MG FF THE DIVINE FLOWER : thread 2: PART 39 : page 141 17th may - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Want another update tonight ..phur ek saath long comnent dungi..
U said u r typing to mujhe kakach aagaya .. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Past part was awesome...
Loved it❤️
Sasha..tasha😡
god why can't this earth gulps them🤣
poor ami baby...
Don't worry about me Lis. I'm experienced in getting dumped by the Khuranas."
this was so painful...
twist...😲
it's better to be happy wala twist😡...
bcz can't see geet in pain more...
Update today only ...peeej😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
thnk you dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Past part was awesome...
Loved it❤️
Sasha..tasha😡
god why can't this earth gulps them🤣
poor ami baby...
Don't worry about me Lis. I'm experienced in getting dumped by the Khuranas."
this was so painful...
twist...😲
it's better to be happy wala twist😡...
bcz can't see geet in pain more...
Update today only ...peeej😃😳

hey mind reader 😃
thnk u for the comment 😊
god why can't this earth gulps them 😆 😆

it's better to be happy wala twist😡...

Edited by madhubala123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: madhubala123


hey mind reader😃
thnk u for the comment😊
god why can't this earth gulps them😆

it's better to be happy wala twist😡...

ur emoticon scaring me...
NO...it can't be sad twist......already so much pain in geet's life...
I can't take it any more😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
nice update

congrats for new thread
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
punishing geet in this ways in really bad..

when all the truth comes out maan will be the most ashamed...

really great update..

plz update often..

desperately waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
congrats for the new thread👏
poor ami..missing her super friend
geet came to know its some trick of sasha & tasha
twist...😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
amzing dear
twist
u mean vl mk knw abt ami
or abt geet lie
or he vl say her has GMSK
w8 fr next prt dear
update soon
bt if mk knw d truth also i think he should regret alot dear
he is married to pari nw
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
I bet you would ask for an update immediately after this one 😉
But I'm sorry I wont be updating till next week.. So you have to wait 😆

Also have included a VM in this part. Trust me I didn't see that till I wrote the part. But it seemed perfect for the situation.

PART 20

PRESENT:

Geet had no option but to serve. She walked slowly to table 7 and got the shock of her life. Maan, Ramona, Sasha, Ramond and some other important people were sitting on the table staring at her.

Geet smiled nervously.

Ramona (in hushed tones) : what are you doing here??

Meanwhile the others who didn't know Geet started asking for their orders. Geet stood there confused. Maan rolled his eyes and stood up.

Maan : I think all of us should try to taste each one of these except those who are allergic to salmonella and mushrooms.

The others laughed.

Maan : Geet pass them and take a seat

If Geet was shocked earlier, she wanted to faint now seeing the person helping her. Sasha wanted to cry, even after all those efforts Geet just managed to pull it off. She fumed in anger.

After the dinner, Geet stood in the balcony of the party hall thinking about the things that happened inside. Maan came there and stood next to her.

Geet : why did you help me?

Maan : why are you here?

Geet : ji?

Maan : the theme was changed. I thought they would inform you.

Geet : you mean I gate-crashed here? I knew it, ki kutti-kamini ne hi ye kiya hoga

Maan chuckled.

Geet : yeah, you love them don't you. You would because they don't leave any chance to get me into trouble

Maan : hmm but I'm bored.

Geet : bored?

Maan : of enjoying your troubles

Geet : ohh really?

Maan : I'm going back to India Geet, forever.

Geet stood still for a moment.

Geet :so, this is it?

Maan : yes! This is it, I quit.

Geet: forever...

Maan : you should be relieved

Geet: trust me I want to be.

They heard the music playing in the hall

Maan : they have started the Indian music. dance? (extended his hand in a gentle-man way)

She held his hand and they walked towards the dance-floor.

The song,

" Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena
Mere Dil Ki Raani Tum
Meri Khushiyon Ka Mausam
Mere Khwaabon Ki Taavir
Mere Sapanon Ki Tasveer
Bin Tere Kaisi Aas
Woh Jeet Ho Ya Haar
Tere Sang Hai Sab Kuchh
Tu Na Ho Toh Bekaar
Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena

Suni Khaali Raaten
Ruthi Feeki Baaten
Har Aahat Pe Chaaukun
Tujhko Harsu Dekhu
Tujhko Hardam Sochu
Tujhko Har Pal Chahu
Tere Bin Toh Jeevan Mera Hai Intezaar
Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena

Tere Saath Jiye Jo Pal
Kuchh Unse Nahi Badhkar
Tere Khaatir Saans Main Loon
Teri Khaatir Jeeta Hoon
Marne Ki Tamanna Bhi
Tere Saath Main Rakhta Hoon
Tu Hai Jeene Ki Wajah
Kar Mera Aitbaar
Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena
"

(if you really want to enjoy the next part please watch the VM) - all credit to VM maker 😊

Maaneet VM: Bine tere kya hai jeena


They danced swaying their hips in synch to the musics in each others arms. Maan's one hand was on her waist and the other entangled with her hand. Geet had her other hand resting on his shoulder. The music was passionate and they got lost into each others eyes. In the heat of the moment they forgot everything. The bitterness, the hatred was blurred as it was just the two souls of Maan and Geet and not their egos. They sneaked out to an empty corner.

Geet : you dance well, even now

Maan : you too.

Geet : you are not coming back, not even once??

Maan : no.. I don't want to waste my life on you. I want to live my own and move on.

Geet : good luck with that..

Maan : I hope you already have that..

Geet : yeah I have moved on and thats why I was in your arms dancing a few moments ago

Maan's eyes now looked at her lips and she bit them. Every time she did that, it turned him on. He nibbled slowly on her lower lip waiting for her to open up. She hesitated but couldn't refuse him. He was so earnest that in no time she forgot herself and was chewing on his lips letting him invade every corner inside her mouth.His body crushed her as he tried to get more and more from her rosy lips.


Sasha burned in anger as she saw Geet making out with Maan. She had the entire video of the scene.

Sasha(self-talk) : Geet, I never wanted a gossip to climb my ladder because you never tried to get anything that way. I even tried to save your name in front of Maan and then I got my reward. Maan shouted at me in front of everyone on the sets the other day. I took revenge by sending those pics to media. But this time you crossed all your limits by making out with Maan who wanted to date me and asked me out until you seduced him. So now, I'm going to cross my limits..

Unknown to this Maan and Geet were lost in kissing each other when Geet's phone rang.

They broke off and laughed awkwardly.

Geet : I have to get this one.

Maan turned around but waited for her.

Geet : ha Pinky..kya?

Pinky: Geet.me ...bol rhi hu

Geet: kaha? Kya hua..tu kaha se bol rhi he

Pinky : tujhe 2 ghante se try kr rhi hu Geet phone hi nhi lag rha...dekh ab meri baat dhyaan se sun theek he! Don't panic

Geet already panicking, "kya hua Pinky? Ami.. Ami theek to he

Pinky : Geet suno, Ami aj shaam ko bohat upset thi. She was crying and then jab me ayi to wo doorbell sunke she was running down the stairs and lost balance and slipped

Geet : NO!!! No no no...where is she?? Baat karao meri ussey abhi

Pinky : Geet wo theek ho jayegi.. don't worry, Lisa is here. tu abhi City Care hospital me a jao

Geet : Pinky Ami se meri baat karao ABHI!

Meanwhile Maan turned back as he heard Geet raising her voice.

Pinky : dekh Geet wo..Ami abhi ICCU me he..doctors are examining abhi kuch kaha nhi he, tu jaldi a jaa

Geet dropped the phone and was about to fall fainting when Maan held her.


Maan : Geet.. Geet kya hua..utho Geet..ankhe kholo..

One of the staff saw them and brought water . Maan sprinkled some water on Geet's face. She opened her eyes slowly.

Geet : mmmi..Ami..mujhe jaana he..abhi jaana he Maan sir..Ami seediyo se gir gayi usko chot lagi he pata nhi kaisi he mujhe abhi jaana he..meri bachi hospital me he aur me yaha party me...mujhe jaana he..

Maan s jaw tightened as Geet mentioned Ami but now he was matured enough to act human atleast. Somebody was in danger and he had to help atleast for Geet whom he had once loved.

Maan : Geet..calm down! tum aise kahi nhi ja rhi

Geet : mujhe abhi jaana he sir please..

Maan : It's ok. You can go. Mera matlab tha is halat me tum akeli nhi jaogi. Me drop kar dunga

He took her to the hospital in his car. Now and then Maan looked at her and all he found in her face was worry for her daughter. Ofcourse that was Geet, who loved so passionately that you can't help but love her back with the same passion. There was a time when all her love was for him and only him. He wondered how things ever drifted apart from them. How she changed all of a sudden and how they reached to the present situation.

The car pulled back in front of the City Care hospital. Geet ran inside madly and started blabbering to the receptionist in Hindi.

Maan signalled Geet to move back and enquired, "Can you tell us about the patient admitted just now umm.. one Ms. Ami..umm..

Geet : Amiya

Receptionist : last name please

Geet : Amiya Maan Singh Khurana!!!

A current passed through Maan when he heard that. But before he could react the receptionist replied, "yeah Amiya Maan Singh Khurana! (with a heavy accent) She is at the ICCU, first floor at the far end"

Geet ran to the elevators and went upstairs. Maan had not yet recovered from the shock of "Amiya Maan Singh Khurana". He decided it was best he stayed away from them or else he would hurt them and get hurt himself. He turned around and walked away.

As the elevator door opened Geet frantically ran towards the ICCU. She saw Lisa, her clothes drenched in blood, sitting on the waiting couch.

Geet: Lisa..thats my kid's blood? Oh God! You could have done this to me not her...where is she..mujhe milna he...I have to see her now!!!

Lisa : Calm down Geet. She is not in danger. The head injury is not at all deep. The docs have the scan reports.

Geet : can I see her then? Is she fine?

Lisa: listen to me Geet.. go and meet the doctor. They need to talk to you.

Geet ran downstairs. Maan didn't leave till then. He saw her running frantically and couldn't just leave her. He decided to go accompany her.

Inside the room,

Geet : How is my daughter? Why r you not letting me see her?

Doc: Listen Ms, she is out of any danger but... the kid is having a pelvic fracture which is unstable. A surgery is required ASAP or else she can be crippled for life and in case of infection it can lead to further complications.

Geet : No No no... give her the best treatment available. I will do watever it takes. Is this surgery complicated?

Doc : no we have the experts here. But it should be done immediately. It will take around 90 days for her recovery you see.. but she is young and strong. So we are hopeful that she will recover completely!

Geet : Thank you so much. That is really really so good to hear.

Doc : ok then, you have to pay 45,000$ for the surgery which is excluding the other expenses.

Geet(mumbling) : itney sarey paiso ka intezaam kaha se karungi me? Wo bhi itni jaldi..ab me

Maan : thats no problem doctor! You should start the procedures. I will pay right away.

Doc: ok, lets get to action then.

As they got into the elevator after paying the amount,

Geet : I will return your money.. kaise bhi karke..

Maan (snapped) : apney bachi ko mere naam dene se pehle sochna chahiye tha tumhe ye sab!

Geet : why are you concerned about her now?

Maan : It's not about her..it's you.. I don't want you in pain..samjhi tum!

Geet : me apko kabhi nhi samaj paungi

The elevator door opened and they got out. Lisa came running to know the details from Geet but she stopped in her tracks as she saw Maan. Maan on the other hand stood stunned... and finally whispered, " Mia?"
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PRECAP : Another twist 😲

Now You can give me longgg comments for both the updates 😃
Edited by madhubala123 - 11 years ago

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