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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
congrats on new the story
nice start
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22





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4 PMing me...😃
u r done ...👏👏
4 ur awessome work...
me just ...😛
lots of ...
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lov,❤️
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

ok but i'm scared here. I did a wiki and got the shock of a life! I knew the movie was something about this..you know but i'm only hopeful coz you said you have made changes. I hope you wont take Maan anywhere close to Cyril.. 😲 🤢

Anyway its your imagination but kudos to your effort for bringing out this bold topic! 👏

The beginning is interesting...

waiting for more

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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
d worst thing i could ever imagine is maan calling geet as "sister"😲


though nt in d real sense, i felt really uncomfortable


par jab wen dey started calling each other wid dier names, i was relieved



thanx a lot fr d pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I added you in my PM list, please PM me the update... It seems like unusual story...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I was shocked when Maan called Geet as sister...😆😉 Nice start..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrast on new story...loved da concept
woww geet Nurse 😊 n maan like her 😳

maan got discharge n they both update wit sepration
agin they met in restarent..n now they become frnd...😉

waiting for next..continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Damsel in distress Part 2



Maan met Geet.
She looked hot in her stylish attire.
He could'nt control himself.His eyes rolled over her.
G:Maan...
Maan came back to his senses.
M:You look very beautiful in this dress.
G:Thank you Maan.Actually this is the dress i bought with my first salary.So it's special to me.When ever I am happy I wear this.
M:Why are you happy today?
She smiled:Because you called me here.I felt happy when you called me.
M:Why?
G:I don't know.I feel happy with you.
He became happy.
M:Geet...let me tell something about myself.I am Maan Singh Khurana.My father's Khurana Constructions was in a loss.So I left my family business and decided to work outside.Now I work in a bank.My family is running because of my salary.We are just middle class people now.But I have enough money to look after you.
Geet stared at him:What do you mean?
M:I love you Geet.
Geet was very happy.Suddenly her face became dull.
G:I am Geet Handa.When I was small I lost my parents in an accident.My relatives also disowned me.I lived my life in an orphanage.I came here when I got a job in the hospital.Since then I am living in the hospital with Poonam.
Maan held her hand:Geet... I am staying alone in my apartment.Can you join me?Because I feel lonely.
She blushed.She nodded her head with a smile:Yes.
M:I am so happy Geet.
Geet caressed his face:I love you maan.
They shared a passionate eye lock.

Geet packed her bags.Poonam looked upset.
P:I am happy that finally you got a company.Somebody who loves you very much.But still I am sad that you are leaving me.You are the only friend I have.
Geet hugged her emotionally:Poonam,why are you sad?I am just leaving the hostel,not you.
Poonam smiled.

Geet shifted to Maan's apartment.The flat was not neat.
G:What is this?What a mess!
Geet cleaned the flat and arranged everything properly.
Maan was impressed:Since you are a nurse you are very health conscious and hygenic.
She smiled.
He cupped her face in his hands:Geet...this is our house.Our heaven.
She smiled.


Hmmm hmmm hmmm
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin
Teri ore chale

They shared a sweet eye lock.

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin
Teri ore chale
Mmm hey hey hey
Mmm ho ho ho...
He held her hand:Geet,shall we dance?
She smiled.



They danced.


Zara der main yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Zara der main yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Bheed main logon ki woh hai wahan
Aur pyaar ke mele mein akela
Itna hoon main yahan

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin
Teri ore chale
Mmm..mmm..mmm..mmm...
They danced as if there was no tomorrow.


Geet wore a night gown.Maan could'nt take his eyes off her.
M:Geet...you did'nt tell me where you are going to sleep.
G:I...
M:Actually you saw that there is only one bedroom here.So we both have to share the same room.
She became shy.He went towards her.She ran to the bedroom blushing.
He went near her passionately.

Shuru ho gayi kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na maani meri
His limbs pampered her.

Shuru ho gayi kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na maani meri
Hadd se bhi aage yeh guzar hi gaya
Khud bhi pareshaan hua
Aur mujhko bhi yeh kar gaya
She tasted sweet like the honey in the flower and became a butterfly and tasted the intoxicating honey.
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin
Teri ore chale(Kites).
The next morning Geet woke up from the bed blushing at her sleeping lover who gave her passionate love last night.

Geet served Breakfast.
M:Geet...You are too good at cooking.
G:Thank you Maan.In the orphanage I got training for cooking.
M:Geet...I am thinking of inviting my Boss Prakash sir here.He wanted to come here for a long time.I gave him different excuses to stop him from coming.Because if he comes here I have to give him food.I am not a good cook and I don't want to spend money to buy food from hotels.
G:So stingy.
M:But now I can invite him with confidence as you are there to cook good food for him.
G:Ok.Tomorrow you can call him for dinner.Tomorrow I have no night duty.I will be free in the evening.So I can cook peacefully.
M:Done.

The next day...
Prakash came.
Maan:Welcome Sir.
Prakash looked at Geet:So this is your beloved Geet?
Prakash and Geet blushed.
P:Geet...you know..Maan is like a friend for me though he is of my son's age.I have given him the freedom to say anything.And he always opens his mouth to praise you.He loves you a lot.
Geet smiled:I know how much Maan loves me.I understod the meaning of love from him.
Prakash smiled:You guys are lucky.Very few people get love.
G:Sir..your family?
Prakash's face became dull.
P:I got married at a very young age.Within 2 years my wife died in an accident.After that I am single.
Geet was shocked.She felt sad.
G:Sorry Sir.
P:It's ok.By the way Geet...did you recognize me?
Geet got confused:What?
P:Don't get tensed.I was once admitted in your hospital.You had taken injection for me.Here on my hand.
Geet was surprised:Really?Sorry,I vould'nt recall your face.
P:It's ok.You are seeing so many patients.How can you remember everyone?
G:But you recognised me Sir.
P:Ya.That's because even while taking injection you were calm.

Geet smiled.
M:That's a very pleasant surprise.You knew my Geet before.Anyways now you taste the dinner which she prepared.
Geet served dinner.
They ate it.
P:Awesome preparation Geet.Maan is lucky.He can have good food daily.My servants are hopeless.But I adjust.
Geet smiled simply.
Slowly slowly Prakash became a very good family friend of Maan-Geet.
Geet respect him a lot as he is very simple,down to earth man though he is very rich.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
nice update
so maan confessed his love to geet
nd now they r living together
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awww our maneet got together
and they confessed too in a way
well that was cute
so he is middle class
and she dont have family
so sad right
but now they have one another
cant wait for more

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