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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Felt so sorry for maahi poor wee soul was so upset with her dad
Wonder what Maan will do now he's seen Priya ???
Will he try to talk to her or secretly find out more about her
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeh priya ka kya secret hain.. god.. Maan feeling restlessness.. when he saw her.. Party.. but mask party. but both hearts know each other pretty well .. waiting for next part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear!!
I just read the parts that i've missed..and I must say the story is progressing really well!!..I really loved the whole scene and it is very descriptive and well written.I am really curious to know about Priya ..is she related to the family or is she geet herself?!..And Maan is feeling restless..poor him!!..Hope we get to know the mystery of priya!..Please continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

thanks for update

very nice
maan is not geting what maahi wants to tel him
maan give priya lift as her car is not moving n feel that he know her but not able to her face as she cover it with dupatta due to greece on her face
but in party he follow her in party n see her face become stunn
only geet come on his lips


thanks dear

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

How will Maan react ??

Nice part


thanks dear
in this part u know about
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 7

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Dr. Sushant Singhania :- priya chalo mein tumhe apne friend se milvata hu

Priya : ji dad

Sushant : congratulation Mr. & Mrs. Gupta

Aapko pachsavi salgirah ki hardik subkamnaye

Mr. gupta : thanks yaar

Apni beti se nhi mil vaayenga

Sushnat : priya hum dono college friend hai

Priya : namestey Uncle

Mr. gupta : namestey bte

Tum hume apne chehra nhi dikayongi

Priya removed the mask...from far Maan following her... &

shocked to see her...

Only one name comes on his lips "Geet"

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Am leaving some dream, or she is really here... he pinch own self

& realize...no it's not a dream ...it's a reality...

In his mind many question arising, but now he only want to take

her in his arms...

He is going towards her, each step removing his sorrow, his pain

of years...

Before he got close to her, he sees someone taking her far from

him...

Dev : bhai chaliye hum bhi Mr. gupta ko wish kr dete hai

Maan : dev tum jaayo

Mujhe kuch kaam hai

Dev : bhai

Maan : dev go

*********

Maan see all around, but geet not seeing anywhere...

Maan : geet kaha ho tum

He reached to near Mr. gupta, firstly wish the couple then he try

to ask about her... in talk he knew about Dr. Sushant her father ...

how it's possible.. He talks about same person which am

asking...

Before he tries to ask more, his phone buzzed...

Maan : daadi am coming

*********

Before he going he check whole party hall, but she not seen

anywhere...

Half heartily he left the party...

Wo geet hi thi

Meri geet

Wo teri geet nhi thi

Tujhe dhoka huya hai

Meri aankhen dhoka nhi kha sakti

.

Par wo party se chli kyun gyi

aur apne ghar se, mujhse , mahi se durr kyun rhi

.

Maan wo teri geet hoti

Toh kya tujhse ..apni bachi se durr rhti

.

Mein iski wajh jaan ke rahunga

**********

Maan : daadi ab maahi ka fever kaisa hai

Daadi : humne usse medicine dedi hai

Ab wo so rhi hai

Maan kissed on mahi forehead...

Maan : daadi aap jaake ab aaram kijiye

Mein hu maahi ke pass

Daadi : bte aap pura din itni mehnat krte hai

Aap guest room mein so jaaiye

Hum hai mahi ke pass

Maan : daadi please

Aapki tabiyat waise thik nhi rhti

Daadi : hmm

**************

Through sources, maan try to find about geet... all guest lists

placed on table in front of him...but in this list geet name not

mentioned anywhere...

He remembered Mr. Gupta mention about Dr. sushant... geet

come in this party with him...

He hired detective for knows about Dr. Sushant ... now only Dr.

Sushant help him to reach near geet...

Two days passed out, now mahi is better... maan not want to

leave her alone one second, he take her with in office...

He reached office & sasha give all detail about project...

Sasha : Mk

MD of sanjivani wants to open more branches of sanjivani in delhi

or many places...

Issi ke regarding wo aapse milna chahte hai

Mk : meeting kitni der mein hai

Sasha : half an hour mein

Mk : ok

********

He sees from glasses, mahi happily playing with maid... he sit on

chair & pick the phone for dial to detective... but before this pinky

inform about client arriving...

Another side, now mahi feel bored playing same game... she

want to go outside...maid held her hand to take outside from

cabin...

Adi : mahi kaha ja rhi hai

Mahi : ba..ha..r

Maid : aap sahib ko bta dena

Mein mahi ko bahar tak leke jaa rhi ho

Adi : hmm

Tum jaayo

***********

Priya : dad mein kya karungi meeting mein

Sid hai na aapke sath

Dad : priya bte

Hum 10 new branches shuru karne jaa rhe hai india mein

Jisme 3 branch delhi mein hi hai

Tum pura accounts handle karongi

Jaise paris mein krti ho

Priya : hmm

Sid : priya hasne pe tax nhi lagta hai

Itna toh mujhe bhi pata hai

Priya : acha

Mujhe toh pata nhi tha

Trio reached to khurana construction...

Priya : dad hume itne bade project ke liye tender nikalna chaiye tha

Ase directly kissi bhi company se milna

Dad : priya bte

Mr. gupta ne recommend kiya tha Mr. khurana ka naam

Ek baar milne se kya jaata hai

Ydi hum unki planning ya budget thik nhi laga

Toh hum mna kar denge

Priya : Mr. khurana

Dad : hmm

why am feeling am hearing this surname before...

Priya tu kuch jyada soch rhi hai

Na jaane duniya mein kitni log honge

Jinka yhi surname honga

Sid : madam chale

Priya : hmm

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Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
geet/priya n maan coming face to face
will it help maan to find mystry
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one,so maan has saw her,and she is coming to kc,hope this time they will be meeting each other,and mahi being outside will get a chance to meet her,waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
priya n geet same...but wht happened to her...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting update! Well written! Maan sees Geet! He is shocked bt then she is gone! update soon

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