MG FF THE DIVINE FLOWER : thread 2: PART 39 : page 141 17th may - Page 66

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesomme one...feeling too bad for geet...i reallly dont want her to forgive him...😡

























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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb updates...
Maans behavior with geet was quite rude...bt them I guess anyone in maans place wud hv reacted to a news like this...
Don't want geet to forgive him easily...
Loved the updte...
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Posted: 11 years ago
MAAN AND HIS ANGER
HE HEARD, ACCUSED, TRIED AND PUNISHED HER ALL ON HIS OWN
HE COULDNT SEE THE PAIN IN HER EYES WHILE HE PROFESSED TO LOVE HER
INHIS BLIND REVENGE HE DESTROYED HIS, GEET AND PARI'S LIFE
WILL HE EVER BE ABLE TO FORGIVE HIMSELF WHEN HE KNOWS THE TRUTH
AND WILL GEET EVER BE ABLE TO FORGET HIS BETRAYAL AND THE HURT INFLICTED BY HIM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Two update.
Superbly written.
You said maan will be a villian in this but I don't think so. Firstly for whatever he heard and got to know,it was a natural reaction. Secondly it's Maan Singh Khurana who is extreme in his every emotion,be it love,care or hatred.
Whatever he came across has shattered his every belief, trust,heart,everything. He has been proved as an idiot who was being fooled by Geet since so long.
His anger took over him as always.

Geet's only mistake was she kept maan away from all the problems. Had she told him all this could never happen.

And even luck was not in her favour,that is why every time she lied to maan, he came to know in a different point of view but he never asked her the reason believing that she will herself tell him.


What about Pari in all this?

Regarding maan's punishment in present, no separation please. Let maan realise how and what all Geet managed alone.
To manaaofy her,let Ami help him. Process needs to be slow but steady.

Hope to get next update soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
fantabulous update...
omg!!!!
Geet is getting punished for no mistake of her's...
bt here we cant blame neighther geet nor maan...
its their situation and maaneet's stupidity...
i had tears in my eyes while reading this update...
continue soon and thanks forlong update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh gosh after reading part 36 and 37 i just hate maan
oh gosh hate has blinded maan so much
so ami is dev's kid, and dev spineless guy is still quite abt it 😡😡

how was geet's dream crushed and maan married pari in front of her,
i think maan should tadpofy more and geet should not forgive him so easily
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Posted: 11 years ago
double updates r always well come but pls give 1 update in regular intervals
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

😭the most emotional and painful part that i ever read..i was all the while crying reading this two part..maan's anger have destroy their life badly..specially geet's😭 icant imagine the pain that geet carried to save khurana pride at the end sacrifise her self..she is such an angel and brutelly butchered by her love...too painfull..maan SR.can he go through it with pari if he really love geet..hate maan😡😡😡 for hurting geet..very sad😭😭😭..pls pls cont soon...how is maan going to make up for his sin..

thnk u sooo much for the comments 😊
and sorry for making you cry

Geet had immense faith in Maan but he is only human and he reacted like any other man, well a bit extreme..
Even I am confused as how Maan would make up for all this!! 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

OMG kitna emotional nd MU se bhara hua update diya tumne

for now I m with maan's anger he is right at his place how can he just believe geet like that when she said that the child is his nd hers bcoz they didn't have any intimate relation
nd upar se woh chudail NT apne fayede ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaane ke lye ready ho gayi
nd dev the most coward person NT se sirf iss liye shaadi kar raha hai bcoz she helped him with money
but geet ke jhoot ne sab kuch badal diya agar woh pehle maan se baat kar pati toh yeh nahi hota aur maan usse gusse me ignore karne ke bajaye usse uske jhoot ki wajah puchta toh zyada aacha hota nd jab woh gaya tab geet ki bato ka usne galat meaning nikal liya
aur usse blame karne laga
God now I m scared to read next part🤢🤢

Both are to be blamed. Geet for hiding the facts and Maan for not listening to her...

Thnx sooo much for the detailed comments :)
loved reading them 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

don't know what to say maan ne apne gusse me ek nahi teen life barbad kardi aur apna pyaar bhi

dadi was still with geet she wanted her to be happy but maan he just lost his rational thinking due to his anger
its true gusse me insaan sujh bhujj sab bhul jaata hai nd maan proved it
kash geet bas ek baar chilla kar hi sahi but maan ko sab kuch suna deti gusse me dard me toh bhi sab kuch thik ho jaata but she lost her every emotion when maan decided to marry pari in front of her
nd maan he was happy seeing her in pain
jiske liye woh poori duniye se lad sakta tha aaj uski hi duniya barbaad kardi usne apne gusse me
jisse woh kisi takleef me nahi dekhana chahta tha aaj usne usse sabse zyada takleef di


plz dear jaldi se present me aa jao can't see more of it first i wanted to know about past but onw I want to end it soon

nd about slow torture u can do like maan did to her I mean the whole engagement nd marriage thing with her being happy with it but at right time maan should stop that

did you mean that i should show Geet is going to marry someone else?? I dunno if everyone can accept that as Geet is also a mother. will she do that to Ami even if the marriage actually doesn't happen! 😕
And I will try to end this past part soon.. but all these sad parts were required to show their state of mind. 😳

thnx again for the detailed comments. I read them again and again while writing the next part.. 😃

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