The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 30

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Posted: 12 years ago
ohhh after such a looong tym i got to read your update on the same day...and post my comment on the same page tooo...thanku sooo mcuh for updating now...
now comin to the update...
loved the part very very very much...am gonna read it once more n comment in as detail as possible my dear Avi 😊😊

uiii aam the 3rd person to comment😃😃

the relief that she felt by seeing him , she poured out everythng through that kiss..😊 glad that he was there to offer that to her...but wasnt the person who followed her , her bodyguard?? or was it someone else from her enemy side😲 ??

aww geet is missing maan a lott...ab aa bhi jaao maan babu...even am missing him...but enjjjoooying this track even in his absence😕 yeh kaise ho gaya...😕

aargh!!!! i hate this nam Brij even more now...😡😡 thanx to kabir...i never expected this will happen...thanku dear , for not harming her...but sad that no one saw brijs face..

lovvvd the way dev treated geet, lvvvd her calling him veerjji😊😊

and Dev is not as irresponsible as being portrayed or may be considered by tara,...

glad to see taras feelings for geet...😊

and then comes the bestesssttt and my favourite part of this update...

We are both crying copiously now when a stern voice from the door jolts me.

"Rule number 1 from the rule book Ms. Kapoor. You seem to have forgotten it. You need to give 30 days notice before leaving your job".

I had not realized that he had slept here overnight, on the sofa. He must have been in the balcony when I came in here. Gulping my fear I raise my eyes to meet the angry eyes of Dev Khurana. Looking at him I realize that he has heard everything I have said.

All hell was about to break lose.

just lovvvd this scene...am eager to watch the hell break lose...😆😆
angry Dev n a scared tara...would i get to watch it...will she be scared atleast a tiny bit...eaaagggeeerlyy waiting fr the next part...

and one more question, is maan back coming anytym soon???😳 no hurry , just curious to kno😊


Edited by honeygrape - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dev i love u..
kabir u are awesome..

tara just stay with Dev..

Brij u are the biggest B******😡😡😡...

superb update Avi..
Edited by mannu_minnie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank god Kabir saved Geet from brij... N also gave his car no.. to his police friend... Brij doesn't know connection btwn tara n Geet...Dev really cared for Geet as his lil sis...(Wish Maan could have seen this..) Tara.. how can ur leaving decision will make the change...?😡 Good that dev got to know everything abt her now.. n now he is in khurana angry mode.. not lover boy Dev..Nice update..
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Posted: 12 years ago

secret is out ... now dev will handle them no tension abt it...

Devtara ki gadi line tak ahi gayi...
that was Kabir...good he came for rescue,... now his life can be settled with Dev offering a job na...
y aren't Maan dev identical twins 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update👏
Continue soon
Thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
aww thanx for the wish dear
god that was lucky not just for geet but tara too
if she left him i swear i wouldnt spare her
pagal ho gayi hain kya
dont be silly and ruin your life
and let dev take care of it all
arrey agar pyaar karti hain toh itna toh bharosa rakhiye in parr
please dont do this to dev tara
geet are ya mad girl
had kabir not been there nothing would be left for maan
thank god he was there to save her
warna geet toh gayi thi
god that was roller coaster ride and still more to go
now that dev knows that she was about to leg it
he wont allow it
and he shouldnt let her get away either no way
its too dangerous for her to go away
hmmm maneet and babies what is that all about i wonder
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
hate that brij. first he ruined tara's life and now has his eyes on geet
thank god kabir was there to help her
finally dev came to know everything about suraj 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update 👏
Bloody Brij 😡
Thank God Kabir reached on time 😃
Tara is in Mushkil 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

ohhh after such a looong tym i got to read your update on the same day...and post my comment on the same page tooo...thanku sooo mcuh for updating now...

now comin to the update...
loved the part very very very much...am gonna read it once more n comment in as detail as possible my dear Avi 😊😊

uiii aam the 3rd person to comment😃😃

the relief that she felt by seeing him , she poured out everythng through that kiss..😊 glad that he was there to offer that to her...but wasnt the person who followed her , her bodyguard?? or was it someone else from her enemy side😲 ??

aww geet is missing maan a lott...ab aa bhi jaao maan babu...even am missing him...but enjjjoooying this track even in his absence😕 yeh kaise ho gaya...😕

aargh!!!! i hate this nam Brij even more now...😡😡 thanx to kabir...i never expected this will happen...thanku dear , for not harming her...but sad that no one saw brijs face..

lovvvd the way dev treated geet, lvvvd her calling him veerjji😊😊

and Dev is not as irresponsible as being portrayed or may be considered by tara,...

glad to see taras feelings for geet...😊

and then comes the bestesssttt and my favourite part of this update...

We are both crying copiously now when a stern voice from the door jolts me.

"Rule number 1 from the rule book Ms. Kapoor. You seem to have forgotten it. You need to give 30 days notice before leaving your job".

I had not realized that he had slept here overnight, on the sofa. He must have been in the balcony when I came in here. Gulping my fear I raise my eyes to meet the angry eyes of Dev Khurana. Looking at him I realize that he has heard everything I have said.

All hell was about to break lose.

just lovvvd this scene...am eager to watch the hell break lose...😆😆
angry Dev n a scared tara...would i get to watch it...will she be scared atleast a tiny bit...eaaagggeeerlyy waiting fr the next part...

and one more question, is maan back coming anytym soon???😳 no hurry , just curious to kno😊


Thanks Purvi🤗
Maan is coming back soon be assured. Couple of updates more from the past then in the present.
The whole story is being set up that way for his entry.
Dev Tara are not done by far. There is a surprise for readers in the next update for them. Hope you guys are up for it..😆 I am a bit nervous about it.
Your comment really made my day.🤗

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