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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
waiting for the next part...
update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Thanky frds for loving this new season so much.

Few things i would like to mention before starting the chap. The incidents that took place were all pre-planned by dev-dadi-tara, trio so all of them are culprit. Second few places i have a taken a writer's liberty. Hope u all can understand.


Enjoy this chap...


Chap~2


'mishtel thulana bhy ale u angly bith me bhat habe i done?' a teary eyed geet asked him innocently.

'SLAP'

'You know why geet because you have not cleaned my room properly, now go at once and clean it properly, not a tinge of dirt should be there, otherwise i your punishment would be severe' glaring at her he pushed her away harshly on the floor.

And went away leaving a broken geet on the floor.

A haunted & devilish smirk made his way on his face as he locked the door and entered a room.

'Dev don't you think its enough, you have been terrifying the girl since past one month' dadima questioned him.

'Removing maan's mask from his face, he glared at it and threw it away'

'Dadima i will make sure she hates him to the core, because i know that maan will soon find her no matter what, but but but he would be devastated to learn about his poor geet's condition and you know what he won't be able to do anything at all, because he himself will be responsible for her wretched condition'

'And damn you dadi if you would have not stopped me that night, i would have ra** her making her hate maan singh khurana to the core'

'But nevertheless the tortures which i have given her the whole month in the form of maan is more than enough'

A devilish glint sparkled in his eyes.

'Dev you can do whatever you want, but i would never allow you to molest a girl physically' dadi warned him.

'Relax dadi i haven't done it yet, but don't you dare stop me from torturing her in the form of maan otherwise i won't be responsible for my actions' he snapped back at her.

'Didu plzzz sabe me, plzzz didu aahhh' geet cried out in pain as sharp pieces of glass stuck in her delicate hands.

Inspite of the pain she cleaned out the mess bearing the pain. The change in her mishtel thulana was unbearable for her. She was unable to understand him.

'She wanted her one month back mishtel thulana, not this cruel one'

' Her heart & soul were in immense pain much more than the physical pain she was bearing'

' His touch was worse it made her shiver in disgust, she couldn't understand why? The horrible night when he tried to abuse her physically is still fresh in her mind, if dadima would not have come in time she would have died, because she knew in her mind it was something horrible which was unbearable'

'This one month had broken her completely from inside and outside as well, though dadima saved her but she was completely indifferent to her why? she couldn't understand , she had dared to ask one time , but was rewarded with a slap instead, it made her cringe everytime when mishtel thulana slapped her, dragged her'

'As if some kind of a devilish monster had possessed his body, each and every blow by him was like a burning knife carving cruelly on her innocent heart'

'She tried to run away from this hell, but invain she was being chained and confined to a dark and small cellar'

'She was a broken princess who was trapped in a dark castle without her knight in shinning armour, because he had turned into a deadly cruel beast'

'Her innocent love was gradually turning into a disgusting painful hatred, but she couldn't hate him with her full heart, a slight hope was still lingering in her heart that may be he will change one day and pamper her like before but with each passing day it was fading away in the darkness breaking her heart into more and more pieces'

'He was not her mishtel thulana, no no no she couldn't process the words of hate for him as if everytime she tried to think or speak, her words would stuck in her tongue only'

'Common geet tell me you hate me, tell me i hate you mishtel thulana'

He always pushed her to the extreme to make her speak these words, but she couldn't she just couldn't, why? she didn't know.

'As if some unknown force was stopping her to speak those words'

'And every time she would just ask him Why?'

'Leaning on the cold floor her eyes turned droopy due to extreme emotional and physical torture. Her eyes , her cheeks were covered in heavy drops of water . The drops were constantly falling down from her eyes, she was unable to stop them, she didn't want them to stop, gradually sleep made its way to her and she drifted off to her dream land of her adorable mishtel thulana who used to love, cherish and pamper her, i lobe you mishtel thulana these words automatically came out from her mouth'

'GEEET'

Maan broke out from his nightmare.

Inside his private jet he was waiting eagerly to land in Greece.

His high professional secret detectives had informed him about his mishty's whereabouts. Some evidences were found about her in Greece. So now here he was ready to find out his jaan, his mishty.

'Mishty don't worry i am coming for you, just be a strong girl please mishty for me just for me , i love you from the core of my heart jaan'

'Mishtel thulana'

Geet's sleep was broken suddenly as if she heard her mishtel thulana saying i lobe you. It was comforting and relaxing. After a month she felt like this. She didn't understand why though, but unknowingly a small smile covered her lips.

'I lobe you too mishtel thulana, i lobe u shoo much'

With that she once again drifted back to sleep.


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Edited by Thesaurus - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
awww... poor baby geet... and that devil dev is such a cheap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
awesome update
dev is torturing geet too much😡
hope maan reaches to geet soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
awesome update
feeling bad for geet pagal gadha dev moron good for nothing
hope maaneet met soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
superb part...
loved it...
waiting for our angry wala MSK's arrival in greece...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
my poor baby
how can that b****** torture her
kill them both
dev and dadima
both
plzzz come soon maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Awww goodd .. So much emotional and pained after reading the update ... Geet gettin tortured by Dev since one month ,, cant imagine my cutie in such condition ...
I hate ths Dev to the core 😡😡 .. Now i just want Maan to find his Mishty very soon.. ..

, you have just totally changed the track of story but loving it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Superb update
Poor geet.
Dev and Dadi are so cruel.
How could they do this to geet
Hope maan comes their soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Aww...my poor geet baby...
Pls maan jaldi pauch jao na uske pas...
Dis chepo dev iski toh aise band bajana ki apna naam bhi bhool jaye...
So sad part...
Thank god daadi ne kuch accha kiya...matlb old evil witch mein dimag toh h...not molest a girl..
Ab jaldi update karna...
Pls don't make geet hate maan

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