THE LOCKET (11) - MG FF - New thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 112

Dev-Tara updates are growing on me too much. They make a typical Tom n Jerry couple and i absolutely love their updates sometimes even more than Maaneets. The morning drooling session was awesome n the scenes followed later were hilarious, specially him expanding his chest to break button of his shirt, i guess its time to forget Hrithik Roshan for Tara cos m sure Dev had forever decided to come in her dreams specially after today's scene. Liked cheek caressing part too n how Dev expressed one of his desires to her, liking how he is taking slow steps while expressing himself just to not make her uncomfortable. Dev-Geet's relationship is so pure, i so loved when he kind of scolded her for her carelessness and then got Kabir as her driver that too first seeing if he is capable enough or not. I loved this caring n protective brother side of Dev's and that definitely got my eyes watery.

Finally Tara is getting a feel of being loved, cherished, care, belongness by staying with Dev for so many days. He has already made his marked on her life with the small small things she pointed herself while missing him when he dint show up for dinner as promised n got frustrated. He had shown her the life in these days which she dreamt of daily. Agar abhi yeh haal hai how can she think she can actually live a life without him? And then the jealousy side kicked in n she grew annoyed n wore a nightie? And does she even realized she has already started trusing him? She gave her apartment's spare keys to him n for a girl like Tara its a huge thing to do. And she should also realized that he did show up despite being busy cos he himself cant miss the time he gets with her. And again that Tom-Jerry fight b/w them over her nightie was funny n in this she kind of expressed herself about being jealous too. Poor him he kept saying politely to her to go n change but who can win over an annoyed girl, but loved Dev's trick of his expressing his desires still keeping in check he doesnt break any of her conditions n got her change. They really make a phataka couple.

First of all thank u for chosing The Letter Scene of show for 50th update. That whole scene is one of my most favorite scenes of Maaneet and was shot beautifully. That whole episode still manages to give me goosebumps.

In spite of her never visting KM n his bedroom or blacony everything about it reminded him of her, this boy is loveable when he is crazy actually. I guess i really over estimated him, the man who was nervous even while writing his love letter n express everything he feels for her, i can now imagine how he must be feeling when they were in college for the last night they spend together. And those links and dialogues of 'the letter scene' just made the whole update all the more beautiful n dreamy. I m forced to keep aside my anger on Maan right now for the dialogues i have heard again. Its the same feeling i got while watching the actual on TV. I was super angry on Maan was for insulting Geet on Holi episode n wanted him to redeem n he did but he won me again with this same letter scene in show which is happening with me yet again. M bound to feel all those dialogues n with the he expressed his feelings for her n get myself drawned in it. Kudos to u for writing it so amazingly. (but yes after few days i might get back to my anger side again for him, lol cant help) But abhi ke liye m ready to forget n enjoyed the letter scene thoroughly to my heart's content. I dont know if anyone felt it but i always thought that the show wala Maan used to use 'Geet' a lot of times in fact in every lines either in start of it or in end Geet has to be mentioned. M sure u must have felt it too as u have written many of the original letter scene dialogues in this update. One thing i also notice was how he said that she is the only one going to be the decision maker in this relationship n he would accept it but he dint knew that the decision was made by none of them but fate n the beautiful letter which Geet would cry buckets after reading it for the feelings he has for her never reached her. I so hope that you dint made him delete that letter from him lappy cos i want Geet to read it whenever they are together, i so wanna see her expressions.

Does Maan even realized he just called Geet as perfect for him even after getting attention from the girls in London n still he believed that she dint love him or respect his feelings? This man is confusing me with his thoughts now. I know u said there should be no bashing of any characters other than Brij, Suraj, Paami n Summet but i cant help get angry on Maan here for his assumptions disease. M sure he is gonna be the first one to say think he doesnt deserve her, cos i remember how guilty he was when he 'assumed' that Geet was disgusted with him when that girl in Mussoorie bump into him and in real she was disgusted with the girl n not him. How unworthy he felt of Geet then, Would he even be able to forgive himself? Anyways coming to the rest update Sameera and Dave are a couple and m really upset with her parents for disowning her. First toh they never her the attention, care n love she needed n when she found it herself they disowned her just over some community problem? Sick mentally. Anyways m happy she is on a right track now all thanks to Dave n m sure his mother would provide her the warmth of a family n home where she can have a feel of belonging. Though m sad too for Maan that even in all this hustle bustle he feels left out n alone n misses her. Despite being angry on him i cant help but cry for him when till morning he kept his belief n stayed on steps refusing to go home. Out of all people Maan would be the last person i would want to see in pain or hurt n seeing this Maan is heart shattering n too painful. Its so weird to have both feelings for him at a same time, anger n pain. U confuse me, grrr. And m kinda angry on Adi, cant he speak about Pianky n Geet before? Geet couldnt do cos her purse was stolen with all his contacts numbers he gave her but couldnt Adi or Maan himself ask for her number from Geet? He wouldnt have been suffering so much then. Anyways m happy to see him happy knowing about the so called assumption bimaari he has n got to know the reason of her not coming to the party. The feel i got to see him all happy from sad by seeing his confusion being cleared was overwhelming sacchi. I loved this happy wala Maan who believes in his own saying 'true love never dies'

I loved Dadima but when she is on CID modes she is more cute n that gives more shades to her character. I truly enjoy reading her scenes. Awww the caring Dev haayeee kya jaata Tara ka if she too had rewarded him with a hug if not a kiss? Huh kanjoos kahiki. So Dadima saw her grandson having lunch with Tara n planned a mischievous plan to send them off to Mumbai. I love her, hope she would use some of her tricks on her other grandson once he return from London, i mean in present track.

If i talk about about the present track then Kabir should also be doing his MBA then why he dint tried finding a decent job n was still working in a car repair shop? He should have used his education n ceriticates n good results right? Though now he is a driver but still if he has studied so much he can easily get a decent job. Anyways m glad that with Geet n Megha's help Maithili was healing n was coming out of her past n living for herself n the ones who respected her love. And reading Megha's orphan story only one thing came to my mind, is she Poonam-Chandan's daughter? Forgetting that thought the rest of the story Megha said was kind of shocking, dint knew she loved him for so long n admired him secretly. Though the whole update related to Megha's story was too painful but the end made me worth it. FInally Kabir let his own guard down n accept her as she wanted to be. M so happy for Kabir-Megha n hope they stay like this all long. Both deserved to be happy n loved. And the song was perfecto.

What Tara is such a dumbo, haha even here she realized what she has done when she went to bed? She is such a big tubelight. Dev had made her come with him with his smartness but how will he be able to hold onto his desires?

What was that? Suraj burned? This is so sudden n he met a fate he once used on Tara? He tried to burn her once n now he was burnt himself. What goes around comes around. But still the update was kinda shocking n so this incident got Pari out of her obssession name Dev n finally accept that Dev-Tara are meant to be n not her and Dev. Well i hope though that she does come out of this shock n never trust any person blindly.

Even Suraj's father is dead? Okay if i really had not expect it or may be not this early n definitely not like this way. I genuinely think they got a very small punishment for all their actions. Wish they both had suffered a bit more to see how it feels when to be toutured n in pain. Hope Brij n Pammi are not going to be getting such small punishments. I want them to literally beg fortheir dead for all they had done to everyone. In all this m glad Tara got a mother in Dadima n Dadima got to see another side of Tara which is vulnerable n then again strong n professional.

Tough times makes people either come closer or go away n m glad Dev-Tara came more close. How both were restless n couldnt sleep n when finally he when he realized it was not of his needs but to go n support her, he dint thought for a moment n came to her n even here i love how he sincerely told her that once he come inside he wont be able to keep himself away from touching her. The respect he is showing for Tara is earning my respect for him in return. And those filling his features by touching him n he still controlling over his hands was so cute. Finally some of the villains of Dev-Tara story are no more. Bach gaye sirf Brij n Pammi n ussmei se Brij is dangerous for Geet too.

-Sanjana!

GEET-MAAN,DEV-TARA AND KABIR-MEGHA

I MUST SAY THOUGH PARI IS WRONG BUT SHE PLAYS AN IMPORTANT PART IN DEV-TARAS LOVE STORY BECAUSE OF THIS INCIDENT THEY BECAME MORE CLOSER THEN EVER

AND ALSO PARI REALISES THAT DEV IS NOT THE ONE FOR HER

KABIR AND MEGHA SORTED OUT THIER COMPLICATIONS BUT I FEEL BAD ABOUT HER KNOWING THE TRUTH OF HER LIFE,SHE IS A NICE GIRL

BUT I AM HAPPY TOO THAT ATLAST KABIR BREAKS HIS BARRIER AND TELLS HER THAT HE ALSO LOVES HER

I LOVED THE CID DAADI,I SEE THAT THE WHOLE KHURRANA FAMILY LOVED THE CID

BECAUSE OFTEN DEV USED TO SEE IT ON TV IN TARA HOUSE

BUT ATLAST SURAJ AND HIS FATHERS STORY ENDED MUCH TO TARAS RELIEF BUT THERE IS MORE FOR HER,THAT BRIJ AND HIS WIFE PAMMI

I HOPE SOON THEY WILL BE PUNISHED TOO

NOW COMING TO MAAN ,HE REALISES THAT GEET LOVES HIM AND ITS NOT HER FAULT TO NOT ATTEND THE PART

BUT THERE IS MORE THEY BOTH DONT KNOW THAT THE LETTER NEVER REACHES TO HER BECAUSE THE PURSE IS STOLEN

HOWEVER NOW WHEN MAAN WANTS TO COME BACK AS SOON AS POSSIBLE ,THEY WILL SURELY SORT OUT ALL THINGS BETWEEN THEM

AND I HOPE NOW THEY WILL SPEAK TO EACH OTHER AND CONFESS

LOVED ALL UPDATES IN THE THREAD

WAY TO GO AVI

Sorry for the late reply.

Though you have asked for comment in each thread, but I'm commenting in a single post hope it's fine with you.

Now coming to the story, its one of the most beautiful story i have read and the fineness you pen down the emotions and situations is just add more beauty to the story.

You have described each moments with transcendence, each character with great refinement, and every relations with eminence.

I will start with Savitri Khurana, she is the string which holds each relationship. An anchor to everyone. One or the other way she has act as an great moral support be it Maan or Dev, she has always been there to show the right path, be it Geet and Tara, she has been there as their mentor, be its Maithali.

Maan, the way you have shaped his character is commendable. Be its his grandma's grandson, mommy's little boy, Dev's elder brother, a great friend and companion. In each relations his silence and actions speaks louder. He is always there behind them if not besides them. The way he remembers his Dad's each word, and finding support in their words shows how he yearns for his parents and respect them.

Geet, is so simple and all she wish and dreams for a simple life. Be its her Daarji's guddi or a friend, her innocence speaks out loud.

Dev, after reading your fiction those who hate Dev will start to love him for what he is. He is a total charismatic. He finds a way to enjoy each moment in his life be however hard it is.

Naintara, she is a total enigma. Life is a great lesson from where one learns how to fight back. Her past life has taught her to fight back her fate and change it. She has only faced failure with each

relations, and it would be hard for her to allow any one enter her life.

Kabir, the helplessness has made him refugee and thus his hatred for rich people. The life has been tough for him due to his father.

Megha, all she want is love and a family which she can call it as hers.

Pari, innocent at its peak, always protected from the cruelties of the world.

Dadimaa-Maan-Dev -- As said DM is the string which holds them together, she has been always there as an lighthouse for her grandsons to show their way in the darkness of their lives. She has been the supporter when they wanted their parents, as an mentor in taking decision in the business, as friend to confine anything, as an matchmaker for her grandsons. She is their strength.

Maan-Dev -- One is always there for the other as an anchor to support. Maan has always been there for his brother to understand him, the emotional bonding they shares helps them understanding them what they want. I so love the way how you have described their relation. One is there always for the other whenever they needed be it as a brother or as a friend. One is ready to forgo his love for the

happiness for the other at the same time confront him when he notices that he is hitting other girl though it is misunderstanding.

Maan-Dev-Annie, though you have not showed much of them but the rakshabandhan moments were heart warming.

Maan-Geet -- Their silence is the key to their understanding. Their love is all about the feelings and emotions which their eyes conveys than any words. Words doesn't play any role when their eyes speaks the volume of love and trust they holds for the other. Though sometimes the silence ends in creating insecurities and misunderstanding but the very same silence helps them in understanding the situation. No matter what Maan is always there for Geet and solves all her problems without her knowledge. Be its for her Daarji, their college trip. His actions and silences speaks the amount of love he holds for him and her trust and silence speaks the amount of love she holds for him. Though I felt like smacking Maan's head for not understanding the situation and jumping in to conclusion, and for always bringing his ego between them, but later he realize it.

While reading, I wonder will this man will ever speak up and confess his feelings ??

I so love their first movie date and their dinner date.

There was no promises, no confession but both were waiting for the other, though one left with misunderstanding but still he lived with the hope to have her back in his life, while other was living on his word and holding his symbol which he gifted her.

You have very beautifully return their emotions, and feelings and their restlessness to know whether the other feels the same feelings.

Dev-Naintara -- Their love story is very intriguing and interesting one. Its not easy for Tara to trust one and open up herself after all the the failure she faced in her life. She relations has only left her with scare. Dev fighting with himself to understand his feelings and deciding to avoid her and later on realizing his love for Tara and finally confessing the same to her and her refusal. But Dev was always there for her as an moral support, to cage her from all the worries and danger. She denying him and fighting with herself so that he would be safe and finally at the verge of losing her life, her realization what place he holds in her life, and finally submitting herself in his arms. And deciding to go away from his life for his safety and his challenge for her and her conditions and his condition for the challenge.

There has always been openness in their relation. If Dev has acted as emotional support for Tara in her personal life, Naintara has always been an challenge and supporter to Dev in his professional life, which helps him doing and giving his best to the business. Both compliment each other in a fine way.

Dev-Geet -- Very lovely moments, and you have very beautifully described it. He sees his little sister in her.

NT-Geet -- Geet takes the place of the young sister in NT's life, though Tara doesn't show any emotions openly but she make sure that Geet is always safe and her innocence is not tarnished and she doesn't face any harshness as she faced. And the very same thought has made her confronting Dev.

Geet-NT-Dev -- Geet is the catalyst in their relationship. Both cares for her and want her happiness. Each can do anything to make other happy.

Pinky-Sujal -- A bother who wants only his sister's happiness and genuinely cares for her and got hold between his wife's demand and doing everything to make his wife happy and pleased. But still he didn't backoff from his brotherly duties and cares for his sister. Though Pinky misunderstand him at first but later she is trying to understand him with Geet's help.

Ad-Pinky -- Such a cute couple, may be Adi might have some problem which is why he is hesitating to talk to his parents.

Kabir-Maithli -- Their moments were heart touching one. Son, who is trying to find shelter for his mother and where he is trying to find his mother's culprit and with the fear whether his mother will attempt again to end her life. Left all alone by everyone to fight for him, and for his mother's destiny.

Kabir-Megha -- The uncertainty and insecurity in him made him push Megha away from his life whenever she tries to comes close to him. The admiration and crush she holds for him from her teenage later changing in to love for him and trying every time to get close to him and finally baring her heart out in front of him, and him baring out his fear and insecurity, her assurance and her trust in him. Finally him confessing his love for her and their submission to each other.

I so love their confession scene on the bank of the river, you have written beautifully especially when Megha says its him which matters to most.

Kabir-Geet -- The support which he yearns for, he got it from Geet. And he will always indebted to her for it.

Brij -- The slug. He is a complete notorious criminal.

Chandan-Poonam -- All he did is protecting her, and the only thing he got is pain in return. I feel so sorry for this man. This man really loves Poonam, hope one day Poonam will be able to see the goodness in himand will try to understand him. Both are in pain due to the pain caused by third person.

Dev-Chandan conversation was too good.

And the most poor guy in the story is Nakul, so bad always end up in trouble. So worried for his

Maan baba, but always end up facing his wrath .. lolz.

Dev n tara ka daily sype...lunch n night long talk👍🏼

Kabir n megha moments too good

Pari had helped suraj...finally suraj chapter closed

Dev n tara to mumbai😉

Above all i am fida over dadi's CID giri😃