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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#231

u are agifted writer Neha...very beautiful start...

Geet seems simple but has lost hope while Maan is an average guy who will probably have to mature and understand depth of his love and desire once he knoew her better...

i have a question. When i read ur prologue, it had a very beautiful but a sad song...it is about yearning and seperation. But then the note below was very positive.

I just hope u are not planning a surprise tragedy here for us...yearning, longing i can take...woh ishq hi kya jiske liye jalna na pade...but no tragedy please...

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akanshya

@kingofme

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#232

was really missing ur stories...but now gald that u started a new story on IF...

now coming to the story...

no words to describe it...loved the whole of it...

maan stalks geet and maan considers her a friend...

and later geet scold him...may b there migh b some other reason...

thn maansi knew y she was behaving like that...hmm...me too eager to know...

and dev sent maan to london and geet disheartened that maan dnt come...

hope maan comes back and meet geet soon..

thanks for the pm...

cont soon...

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Salina Parbin Mazumder

@Shalinaparbin

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Nice story dear... I just loved all parts ... :)

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mayashri

@mayashrisawant7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

both part was nice dear that mecdonld part was so nice n light usually aise maan ko kb dekha nai n jo tumne describe kiya usk bare me its awesome dear wo cahtbox bana hua tha n geet sun rai thi

n madm ko ab bura q lag raha he phele to khud hi dur jane bolti he n now khud hi tadp rahi he wa ye acha he pas rahe to mushkil dur rahe to muskil

thanks for update and pm dear

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

i hv been a slient reader of all ur ff
love thm but got the other two intehaa nd darmiyaan too late fr comment or like as it was d end
m so glad to read this ff of urs frm d start
really awesome updates :)
do cont soon

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abhayprsingh

@abhayprsingh

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

UPDATING????????😃

Edited by Appy - 11 years ago

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

hai dear...

days have turned so busy ki kya bataoo! kid is having exam... so uske peeche time poora nikal raha hain... thats y am not able to read any new... still trying to catch up the missed updates o the reading ffs... mera wait karna... i will be here in a day or two... pakka... and once i read, u know... tere peeche pad jaaoongi updates ke liye...😃

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

nice update ...seems geet past is painful...she doesnt believe in frindship...maan doesn't came she is missing him...

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

waiting for the next part...

update soon!!!!!

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neha512

@neha512

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
hai dear...

days have turned so busy ki kya bataoo! kid is having exam... so uske peeche time poora nikal raha hain... thats y am not able to read any new... still trying to catch up the missed updates o the reading ffs... mera wait karna... i will be here in a day or two... pakka... and once i read, u know... tere peeche pad jaaoongi updates ke liye...😃

i understand dear children exams means an exam for parents too 😆

koi na u study hindi english while i will wait for you write here 😃