A LIE OR A TRUTH OF LOVE.. MG SS FINAL PTS pg 39 nov 29 *COMPLETED* - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 12


AT KM
everybody was in the dining room.. When karan said in sheer concern ..
Karan : dad i think i should go once check on maan.. Kal bhi he was not sounding perfect... I am sure koi problem hai.. And waise bhi ye ladka sab kaam jald baazi me karta hai...
Raj didnt help but smile at karan and who made maan like this...
Raj : karan , and who is responsible for this.. Maan itna stubborn kyun hai...
Savitri devi : aap ne hi apne bhai ko bhigada hai karan.. Daadi said eyeing at karan.. Who didnt know where to hide. Every body was behind him and now his family was behind him..
Daadi : boliye sach hai na.. Naina ke jaane ke baad aapne hi maan ko sambhala tha.. Ise mat muh chupaiye karan.. Hame fakr hai ki aap hamare jaane ke baad bhi maan ko sambhallenge...
Karan came to his daadi and his little champ.. Aksh also came he was just like maan , naughty and had mostly all the traits of his chachu...
Karan : daadi, aap har do din me asi baten kyun karti hai.. Aapka ladla yahan nahi hai iska matlab ye nahi aap mujhe aur dad ko torture karen.. Now i am going.. Aapke maan ko wapas lane ki taiyaari jo karni hai..
Aksh hear this and jumped on his daada's lap...
Aksh : aksh bhi jaiya.. Chachu paas...
Karan rolled his eyes and looked at his wife who was just smiling seeing them.
Karan : ye lo ek aur maan bhakt...

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maan had been in a remorse since the day he had lost her... Yes, after all aisi bewakufi ke baad he expect geet to still come behind him was something that was not expected..
Maan was in his room , correcting the blue prints.. All these months he had got to know that his staff.. Ie KC staff are good for nothing.. So many mistakes...
Maan sighed and left the blue print on the table...
Maan : is se acha hai , ki construction thoda late ho jaye.. Maan you have to do something fast...
Meanwhile karan who was on mission maan wapas bulao.. Called him.. Thoughhe had been getting the reports of the work daily from his staff but still he wanted to talk to his brother..
Maan saw his cell phone falshing name BHAIYYA .. unknown to him he was relaxed knowing that like all the times his brother was there to help him..
Karan : hello maan..
Maan : bhaiyya, kaise hai aap...sab theek hai na..
Karan : i am fine maan.. Aur sab theek hai.. Now say me kb aa rahe ho.. You know ab i cant handle daadima more..
Maan : bhai.. He made a face .. Karan knew very well...
Karan : maan i am warning you.. Agar iss baar kuch ulta seedha kiya toh.. Aanken khole karna jo bhi karna hai.. Dont forget what sameera did.. Wo toh acha hai we got to know about her...
Maan nowadays dont get frsutaed or irritated with sam's name ...
Maan st : bhai galti toh phir ho gayi.. Is baar i dont know how to help myself... Aapko bol nahi sakta...karan saw maan lost and he knew what was going on i his mind...
Karan st : ye nahi sudrega...
Karan : dekh maan , wo jo bhi hai dil ki saaf honi chahiye...
Maan blurted out without thinking...
Maan : bhai , geet bahut achi hai... Par shayad ab der ho gayi hai...
Karan : hmmm..
Maan : bhai , can you sent someone here.. Ye blueprints ke hisab se agar puri construction ho gayi toh do saal bhi nahi tikegi ...
Karan : kya matlab hai... Saaf saaf bol...
Maan : structal flaws hai.. And the way hostel is designed dont you think college me hi hona chahiye.. I mean within univ.. Ye dus khos door ka kya matlab hai bhai..
Karan : ye kisne banaya hai... Maan stop the constrction right now...and do one thing just leave for chandigarh , wahan ek housing project chal raha hai.. Just go and inspect kitna constrction ho chuka hai.. Tab tak i will prepare new blue prints...
Waise kitni cons ho chuki hai...
Maan : univ building is completed bhai...
Karan : okk, i will look into this.. You just leave for chandigarh.. Dad cant come he is leaving for italy kal.. Warna tumhe nahi kehta..
Karan intentionally did , and now he just ordered maan... Maan having no option halted the work for three four days and left for the chandigarh...

Meanwhile karan was lookin to the blueprints..
Karan : ye blue prints maan ne hi banaye hai... Aur he is asking me kisne banaye the.. Bhagwaan give some sense to maan... Shukar hai he looked at it on the last time...

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Edited by Sffs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 13

it was a week that geet hadnt seen maan.. And now she was getting twitchy.. She doesnt know but why she wants maan , she wants to talk to him.. Annoy him.. Talk to him , fight with him but he was not there.. Infact he had stopped from coming there and geet daily just waits for him...
From last three days maan was in chandigarh well his condition was no less he just curse his big mouth for saying such an important matter in such a indecent way.. But least he knew that he had atleast conveyed his true feelings...
His heart that had actually recognised his true partner...
Maan : ye kya hai... Bhai aapki wajah se its been four days i havent seen her...
Poor he , he hadnt thought of ways for manofy his geet...
On the othe side geet was no less she was just spending time by cooking, her favorite pass time...
One day , actually the second day after maan's departure to chandigarh she went where the construction was going on and look that it was stopped when she asked about maan and work.. She had been informed that he had left.. Not coming from two days.. That actually took her breadth away...
Geet left to her house .. That day she was in her own guilt...
Geet : kya maan sach me chale gaye.. Babaji iska kya matlab hai...
She just slept or say tried to sleep but sleep was far way from her eyes ..
Geet st : agar pyar karte toh aise chale thodi na jate.. Jyada mat soch geet.. Wo bhi sabke jaise nikle... Dekh liya na sach geet.. Now just dont let anyone to play with your feelings...

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meanwhile at the hotel where maan was residing...
After having a big fight with his own feelings he had finally accepted that he feel something for get and that something was call LOVE.. He was in love with that village girl but she was now geet , his geet and he had almost lost her..
Maan was in the restraurent his meal had arrived but he hadnt touched it..
He was still in his thought process when he saw something , there was a couple a young one.. Just like him and his geet and the way the guy was proposing his lady love made him smile widely...
Girl finally accepted and finally it clicked his mind ..
Maan : daamit maan agar theek se propose nahi karoge toh wo haan kaise kahegi.. First you prove yourself , your love phir uski haan ka intzaar karna...
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it was chilly morning.. Maan was waiting for her.. Just like he used to.. But there was a new excitement... Everything that he wants.. He was on a new way his senses were all awake when he saw her figure she was drapped in pink.. A pink sweater her loose hair and swelled eyes... Geet sat and he noticed that today she was early..
Just after ten minutes she found someone's presence and he was on his knees the next second...
Maan : i know i am a jerk.. Agar aise koi shadi ke liye puchega toh shock lagega.. Geet i m really sorry for that day...
Her heart broke that instant thinking that might be a joke taht he played and she averted her eyes
maan : but now i am confessing to you again in a decent manner... I know i am not perfect.. I have been fell in love once.. And there's no confiramtion that can assure you that i will remain yours.. But i can just ask you one chance to trust me..
I have nevr felt thiis kind of feelings for anyone.. May be with all that was left behind was a mere attrction.. But without you i cant live.. Its hard to stay without thinking without you...
Will you give me a decent chance to be with you geet... I promise to be yours ...
Will you marry me geet.. And be mine forever in this lifetime and all lives...
Geet was just listening without a blink and she blinked twice ... Just to confirm his presence...
Geet touched his cheeks to assure herself...
Geet : me kya bolun...
Maan : jo tumhare dil me ho..
Geet : i want to be yours but with my family's consent and blessings from your family too...
Maan : hmmm...
He was not sure about his family but her he will ask her parents. Her mother ..
Maan : fine... So you dont have any problem...
Geet : no , but if you betray me then i can assure you that i will you with my bare hands...
Maan : i am all yours...
She just hug him accepting his proposal...

Maan the following week had asked her mother even he had answered rano's doubts.. But when they asked about his family he was mum..
Rano : beta aapke ghar walo ke ye shadi nahi ho payegi...
Maan : me janta hun auntiji , par kya aap mujh pe vishwas kar sakti hain, koi problem nahi hogi.. They will accept geet..
Rano : maan , hum aapke parivaar walon se ek baar milna chahte hain...
Maan : ji theek hain...

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Edited by Sffs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb updates. Glad that Geet told her mom everything rather than bottling up the emotion. Fab job and looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
lolz..geet was cursing maan for asking straightly to her
n her mother knows her well n have a gud opinion on maan..
finally maan talked 2 all his fam mem
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally he realized.. he is in wrong way asking Geet for marriage.. 😆 hope properly propose kare Geet ko.. Nice part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...Loved geet-Rano convo.❤️Loved the way geet is cursing maan is cute part😆😆waiting for the next update

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Posted: 11 years ago
my presence reading today suhana ji i am back to if finalyy
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story suhiii...maine abhi read ki ye story... maan ko sam ne dhokha diya n geet k papaji nai h...geet k papaji ka murder khuranas ne krwaya :O :O n geet ne apne papaji ka murder hote dekha tha...
maan n geet ki slowly slowly dosti ho gai...HP me koi nai jaanta k maan kaun h...maan ne geet se pucha k wo maan se shaadi kregi kya...rano ne geet ki baat sun li n ussse pata chal gaya k maan ne geet se shaaadi k liye pucha h...
waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful updates dear
maan has asked geet for marriage and geet is cursing him for confusing her though she is not angry or hurt with his proposal😊
geet's mom wants to meet maan. how will she react knowing he is a khurana
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurti30

beautiful updates dear

maan has asked geet for marriage and geet is cursing him for confusing her though she is not angry or hurt with his proposal😊
geet's mom wants to meet maan. how will she react knowing he is a khurana

thanks

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