Downpour#10 (Thread 11 Link @ Pg 141)

Frequent Posters

-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

actually ye sab writers ki prob hoti hai .. story ek sage pe aane ke baad interest thora kam hone lagta hai likhne me .. aur srf romance dene me maza nahi aata jabtak koi turn na ho .. aur turn aane pe fir se continue karna parta hai .. isiliye end karna parta hai .. though i would try to give some maaneetilious parts before end

i understand the logic... but in some problem khatham ff tabhi khatham... i just need some more parts where we can see the prankster maan again... missng him... us asha ke chakkar main pranky maan kahi kho gaya

Quote

MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

i understand the logic... but in some problem khatham ff tabhi khatham... i just need some more parts where we can see the prankster maan again... missng him... us asha ke chakkar main pranky maan kahi kho gaya

uus pranky maan ke chakkar me mera dimaag kitna ghisa pata hai😆.. koi nhi ab toh wese b asha ki chuti aur dadi jor shor se maaneet ke piche pari hai.. dekhte h dono kase milte hai 😉

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

chloo ji ab mai chalti hu

Quote

-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites
chloo ji ab mai chalti hu

Quote

singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites
chloo ji ab mai chalti hu

Good Night Mona...

Quote

Piyu75

@Piyu75

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Wow love it. Good going Geet Asha deserved it

Quote

gill123

@gill123

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Finally geet ne asha ko nikal hi diya lovely waiting 4 next

Quote

saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Superb update. Aww the Maan and Geet moment was just too sweet and beautifully written. Loved Geet's plan where she throws out Asha, making her know that Maan as well as her friends know the truth and they will come after her. Fab job as always

Quote

sarayu_assr

@sarayu_assr

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Amazing update
lovely and cute romantic movements between maaneet
daring geet maan singh khurana in action

Quote

Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#480

Good one Geet... Dhinka-chika.. Asha is out of Manets life.. still she must get arrested as she is criminal & her parents should know what their girl had done..? Geet's mom - dad at km.. Nice update... 😊