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Posted: 11 years ago
awwwsommme part...loved every bit of it...for the first time happy with sashas scheming 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very Nice Update. Maan again saved geet and now they are going on trip together.
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part 58
awesome...
Maan has fallen for her...
but Geet doesnt know this...
hes changing...
OMG this Sasha is dangerous...
hope Geet stays safe...
the FB was so cute...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part .. glad Maan is understanding her unsaid words.
Hope these trip would bring then emotionally close.
Its like her whole world only revolves with and around Maan.
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written! Sasha's plan backfired! Maaneet got more closer! Maan worried abt her! n takes care of her! Maan takin her to Shimla wid him! Geet excited! update soon
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Marital Tie - A Journey In Marriage

Part 60

One more step towards love,

Maan and Geet took their luggage's and came out and Dev came up, "Dev take care of yourself, eat well and take care of our guests too, ok, and ah give Mama ji's tablets on time, ok, and," Geet was listing, "Geet, you are going just for three days, and you are saying as if we are all small kids," Dev said with a grin, "Ya, Ya, you are too grown up, yet you are kids only and don't you thinking of driving fast and partying late night, we have guests at home and they are your responsibility,"

"Ok, Boss, I understood," Dev said and Geet grinned, "will miss you Dev," Geet said with a smile, "I miss you too my Bhab, I mean Geet," Dev looked with a silly smile and Geet looked at the house, after coming here, this was her first long trip away from home, "Bro, you better, dragger her out, or else she will be standing here and staring at the house only," Dev said and Geet scorned and smiled and Maan looked at Geet, "Geet, we are getting late," Maan said and Geet too went with him, "Gonna miss the house and everyone," Geet said with her upset tone,

"How much you love this house and my family, Geet and still you were ready to leave for my words, how much it have been hurt your heart, how am I going to do something to take away those pains Geet" Maan thought as he looked at her upset face, He slowly held her hand, and Geet looked at him with surprise, "Geet, everything will be fine, don't worry," Maan said with a smile and Geet too smiled and nodded,

Maan didn't take his hand from her till they reach the airport, then they boarded up and reached Shimla in no time, Geet smiled big as she stepped out of the airport, a fresh air hit their face and she smiled big, then a guy rushed up towards them and wished Maan and gave Maan a key and went away, and Geet was looking at him, "Geet, our Car for this trip," Maan said and Geet nodded and they both went towards a car and Maan took the drive and drove towards the hillton hotel where their rooms were booked,

The hotel guys recognized Maan immediately and the Manager ran towards him, "Mr.Khurana, great to see you, please wait here, will bring your room keys now," The Manager said and Maan too sat there, signed Geet to sit and he waited for five minutes and the manager didn't return, Maan looked at his watch, "what is taking him so long," Maan stood up frustrated, "Ji, please, you sit down, I will see and come," Geet said, "no Geet, I will," Maan stopped her, "ji, please, I will see and come," Geet said and went towards the reception,

"what the hell did you guys know, you know about Mr.Khurana right, we never want to get him upset, if we need out jobs," the Manager was yelling at two guys, when Geet walked up, "Excuse me," Geet called and the Manager looked at Geet shocked, "don't you know Mr.Khurana hates waiting and it's been five minutes, what's going on," Geet asked with Maan's attitude, "O, Madam, there had been a huge mistake, actually Sir, had booked for two room and we accidently given one room to another customer and we have only one room now, we don't know what to do,"

"Baba ji," Geet hit her head, "don't you know his anger," Geet yelled at them, "Madam please help us, we will do something soon, please, Madam," the Manager begged her, "Ok, take that Key and come with me," Geet said and went towards Maan, "Maan sir," Geet called and Maan looked up, "they misplaced the keys, so only, let's go," Geet said and Maan too nodded and walked with them, and the Manager stopped at room no.202, "sir, your room," Manager said, "Geet your room," Maan asked

"Ji, o, my room is at that end, I will go, you go in and get refreshed," Geet said and Maan went in, "Madam, I will not forget you till my life ends, thank you," he said, "ok, but arrange me a room soon," Geet said and the Manager nodded and geet went and sat at the lobby, waiting for her room, and it's been half an hour and Geet was feeling tired, "Geet," Maan's voice Made her to jump up and she turned and looked at him, and she stood there feeling caught, "Geet, why are sitting here and not in your room," Maan asked,

Geet was feeling scared and she knew Maan hate lying, "Geet," He called a bit high and she trembled and fall back on the sofa, and looked at Maan, and Maan lend his hand for her, and she caught it and Maan pulled her with full force, that she ended up dashing on his rock hard chest and falling back, "Geet," he said and caught her by her waist and she looked at him, and Maan was looking at her, holding her close and they both stood there frozen up for a few minutes,

Geet then realized that she was in a hotel lobby and people are watching them, so she gained her sense and pulled back, "Geet," Maan looked at her, what are you doing here," Maan asked, "come on let me see your room," Maan said and Geet felt trapped, and Maan started to walk and Geet walked behind him, and stopped in the way, "what will he say if he finds out I lied," she thought, Maan looked at her, "Geet come on," Maan shouted and Geet rushed up and tripped of and fall into his arms,

Maan held her looking puzzled, "What happened to her, why is she acting strange," Maan thought and looked at her, but as she was in Maan's arms her thought had cleared her mind and she was looking at him lost in thoughts and Maan too looked at her, and suddenly he too forgot what was in his mind, he just got into the shiny love filled eyes gazing at him and frozen up again, and they didn't need anyone to disturb,

Maan's heart was slipping away and he held her waist tight and Geet tighten her hold around his neck and it seems like they were going to kiss, "Oh my god, get a room please," Maan and Geet turned to see a women looking at them with a wide look, and just then Maan and Geet realized what they were doing and pulled up, and looked embarrassed, "Geet, where is room," Maan asked and Geet looked at him scared,

"Ji, sorry," Geet said and told him the situation, "why didn't you say this to me first even," Maan asked, "I was scared that you might upset, so," Geet paused, "Come on," Maan held her hand and walked to his room, "Geet, get freshen up here and we will have the breakfast on the way, and go and meet our clients," Maan said and Geet too nodded,

Geet and Maan started up at 12 in the noon to meet their clients, after having a breakfast at the hotel and then the meeting over at around 4, "Mr.Khurana, tomorrow, we can meet at the construction site, I guess," Mr.Vijay, his new client said and Maan too said an ok, then Maan and Geet reached the hotel at 6, "Have you arranged for my room," Geet asked as she hit the reception table and they said a no, "great" she said, and Maan looked at her with a grin,

"Geet, come," Maan said and walked Geet to his room, "Geet get freshen up, go," Maan said and Geet too obeyed him, and Maan removed his vest and kept his files in the cupboard and he looked at the Geet packed luggage's and took it and unpacked it and arranged it in the cupboard too, and Geet came out of the wash room and saw her bags unpacked and her dresses arranged in the cupboard and she looked for Maan and he was not there, "did he give this room to me and went somewhere," Geet thought,

But just before Geet could finish her thinking Maan walked in and Geet looked at him puzzled, "Ji, my clothes," Geet asked slowly, "Geet you too can stay here even, we can share this room," Maan said shocking Geet to the core, "In one room," she asked out loud, as she was unable to hold the shock, "Why you don't believe me," Maan asked and all Geet could do was stare at him, "After all, husband and wife sharing the same room is not a crime I guess," Maan said, and geet eyes widen up even big,

A short smile curved on her lips and she blushed up immediately, this was the first time Maan explicitly said about their relationship, "Geet, do you want to order the dinner in the room or go out," Maan asked, "As you wish," Geet answered shyly, "No," Maan said in a bold voice and Geet looked at him suddenly, "As you wish," Maan said with a grin and Geet melted down in his smile,

Geet suddenly started to feel nervous, "Can we go out," Geet asked slowly, "Ok," Maan said and walked her out and locked the room and walked up and Geet was walking besides him, looking at him, as they sat on the diner, Maan gave the menu card to Geet, but she was so excited that she can't say or see anything, "Please you even order for me too," Geet said and Maan said an ok and ordered and Geet didn't even see the food, she was just eating up looking at Maan, who was too gazing up at her,

Then they both walked to their room, as they were getting close to the room, Geet was feeling some kind of nervousness, this remind of her stay with Maan on the first day of her marriage in a hotel, where Dadi maa arranged for their first night, and after that, they had never been alone in a same room, Geet slowly walked besides him and Maan opened the door, and let her in and walked in,

And he kept the mobile and key on the table and walked in to the wash room, "Baba ji, what's happening to me," Geet thought and she saw her hands shivering and she was all red blushing up, "oh, control Geet. Control," Geet warned herself, and Maan came out and saw her standing there blushing up and holding her hands together, and her face showed her nervousness,

Maan smiled and Geet looked at him, his face glowing up and he went and locked their room and turned to Geet, who was shivering up, Maan too felt an unknown happiness and excitement in him, looking at her, his heart beat raised and he slowly went her, and stood near her, and she looked up, slowly, and Geet felt like fainting up, and she started to shiver up,

There heart beat was so high that it filled the room with it's beats,


Thami thami.. si saansein

Thami thami jeene lagi

Hain tumse jo mill gayi

Jo mill gayi

Thami thami si saasein

Jeene lagi, jeene lagi..

Hain tumse jo mill gayi,

jo mil gayi

Geet was looking at him and she looked down as her shyness hit her, Maan slowly touched her shoulders and Geet shivered and her heart skipped a beat and Maan then held both her shoulders and Geet don't what to do, she was trembling high, breathing heavy, she slowly looked at Maan's face which had the intense looking making her shiver more, and she was already red and he walked her and Made her to sit on the bed and sat near her, she was looking down and Maan was looking at her angelic face turned red,

Asar yeh kaisa teri chaahat ka

Hai mujhpe ho gaya

Zarra zarra mere dil ka

Ab tujh mein hi kho gaya

Meharbaan lavo Rab barsa hai

Jab se tu hai mill gaya

Tujh ko pa ke aisa laage ke

Khud se hoon mil gaya



Ke rang jo lagyo... re!

Ke rang jo lagyo re

Ke rang jo lagyo re lagyo

Ke rang jo lagyo re

Ke rang jo lagyo re

Ke rang jo lagyo re

Ke thaaro rang...


Geet slowly looked at him, who smiled at her, and she blushed and smiled up slowly, "Geet," Maan called and Geet looked at him, and slowly he held her hand and hold it in his hands , "You are happy, right," Maan asked with a smile, Geet don't know what to answer, her eyes filled up so as her heart, and she nodded as she was out of words, Maan smiled up, "Geet, from now on, I want to see you only with this smile on your face, I don't want to see any tears or pain in it," Maan said and Geet stared at him with a smile,

"Am I dead, am I in heaven, is this really, Baba ji, he is near me, smiling, hold my hand and speaking with love and concern and I still can't believe everything happening here are true or not," Geet thought



O.. rang aisa gehra ishq ka

Hai rooh mein ghulne laga

Chhoote naa...

Chhoote naa... iska nishaan


Maan then stood up and held her shoulders and pushed her back on the bed and made her lie down, and went around and sat on the other side, Geet was just staring at him, walking to the other side, removing his shoe and sat on the bed and lay himself back as if half sitting and looked at her, Geet looked at him and he was smiling, "Geet sleep on" and she slowly dozed off,

Jahaan ki parwaah kya

Jab dil yeh hadd se aage badh gaya

Saji hai duniya meri

Mujhko tu naya sa kar gaya


Ke rang jo lagyo.. re..

Ke rang jo lagyo re

Ke rang jo lagyo re ke thaaro rang

After a few minutes, Geet slept off well and Maan was looking at her sleeping like an angel near her, she smiled and winced while sleeping, Maan looked at her and smiled and bend down near her, and slowly touched her cheeks, and she smiled in her sleep as he touched in her sleep, and held his hand and slept on holding his hands, "How stupid I could be Geet, having my own angel near me and trying to push you away all the time, but not anymore Geet, I am gonna, hold you close to me and never let to go, I will protect and preserve you, you are the gift given by my life, and I will not lose you,"


O.. dekhoon pighalta aasmaan

Boondon se karta hai bayaan

Pyaar mera, pyaar mera... bepanaah

Jo bhoole se bhi na bhoole

Tu aisa waada bann gaya

Tode se bhi naa toote

Jo dil ka naata bann gaya

Ke rang jo lagyo.. re..

Ke rang jo lagyo re

Ke rang jo lagyo re lagyo

Ke rang jo lagyo re

Ke rang jo lagyo re

Ke rang jo lagyo re thaaro rang

Morning sun hit Geet and she slowly winced and suddenly she remember yesterday night, she thought she had been dream and she slowly opened her eyes and found that she was holding Maan's hand under her cheek and she realized it and saw Maan who had sleep off while sitting near her,

It gave her a smile, she then went to the wash room, freshen up and came out and Maan was still sleeping, Geet went and sat near him, looked at his calm face, she slowly touched his face and her heart skipped a beat as she did, she looked at him close and she remembered his words and she caressed his rough face, "I love you, I love you so much," Geet said slowly and she removed her hand from his face, and held his shoulder,

"I know, someday you will too say these words to me, until then I will keep wishing and praying for that moment, you can hurt me, you can yell at me, you can do whatever you want, because I am all yours, I will always be yours and I will love you with whatever love I have in my heart and I will love you as long as I live, I promise you that," Geet thought looking at Maan's calm and childlike cute face in his sleep.

Precap: More Maaneet Love..

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Posted: 11 years ago
A new beginning ,, glad to see Maan opening up.
Awesome part
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Fabulous update
wowww maaneet in one roon & maan openly accepted their husband wife relation in frnt of geet ...geet flying in heaven with all happenings around her
waiting for nxt part and more maaneet's romance
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superb update acceptation of relation
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kash maan sunle geet ki dil ki baat...humein toh lag rahe hai k maan ne jaan bujh kar ek hi room liya...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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