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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Read all parts its a intresting ss...but y Maan behave like a jerk...

Whether Maan is innocent or not will be revealed in d next part which will b posted 2morrow
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul


Whether Maan is innocent or not will be revealed in d next part which will b posted 2morrow

i am waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
both maan and partashk r same
just want 2 kill him
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lolz maaneet n pogam drunkd..maja ayega..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fascinating update. The story is getting marvelous with layered characters. Bad things happen to good people sometimes. Now Maan has been shown to have feet of clay. Few people can understand what they are capable of doing under the right circumstances. Geet is the one to pay the price for both Prakash and Maan. She will be broken, mentally and physically when she find out about Maan betrayal. A psychological quagmire for sure.Prakash is a psychopath, which simply means he can explain and reason ANY act he does. He lives in his own reality which is never true reality. Maan is now caught in a spider's web of lies. He has betrayed Geet and himself then aided a psychopath monster to destroy a pure soul.
There is no easy way out of muck and mire. I am looking forward to seeing how you spin this story dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Damsel in distress Part 5


This part is dedicated to crazyfanofdsdv as she is the only reader who has hope about Maan's innocence.Unfortunately all others misunderstood Maan and thought that he actually stooped so low for money.Maan is not perfect here.He made mistakes.But he is not cheap like you all thought.








Maan:Because in the course of time I fell in love with Geet.
Prakash was shocked:What?
M:Yes.Even when I spent my nights with her I had no love towards her.But I don't know how slowly slowly I started feeling for her.I realized that I cannot hand over her to you.
P:I thought so.That's why without waiting for you to hand over her to me I used her.
M:But again you tortured her.She was extremely weak after the rape.Still without bothering about her health you attacked her again.You were so brutal to an innocent girl.I can't forgive you for that.Poor Geet.She is a pure angel.
Prakash laughed:For you Geet is a pure Angel.But for me she is a seductress who is attractive and capable of seducing like a snake.
M:You are so cruel.
Prakash smiled:Lover boy's blood is boiling.I don't pity anyone.All I need is pleasure.
Maan controlled himself though he felt like punching him.
M:It's true that to earn money I agreed to be your pimp.Actually while taking money from you also I never had any bad intention to arrange girls for you.Because I can never stoop so low.I could never sin by providing girls to a brutal womaniser like you.
Prakash was burning with anger:That means you were fooling me by giving me false promise to arrange Geet for me.Your idea was to pretended to be loyal to me and then escape with her?
M:Yes.I fooled you for money.My idea was to get money from you and somehow escape when I get the full amount from you.Because I can never be a cheap pimp.And I don't regret fooling a monster like you.
Prakash roared:Maannn!
M:Don't shout you monster.My fate was to fall in love with Geet.So I decided to protect her from you.But fate was against us.So you could reach her easily though i tried my level best to save her from you.
Prakash chuckled:You thought of cheating me by keeping Geet away from me.But I took a step ahead and the fate was with me.I took The fate brought the seductive snake beauty like Geet to me.
M:But don't think fate will be always with you.Because I will be with my Geet always. Now I will protect her withiut closing my eyes even for a moment.I will not let you touch her again.I will not leave you simply for hurting my Geet.
Maan took a gun from his pocket.
Prakash laughed:Maan...our conversation has been recorded.Even if you kill me now my assistants will hand over the tape to Geet and she will understand that everything was pre-planned by me and her lover Maan.Then will you be able to live happily with her?She will hate you.She will never forgive you.
Maan was shocked.The gun fell down.
P:Now I will give you one more shock.If Geet is alive it can lead to danger.It's dangerous for me.So I have decided to kill Geet.
Maan was shocked.
Maan:Please don't kill Geet.
Prakash:I told you..Geet can be dangerous to me.
M:I beg you.I can do anything for you.But don't kill her.
P:Ok.But as I told you Geet's connection with the outside world is dangerous.So she should be left behind bars.
M:Means?
P:She should not see the outside world.You have to help me.
M:How?
Prakash told him something.
Maan felt like crying,because he has to cheat on his Geet to save her life.
M:Yes Sir.I will do that.
Prakash smiled.



Maan came back and packed bags.

Geet came:Maan,why are you packing bags?

M:Geet,you are right.Prakash is dangerous.He tried to threaten me.It's not safe to be here.We should leave soon.







G:Where?
M:To bangalore.We will go by train.I have booked tickets.
G:But Maan...
M:Geet...don't worry.I will take care of everything.
Geet was relieved.
They went to the railway station.Without her knowledge Maan put a packet in Geet's hand bag.
M:Geet,I am going to the toilet.
G:Ok.
Maan went.
After some time Police men came towards her.
They:We got an information that the girl in blue suit is from a drug mafia.
G:No Sir.I am not that person.It may be someone else.
They:We want to check your hand bag.
G:But...
They snatched the hand bag from her.They opened it.It had drug packets.Geet was shocked.
They:You look innocent.But this is your real face.You are under arrest.
She screamed:Nooo..
They dragged her to the Police jeep.She cried:Sir...believe me,I don't know how drugs came inside my bag.
Her words fell on their dead ears.
She looked around.
G:Maan!
That time Maan was standing behind the wall and looking at her secretly with his wet eyes.He wiped his eyes.
M:I am sorry Geet.Instead of helping you I cheated on you.But I had to do this to save your life.

Geet was put in the jail.She was beaten cruelly by the Lady Police.She cried a lot.
G:God,why I have to undergo all these?Maan...where are you?


Maan met Agam and Poonam.
P:I am sure that Prakash is behind all these.He is the only enemy Geet has.
A:It must be his men who put the drug pocket in her bag.But Geet did'nt even know it.
Maan felt guilty as he was the one who did that to Geet for Prakash.
M:Yes.It's Prakash's idea.But I want to save Geet.I want to bring her out.
P:But how Maan?This case will go for long.Prakash might play new games to make Geet stay in the jail permanently.
A:If we bribe the wardon we can get Geet out.
M:That's true.But money...
A:Don't worry about money.I have enough money.

Agam is a rich Business man.
Maan became happy:Thank you so much Agam.
P:But we need to be very careful Maan.It's a dangerous game.



M:Yes.

At night Maan bribed the Jail wardon and he opened the door of Geet's cell.
Geet was surprised to see Maan.She ran into his arms shedding tears.
G:Maan,somebody cheated us.I missed you.
M:Now I came to you.Come,we will escape.
They escaped from the prison.

Maan brought Geet to their flat where Poonam and Agam were sitting.
Geet hugged poonam and cried.
Agam:Maan,it's not safe to bring Geet here.Police can trace her easily.So you both stay in my guest house.
They all went to Agam's guest house.
Poonam:It's Prakash's trap for sure.
Geet wept:Why is that Prakash so cruel to me?First he hurt me physically and mentally.Now he is trying to put me in jail.
Poonam consoled Geet:Geet,be strong.We will find proof against Prakash and submit it to the court. Then they won't be able to punish you.Prakash will be jailed.Till then you need to hide yourself from the outside world.
G:But even if I prove myself innocent Prakash will escape.He is capable of that.Court cannot do anything to him.If he has to be punished I need to punish him.
They all were confused.
G:Till now I kept silent to have a peaceful life.Still he kept torturing me again and again.When I was on rest he raped me again.Now he trapped me in a drug case also.I can't forgive him.I want to punish him.
They were shocked to see the soft Geet's new face.
Maan held her hand:Yes Geet,we should not leave Prakash.We will kill him.
G:Don't take a hasty decision Maan.It's more dangerous.


Death will be an easy escape for him.He should not be killed that easily.


M:Then?
G:Wait and see.
M:Ok.I will be always with you Geet.
Poonam and Agam:We also.
Geet smiled with a strong determination.


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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
but i want maan to tell geet about his past
so that later there will be no misunderstanding between maaneet!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing updates 👏
Loved it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
may b maan is innocent...but he is sooo innocent dat he agreed to send geet to dat b******...he tried to do dat na...is he innocent whn he slept with her out of love...is it rt8...is it innocent?...any hw according to me he is guilty...again he done wrong...if he truly loves geet i think he should tell everything to geet whatever d consequences will b...coz wht he did is not forgivable...innocent or not...m not ready to forgive him...

awesome but painful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update but i cant see Maan as weaker like this... That jerk is playing with their lifes and Maan unable to do anything... Agr Agam nai hota to wo or torture hoti jail me... I rely felt bad and cant take it. Pls gave some more strength to Maan's char as well. Lets see what will Geet have in her mind.
And yes Maan in not innocent for me too... Usko apne pyar k liye ladna chahiye sachhai ko dabane k k liye usne Geet ko or torture hone dia... Pyar ka matlab hai apne Love k liye sehna naki usko takleef pahinchana... Agr maan itna hi pyar karta hai na Geet se to khud usko sari sacchai btata naki aise samjhote karta...
Sorry to say but Maan is stooping very low...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago

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