered for so long. it was good to see kabir and megha finally happy. and my dearest maan- don't make him suffer too much- hav mercy on him and let him have mercy on geet-bechari uske dusht danav mood mein office puhnch gai. I cant wait to read the upcoming scenes. </font>

<font size="3">I would also like to read what became of dev taara if u allow me access to it. but its upto u-its ur story and if u decide that my comment came too late then I accept that.</font>

<font size="3">at the end I will say again that I love this story and this has become my sole reason for visiting the forum. this is me giving a standing ovation for ur story 👏. very well written.⭐️</font>

<font size="3">ps. if u decide to allow me access cud u also tell me the procedure for pm/ buddy request, etc. since this is my first post, I hav no idea about any ofthe stuff.</font>

<font size="3">pps. enjoy ur holidays</font>



Thank you so much for breaking your silence. I am glad that a lot of my silent readers are deciding to show their support.

I really enjoyed reading your comment. Thanks so much

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Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey hon can i post ur blog link too in the Daily updates thread? its password protected but still i wanna know...see the first page of the thread and plz let me know...
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Posted: 11 years ago
HAPPY DIWLAI
thread thirteen time right
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Posted: 11 years ago
HAPPY DIWALI 😊😊😊
new thread put karo na Aviii ... update nahi pooch rahi hoon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

hey hon can i post ur blog link too in the Daily updates thread? its password protected but still i wanna know...see the first page of the thread and plz let me know...


Deepa blog is only for some chapters here, I am not planning to be active there😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

HAPPY DIWALI 😊😊😊
new thread put karo na Aviii ... update nahi pooch rahi hoon... 😊


Not possible from phone dear😃

Happy Diwali😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

HAPPY DIWLAI
thread thirteen time right


Will be home Tuesday.. So then

Happy Diwali!

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