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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia


yeah and waise bhi it will be all drama at least maan should also feel the pain what he gave to her while marrying pari in front of her just to brake her

that right geet create the drama to marry some one else or pari ka bahi ho phir maan ko ehsas hoga k geet nai kiya felt kiya itni asani say maan ko mafi nahi milini chahiya camel mountain k nichey aya hai thoda toh geet ka haq banta hai na 😉
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First of all a biggg thnk U to all who gave me so many beautiful ideas and reviews!! 🤗
I have tried to reply to most of you. Sorry if I left anyone 😳
Please motivate me as always with your longgg comments!! and LIKEs 😃

I dunno how you would you react after this update
I am a die hard Maan fan and I won't intentionally hurt any of your feelings. All I want is to build a plot that looks genuine. Having said that and scaring you all for no particular reason 😆 here we go...

PART 38

PAST

Till that moment, that is when the pandit announced their marriage to be complete and declared them husband and wife, Maan never realised that the person whom he was marrying was not some doll and had her own emotions. It hit him then what he had gone and done. He clenched his fist when he realised that he had unnecessarily dragged a girl into the mess that was his life. Marriage was not something that would be finished just after the ceremony. Now he had to keep this commitment for a lifetime. Suddenly he started feeling hollow inside. What had he gone and done? The victory that delighted him seemed pointless now. Didn't he change everything! What was he even thinking? Like it was some show where he would win and everything would be back to normal as the screen went off? This wasn't some drama but life. He looked around to see what Geet felt. He could know it just looking into her eyes but she was nowhere to be seen. Before he could look around, dadima who seemed to be extremely happy took the two couples for further rituals.

The anguish and inner turmoil of Geet couldn't be described in words when she saw her Maan making someone else his better half. It was as if something was ripped out of her. The only way she could keep her sanity was making herself believe that this wasn't her Maan. The man whom she loved with all her heart had disappeared into thin air. This was someone else with the body of her Maan. That's how she put brave face while monitoring the decorations of his suhaag raat just like he wanted. The bed had minimal decoration just how he would prefer it. The room was made to look grand with all the aromatic candles and flower petals. Geet sat on the edge of the bed alone looking at the finally decorated room. How many times she lied on the same bed in his arms while he sensuously discussed this night with her. How he longed for the day when he would find her waiting for him and he could love her without having to hold back himself. She closed her eyes as a lone tear escaped from her eyes. She quickly stood up as she heard some giggling noises approaching the room. She wiped her tears and was about to leave when Annie and other girls came there holding Pari and teasing her. Annie's face turned hostile as she spotted Geet. Not that she hated her or something. In fact she meant it when she used to tease her calling bhabhi. But now she was happy for her bhai as he found a life partner for him. Pari was really a sweet girl and good at heart. She wanted happiness in her brother's life and she knew Geet's presence would only cause problem for it. As the moment of awkwardness lingered one of the girls said, "arey Geet tum kaha chali. Abhi to is dulhaniya ki taang kheechna baaki he"

Another girl , "aur Maan jiju se paise bhi wasulna he"

Others laughed as Pari blushed.

Geet : wo..me..uhh..me thak gayi hu. Mujhe apne kamre me jaana he

Pari : arey Geet, thodi der rukh jao na for a moral support

Annie : nhi Pari, Geet theek keh rhi he. After all ye saara decoration isi ne to kiya he. Kaafi din se kaam kr rhi he. Let her rest.

Pari : ok, thnx for everything!

Geet : me chalti hu.

And then she ran away from there not able to take anymore. Ofcourse this was her Maan, well not her anymore. Who was she kidding? She had been stupid enough to lose her love. She didn't know what her future was! What should she do? She couldn't even die as she had Amy to take care of. She silently fed her baby and put her to sleep. At least Amy was lucky as she was the only one who could sleep among all these chaos. Geet lied down on her bed looking at the ceiling. It was dark all around her room, just like her life. She turned to the right side. She tried to close her eyes but only tears fell from them. She hid her face in the pillow muffling her cries and wetted her pillow as her heart broke silently without a drop of blood.

Maan was frustrated with himself. For one thing he hated Geet like anything but he knew he had no right to drag someone else into all this. He was determined to tell Pari the truth and let her decide the future. He felt that he had lost his right to take decision in this matter anymore. He drank a little just to gain confidence to confess to her. He got rid of the girls by paying more than what they demanded making them hooting for Maan. But once he entered the room, he stood there spell-bound. Every nook and corner of the room had the love etched on it. It was filled with her scent. The serenity, the peace that he wanted was right there. He could feel it. He forgot all about his order to Geet to do up his room. He was lost in the pleasant feeling. He closed his eyes and let himself drown in that enchanting experience. Her face, her divine face was all that filled his mind at that moment. His legs moved forward towards the bed. Pari shifted nervously. Maan took off her veil. She couldn't look into his intense eyes for she was blushing hard. Maan in trance could only see his divine angel sitting there. It was his dream fulfilled. He gently undressed her as if she were a priced possession. She was about to say something when he stopped her by putting his fingers on her lips, "aj nhi..baato ke liye humare paas puri zindagi he. I have waited for this day for so long.." He said as he undressed himself. And he loved her, every inch of his Geet, which belonged to him and him only forever. His tongue roamed possessively over her curves and then he cherished her soft skin the way he had longed forever. He entered her taming the raw desire that his heart possessed being gentle yet rough and rocked her. And finally as he lied over her panting he groaned, "I love you Mishty!!"

Pari who was exhausted herself with Maan's brute force repeated confused, "Mishty??, Maan u ok?"

He opened his eyes in shock. What did he do? His mistakes were becoming deeper and deeper. He immediately got off Pari and laid his back facing her. And before Pari could ask anything more he dozed off or atleast he pretended so in front of her.

Pari was confused by Maan's behaviour. On one hand she was mad about Maan and she was happy that they made love on their first night. But the way he pulled back, she felt it was rude. But don't they say men don't like to cuddle. And that too someone like the tough guy Maan. Pari brushed those thoguths aside and slept contented but somehwere her mind pried her about.. Mishty!!!

Next morning Pari woke up in the morning. Dadima took her to make the first sweet dish and muh dikhayi. After completing everything Pari came back to her room where she Maan sitting on the couch thinking deeply.

Pari : hey Maan, guess what I made gajar ka halwa!!! Like for first time!!! Marriage is some effort.

Maan was lost as he remembered how Geet made sweet for him and how he cherished it. It hurt him and the fact that it hurt him still, angered him. He had committed a sin by tying down an innocent to him. And the reason for all this was her!! Geet!! She had ruined his life!! If only she didn't betray him...if only she remained what he thought she was his life would have been bliss. Anger, rage coursed through his veins. His heart was turning cold. He hated himself for his misdoing. If only he didn't fall a prey in front of her charms. Meanwhile Pari took out her bag and started showing the gifts that she had brought for everyone in Maan's family.

Maan was lost till he heard about the last gift.

Pari : ye wala me Geet ke liye layi.

Maan looked at her surprised.

Pari : I like her. She is so sweet and my first friend here. Kal usne humara room bhi decorate kiya. Mene socha ye saree gift kar du usey. She will like it na?

Maan looked away, "I dunno"

Pari shook her head, "fine I will ask her. In fact abhi puchti hu"

And with that she ran to Geet's room. Maan knew now why he got carried away. He ran his hand back on his hair. It took only that much for her to enchant him again. And here he thought he was over her.

Pari knocked at Geet's room. There was no answer. She slowly opened the door as there was no lock. Geet was not in the room. Pari decided to leave the gift on her table with a note. Just as she was searching for a paper in her shelf, an old book fell down from the upper most rack. Pari took it from the ground when she found an envelope falling on the ground again. It was addressed to no one particular but titled as, my field trip!! She saw that it had a letter and some pictures in it. Call it the typical female intuition or anything but Pari suddenly concentrated only on the letter. Her heart started beating fast as if this was something that she needed to know. And so she read the letter.

Dear Maan

I know you would be mad at me that I sent your car back empty but kya karu... I know this would be another of your "hijack Geet" mission. But Maan plsss plsss this time I need to go. I have to film a documentary for my internals. I have already missed two chances when you took me to Pattaya, and Bali. This time I can't miss it or I will flunk big time. Sorry sorry sorry.. I won't mind a zero score in internals but they would send a note to dadima, you know! What would I tell her? And I know that even you don't want me to take my studies lighter. Just once, bas ek baar ke liye mujhe jaane dijiye. It's a week trip. I will finish it early and be back or you can take me wherever you want. I'm missing you already Maanu..umm don't make that face you know you will be always be my Maanuu

Apki

Mishty..

And then with trembling hands Pari took out the photos. She understood why the letter never reached Maan because he was off to her field trip location even before she reached there. It was a remote village in Rajasthan by the looks and ofcourse the name boards but the way they posed, made faces and smiled posing for the photos made it look nothing less than a Switzerland trip. It then dawned upon her how she always saw them glued and she could never see that. Intern? Sponsor? And she believed those stupid magazines who spread the word that Maan and Pari are an item!! She felt it all ridiculous. Her whole life had turned into a joke. And then the previous night flashed upon her. The desire in his eyes, the gentleness, the brutal masculine force and the love all was for his mishty!!! It was never ever meant for Pari!! She felt it was worse than rape. Her nose flared and her heart was filled with various emotions. She clutched one pic in which they were standing so close and happy. Other contents and the envelope fell on the ground and Pari ran outside to her room. Geet was coming with Amy towards her room when she saw Pari running away her eyes filled. Geet knew that something was not right. The moment she entered the room she knew what would have happened. She kept Amy on her bed and put the pillows beside her. She didn't know what she could do but all she wanted to do was talk to Pari. She couldn't let herself ruin Maan's life. He deserved all the happiness. She was ready to take all the pain and punishment that came on her way for it was she who broke his trust, who had lied to his face and who had accused him without any fault of his.

Meanwhile Pari pushed the door opened and marched towards Maan. Maan got up as he saw her in that state. He knew something was wrong and he feared it was not the worst but her eyes told him. It had the pain of a dream shattered cruelly and the guilt ate him. Pari came closer to him and slapped him right on his face. The heat he felt on his cheeks was nothing compared to what he felt in his heart. He saw his face in the mirror and saw a beast standing in front of him. He couldn't look at himself and hung his head low. Pari threw the picture that she held, at him.

Pari : Mishty!! Tumhari Mishty!!! Phir me kyu??? Jawab do Maan!

She held his collar with tears in her eyes, "Why me???"


Maan : Pari I'm..

She held her hand to stop him, "don't!! don't say a word Maan! But don't stop me today either!"

She walked out of her room and found Geet standing there her eyes filled. Pari looked at her and there was a moment of silence between them. Their eyes conveyed a lot more than their words. Geet could sense Pari's inner turmoil and Pari could feel her pain resonating in Geet's eyes. But today, Pari was the wife and Geet was the other woman in her husband's life.

Pari : tell me the truth, Geet! Who is that kid with you?

Geet nodded for a no, "nhi Pari..Maan ne aisa kuch bhi galat nhi kiya he jo tum logo ke rishtey ko hurt kare...Maan kabhi bhi tumhe.."

Pari :ENOUGH! Mere pati ke barey me tumhe mujhe batane ki zarurat nhi he! Aur tum hoti kaun ho Geet jo hum dono ke beech me aye?

Geet : nhi Pari! Tum galat soch rhi ho. Me kabhi tum logo ke beech nhi aana chahti. Me to bas tum dono ko khush dekhna chahti hu!

Pari smirked, "khush? Really? To phir ek kaam karo abhi aur isi waqt humari zindagi se bahar nikal jao.."

Geet stood there shocked,"P..Pari..abhi me kaha? Kaise?"

Pari couldn't bear this anymore. The mere sight of Geet ignited a fire inside her. The insult that Maan inflicted upon her was too much for her tender mind. It came out as hatred towards Geet. She dragged Geet all the way downstairs. Dadima, Maan, Annie, Vicky, NT, Dev and even the servants came out hearing the noise.

Pari : ab bhi khadi kyu ho? Tum hum dono ki khushiya chahti ho na? to niklo yeha se..NOW!

Dadi inteferred, "Pari ye sab kya he?"

Pari : anjaan mat baniye dadima! Apko to pata hoga

Dadi : hume sab pata he lekin Geet aur unki beti ko ise kaise is ghar se jaane de sakte he? Is pariwaar ke izzat ka kya hoga!

Pari : isey jaana hoga warna me chali jaungi! Phir apke izzat ko kuch nhi hoga?

Dadi : Pari! Aisi bhi kya dushmani he Geet se apki? Ap to jaanti he na usey. Wo kabhi apka haq nhi chinegi

Pari : ye hum teeno ke aapas ki baat he. Ap isme mat padiye dadi!

Pari's stern look silenced dadi. She knew that the wound Pari had was deeper than just the revelation of her husband's past. Maan stood upstairs watching all this.

Dadi saw him, "Maan rokiye apni biwi ko beta. Ye galat ho rha he!"

Pari : wo nhi bolenge dadima! Aj wo kuch bhi bolne ka haq kho chuke he..


Maan stood there still and cold. His guilt and hatred had silenced him completely. He knew that he had wronged Pari. But throwing Geet away! If that was all he wanted he could have done that earlier. Even after all that happened he never thought that a day would be possible in this world where there was no Geet in his life. Today he had to choose among his wife and...HER! But all this wouldn't have happened if she didn't start anything at the first place. And then he decided to keep quiet and let her pay for what she had done to herself and him.


Geet stared at him. His silence was eating her. She was ready to take all his hatred for the rest of her life but living in a world without him broke her existence. She stood there looking at him. Years ago she saw the whole mansion from the same spot and Maan yearned for her one look even if she was a little girl and today her gaze made him burn alive. He knew the pain and complaint in her eyes. They were not the cold and indifferent eyes that he saw the previous days. But today her pain and complaint wasn't enough to sooth him. He had pushed his boundaries far away and she had to stand outside it. Pari ordered the servants to pack all her things. Nakul gave Amy to Geet. She held her still looking dead. His silence had killed his Geet completely. Pari escorted Geet to the exit who walked like a zombie. Pammy followed them teary eyed. Pari handed some cash to Geet which fell from her hand as she was not even in her senses. Pari tired to stuck the notes forcefully but they kept falling except the hundred rupee note that Amy held tight in her little pinky fingers.

NT came there and stopped Pari, "oh common Pari, why r u spending your money? Waise bhi isne apne pyar ke naatak se kaafi kamaya hoga Maan se. aur dekho to wo bachi ko bhi abhi se train karke rakha he. Kaise paiso pe nazar he"

NT tried to snatch the hundred rupee note from Amy but Pari stopped her.

Pari : bachi he! Uski koi galti nhi he. Rulao mat ap usey

NT shrugged and left them. Pari looked at Geet for one last time. She felt all wrong somewhere but she was always a pampered child. She was never denied anything and this very first denial was so strong that she just can't accept it. She was the one who was supposed to live with Maan! She wanted Maan! He was her hero, her craze! No one had the right to deny her that. She stormed away without turning back. Pammy collected all Geet's luggage and waited for her in an auto at the gates of Khurana mansion. Geet held Amy tight and walked away as if nothing else mattered to her.


Pammy called out for her but she didn't hear anything. Pammy tried to run after her but the autodriver stopped her asking for his fare. She couldn't spot her anywhere once she settled the fare. All she was left with was Geet's bags. She sighed and took them to her home in the hope that she would come back to her once her mind was clear. Pammy waited and waited hours passed..a day, two, three, four,five days and still no Geet...She feared if something terribly wrong had happened to her little Geet.


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PRECAP : Geet begins a new life!! Maan and Pari too!!

Not a long update I know...but can't help. I'm still not done shifting my house . Will update next week!!

Edited by madhubala123 - 11 years ago
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Main maan ke bare mein kuch bhi Nahi bolungi...😡...geet se gussa hai...pari ne Kya kiya...



Pari is right...INFACT she should send maan out of the house...


Why is it always a girls fault...maan ne bhi toh geet se pyaar kiya...aur pics ko dekhne ke baad Woh sirf geet ko kyun saza derahi hai...usse shaadi karna ka Faisla toh maan ka tha na...talk toh dono haathon se hi bajti haina...


Geet ne Amy ke liye ye sab kiya...aur Kya mila usse...😭...tune mujhe rula diya...



Awesome update...



Do continue soon...I want present also...plz present aur past dono do...as major revelation is done...




Update soon😆
Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear
so emotional turmoil dear...
but after everything i dont wann MK to get forgiveness soon dear
he should try most and most dear
pls make it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -indu-






Main maan ke bare mein kuch bhi Nahi bolungi...😡...geet se gussa hai...pari ne Kya kiya...



Pari is right...INFACT she should send maan out of the house...


Why is it always a girls fault...maan ne bhi toh geet se pyaar kiya...aur pics ko dekhne ke baad Woh sirf geet ko kyun saza derahi hai...usse shaadi karna ka Faisla toh maan ka tha na...talk toh dono haathon se hi bajti haina...


Geet ne Amy ke liye ye sab kiya...aur Kya mila usse...😭...tune mujhe rula diya...



Awesome update...



Do continue soon...I want present also...plz present aur past dono do...as major revelation is done...




Update soon😆

Why is it always a girls fault...maan ne bhi toh geet se pyaar kiya...aur pics ko dekhne ke baad Woh sirf geet ko kyun saza derahi hai...usse shaadi karna ka Faisla toh maan ka tha na.

Pari is not anrgy about Maan's past. The reason for her anger is tht Maan is still living in that past. She can't tolerate that girl living in the same house with her husband. Pari's reaction is supposed to be that of a wife. She is not conecerned about anything else. Infact she doesn't know what exctly happened there. Geet told her in a subtle way that Maan has not cheated on her or else she would have left the house.

Geet ne Amy ke liye ye sab kiya...aur Kya mila usse...😭...tune mujhe rula diya... :ooo shorryyy 😳 next update me past complete krne ki koshish krungi. Phir fultu present aur present me Maan ko punishment. Pehle hi goli khake leta hua he bechara munda 😳 have some mercy on him!! 😆
thnx for the comments

Edited by madhubala123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i hate maan know
geet should never forgive maan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: keenu_kk

awesome dear

so emotional turmoil dear...
but after everything i dont wann MK to get forgiveness soon dear
he should try most and most dear
pls make it

thnx for the comments 😊
i knw these prts are all emotionl atyachaar wale. will get over soonnn. 😳
honestly i didn't xpect so much anti-Maan wave here but since everyone wants him to suffer I will lt him suffer as well. 😉 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hemangigazal

i hate maan know

geet should never forgive maan

poor Maan
plsss give him a chance!! 😳
thnx for the comment 😊
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Originally posted by: madhubala123

Why is it always a girls fault...maan ne bhi toh geet se pyaar kiya...aur pics ko dekhne ke baad Woh sirf geet ko kyun saza derahi hai...usse shaadi karna ka Faisla toh maan ka tha na.

Pari is not anrgy about Maan's past. The reason for her anger is tht Maan is still living in that past. She can't tolerate that girl living in the same house with her husband. Pari's reaction is supposed to be that of a wife. She is not conecerned about anything else. Infact she doesn't know what exctly happened there. Geet told her in a subtle way that Maan has not cheated on her or else she would have left the house.

Geet ne Amy ke liye ye sab kiya...aur Kya mila usse...😭...tune mujhe rula diya... :ooo shorryyy 😳 next update me past complete krne ki koshish krungi. Phir fultu present aur present me Maan ko punishment. Pehle hi goli khake leta hua he bechara munda 😳 have some mercy on him!! 😆
thnx for the comments




I agree but...agar geet Sach mein ussi ghar ki beti hoti toh Kya karti Woh...usse ghar se nikal deti...dadi bhi chup rahi...I am not liking her in this scenario...mana unhe kuch Nahi pata...Lekin geet ke liye unka pyaar kaha Gaya...ya phir Woh sab dikhava tha...




Jab unhe pata hai geet ka koi Nahi hai toh unhone bhi chod diya...geet should never forgive any one...geet ki galati hai...par ab Jo maan ne kiya USKE saamne yeh Chota Lange laga hai mujhe...



Aur main Taraas Nahi khaoonga maan par...bilkul bhi Nahi...he should be punished in the hard way possible...





Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago

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