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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Ye kya aaker fir gayab ho gai...
Khana banane gai kya...




nahi khana khaane 😛😆
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Posted: 12 years ago



Thank you so much for all likes & comments 😊



So now this FF has come to end.. I am so happy for all your support friends 😃


The Downpour... Part 98



Geet was alone in outhouse. She was getting bore, Maan memories were teasing her mind. She had not seen him after night and hasn't talked even. She wanted to meet him but it was not so easy. So thought to divert mind with something.

She came in mansion thinking would chat with Nakul or anyone there but mansion was empty. All servants were in their quarters.

"Now what to do'' she thought complaining to Babaji. She was leaving when her eyes travelled toward Maan's room. She smiled. She knew how he used to get anger when someone walked in his room without his permission. She found it good chance to sneak into there,

"Anyway he always sneaks into my room, now it's my chance!!''

She went up and stepped inside the room. Her mind felt good feeling the freshness of this familiar atmosphere. She closed door and thought to take a tour of room. She was feeling everything relates to her also, it was her place. She was not hesitated anymore. But she was shy to feel her authority on every single thing here, his everything was her' made her feel tickle in stomach.

She touched and stroked everything with her hands, like she was generating her authority on everything. Her fragrance was mingling in breeze, coming inside from opened window and blending into his scent. Her boredom vanished and she felt a new world here.

She was stood before his wardrobe, her hand hesitated to open it, what if he would shout on her. But suddenly she felt his hand over hers. She startled and turned back, found Maan.

"Why you are thinking Jaan, everything is yours''.. He brought lips near her ear, "Even me''

She felt thrilled. Maan held her both hands and made wardrobe open, hugging her from back.

"What you wanted to see Geet''

She smiled, shook head.

"I know what you wanted to do?''

She looked him confused.

"Like any typical wife you wanted to steal money from my wallet, right!'' he stolen eyes from her and smirked finding the very expected expression on her face.

"Hawww Maan, who told you wives steal money from their hubby's wallets?? And how can you say I will do same haan!!''

"Actually Geet I know you better than anyone, so I am sure you are going to do same after marriage!!''

She pushed him in anger, "No Mr. Khurana I will not! And anyway why should I when you himself said everything is mine. So keep it remember that now you would have to ask everything to me, not me to you!'' she spoke in attitude, crossed arms across chest.

Maan came and held her in hug from behind.

"When did I deny Geet, even if I do not posses anything but if you like it, I will start owning them only for you' , he kissed her cheek. Geet was very happy, but she shied,

"Sach!'

He nodded; she turned and hugged him tight kissing his cheek which Maan turned into a beautiful and gentle kiss.

They were in their own world when Maan got call from Adi; he wanted to talk about Asha. He said she had given her statement to police that what and how that incident happened.

She said, that after coming out from mansion that night she did not find any place to go. Everywhere she had fear for police and her gang members. Next early morning she thought to run away to another city, she was waiting for bus when heard police siren, she got scared. Though she did not know was it for her or not but she didn't want to take risk and escaped from there. She felt as every eye was on her while walking on road, she feared to take taxi, what if driver would recognize her. She was unable to think, unable to ask for any help, she did not know where to go and hide when suddenly she remember that police will search everywhere but not in Maan's place. If somehow she sneak in office there was many forbidden rooms where she could hide for couples of days. She knew about every corner of this building and so when guard was not much aware, she sneaked inside from back gate. She hid inside a cornered storeroom and locked it from inside.

That day when Maan and Geet came there she was out from room to get fresh when suddenly she felt presence of someone there, it was unusual because no one used to come at this time of morning, she got scared when found it was Maan. She tried to runs but collided with Geet and she chased her and finally got caught.

Maan asked about her condition which was stable yet. She was recovering but doctor said she was paralyzed in legs and don't know when she will be recovered fully.

"Whose call is this Maan' Geet asked looking him little tensed. Maan ended call with Adi and told her everything. Somewhere Geet felt pity for her family. She insisted Maan to close police involvement in this case. Anyway now Asha had lost the charm of life, now her family would have to suffer.

"Hm,, I will think about it..''

"Thank you Maan...'' she hugged him happily.

Afterward they spent beautiful time together feeding each other and teasing each other..






Precap : Wedding day 😳

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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Me first ... but not happy...
Two of our partners r not here to share it...
Any way chaddo..




loved Maaneet moments...
Waiting for Shaadi..


Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sooo sweet their talk
maaneet cute romance distrubed by adi call
fel pity for asha
wel jaisa bo gye waisa kato gye
awsum update
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was very short...but never mind until u r updating everyay...:)

feel pitty for asha...
Maan nd gget are awesome...
So wat's all maan is now geet's also...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update dear... But it short :( :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...🤗

doosron ka bura chahne walon ka yehi haal hota hai...

do continue
Edited by -indu- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Me first ... but not happy...
Two of our partners r not here to share it...
Any way chaddo..




loved Maaneet moments...
Waiting for Shaadi..












hmm sahi boli .. aaj kal dono ka thread suna hai ..

sabki yaad aati hai .. speclly lakshu

lily priya toh thore tym ke liye aati hai but no news of her



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Posted: 12 years ago



Hi Mona me back...
Kahan bhatak rahi ho..?? dikhti to Hari ho...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24




Hi Mona me back...
Kahan bhatak rahi ho..?? dikhti to Hari ho...😊




yahi hu .. bas thora lazy lazy hu 🥱

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