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Pihu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey frnzzz Pihu here again...kal Janamashtmi hai..to ek OS likh rai hu is occassion pe...kal thoda busy rahungi..and Sapne Bhi Sach Hote Hain ka update kal evening ya parson (day after tomorrow) morning tak de dungi...

So Here it is...

CS:
Geet Maan Singh Khurana

Married to maan singh khurana. Residing in Mumbai with her sweet l'll family which consist of her, maan and his dadima. Very bubbly, full of life. Luvs her sweet l'll family very much.

Maan Singh Khurana

Very hot or rather say smoking hot, dashing, intelligent, smart. Married to Geet. His life. Cn make any one's life hell if the person tried to harm his family. At home very sweet. Loves gaining geet's attention and teasing her. Can't imagine his life without dadima and geet.

Dev Singhania

Married to naina. His love. Has a connenction with geet's past.

Naina Singhania: Married to dev.

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CS& Part-1: Pg 1: www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3716535#90923885

Part 2: Pg 2: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3716535&TPN=2

Edited by Parimishty - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely cs dear

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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely cs dearwaiting for os

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Pihu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Khurana Mansion:

7:00 A.M.

PART-1

A girl in her early 20's was doing aarti in temle of her house. After a while she completed her aarti and gave it to everyone in the house. She then went to dadima...touched her feet and took her blessing. Her dadima gave her blessing. After a while she asked dadima abt what preparation are required to be done for janamashtami...this is her first janamshtmi in this house.

Girl: Dadima aj janmashtmi hai...kya-2 tayari (preparations) karni hai bta dijiye main kar lungi...

Dadima: Geet bete (yes she is none other then geet) aap ko jyada kuch nai karna hai bs bhagwan ka bhog bana hai, bhagwan ko jhule mai baitha kai unki jhanki banani hai..aur aarti karni hai...aur haan ek akhand jyot jarur jaladena..usme bar-2 ghee daalte rehna taki wo raat 12 bje tak jalta rahe...phir raat ko 12 baje sab milkar bhagwan k janam ka utsav manaenge...aarti gaaenge aur vrat kholenge.

Geet: Ji dadima, theek hai..par dadima aap vrat ek hi shart pe rakhengi ki aapko dinbhar thodi-2 der m falhar khana hoga...

Dadima: Theek hai bete..lekin aap bhi pura din bhuki nai rhengi aapko b kuch na kuch falhar khate rehna hoga...

Geet: Ji dadima, m khati rahungi..m dadima jhanki ki tayari shuru karti hoon...jab jhanki poori ho jaegi uske baad bhog aur aarti kar dungi...

Dadi: Theek hai bete..aur hmari kuch madad chahiye ho to hame bula lijega..hum yehin baithe hain..

Geet: Theek hai dadi..

Geet left and started walking towards kitchen..and talking to herself..

Pta nai maan abi tk ready b hue honge ya nai...ek kam karti hu unki coffee leke jati hu..kam se kam pta to pad jaega ki ready hue ya nai and thoda tym unke sath baat bhi kar lungi nai to din bhar muh fhulake ghumte rahenge ki maine unhe tym nai diya...ye maan bhi na sach main kbhi-2 bilkul bachon ki tarah behave karte hain..chal geet jaldi se coffee leke ja room main...

At the same time Maan came after taking shower lukng very fresh and thinking ki dekhna bas m jab tak ready hounga itne main geet aa jaegi meri coffee leke...and the same happened...

They had l'll chat and after some time...geet got up and said to maan

Geet: Maan aap niche aa jaiye..dadima bhi niche hi hain...jab tak main bhagwan ki jhanki aur bhog ka kam kar rai hu tab tak aap unhe company de dijiye...

Maan: hmmm theek hai...tum chalo m aaya..

Geet: ok..

Maan: Geet...

Geet: Ji

Maan: u r lukng very beautiful today in this red saree...

Hearing a compliment from maan she blushed a l'll and mouthed him a thank you...
Maan self though: Oh! God...i love her sooo much...

Geet started preparation of jhanki...while doing preparations her thoughts went back in her past when she got married to dev and moved to banglore:

Flashback Start:

Geet and Dev got married and they moved to banglore:

She was very happy seeing her new house..she tought here her new life will start with her sweetu (dev). She was very excited about her new life. But all her excitment became vain when dev shouted on her for touching a heart shaped pillow which was placed on their bed. She didn't get what happened to him...why he shouted on her for touching a pillow.

Dev: Geet, get up..get up from the bed and leave that pillow...and i am saying it to you for the first and last time that don't you ever touch that pillow.

Geet: Why, Dev..?? What's in that pillow that u don't want me to touch it..and what will happen if i touch this pillow?

Dev: This is very special Pillow...Naina gifted me this pillow...

Geet: Naina..??

Dev: Yes, Naina...my love my everything. I don't want you to live in some dream world so here i want to make myself very clear that i married you just for the happiness of my mom. I was never interested in you. So don't expect from me to behave like a typical husband.

Geet: Dev what you r saying...plzz say it this is a joke. I love you Dev. I really love you.

Dev: Geet i am not in a mood of joke..ok..and jitna jaldi tum is sach ko apna lo utna acha hoga. N rahi baat luv ki to i always luvd naina..and will always luv her.

N yeah..this is my bedroom..and urs is the next one. So settle all ur things their..and don't interfere in my life..

Saying this Dev showed her way to another room...

as soon as geet entered into another bedroom...she broke down into cries...her every dream..her every hope shattered like glass pieces...she cried and cried whole day and slept on floor itself due to exhaution. She didn't had anything for the whole day and dev didn't even cared to ask.

Next day when she woke up..she decided to give their relation atleast a try...she decided that she will try sincerely for their relation and make it successful She decided that so what if Dev doesn't love me...but i love him..and my love will make him come back to me.

Next day Dev said to her:
Dev: Geet a maid will come and cook for you and you don't need to cook...for me behaving like a typical wife...and i'll hv my lunch and dinner at Naina's place so you dnt have to wry abt me..n haan ho sake to apne liye ek job dhoondh lena cz m tumhare financial expenses bear karne nai baitha hu..

Saying this, Dev left for office..and here geet again broke down..
Dev will leave early for office...have his all meals at Naina's place and after spending some quality times with Naina and would come late at home.

This was his routine...he was never available for geet... leave as husband...he was nt deir for her even as a friend or as human. Seeing this Geet's all hopes shattered and slowly-2 she was slipping in depression. She always used to thought...ki mujhme aisi kya kami hai ki Dev mujhse pyar nai karte.

After one month of their marriage...her MIL N FIL came to stay with them:

One day at the B.fst table:

Dev's Mom: Geet, Dev is getting frustrated even more then he was before marriage...i choose you for him becaus ei thought u r perfect for him...rather then Naina...it's ur duty to keep him happy...atleast try to fulfill ur duty.

Geet: Ji, Mummy ji...

Dev's Father: Geet tumahri mummy ji ne tum pe itna bharosa kar ke tumhari dev se shadi karvayi...kam se kam tum unka bharosa to mat todo aise...

Geet: Ji...

One day dev told her that he is going to file for divorce in the next moth. Hearing this cried and said too him

geet: Dev plzz aisa mat kijiye...aap hmare rishte to ek chance to dijiye...dev i really love u very much...

Dev: Geet ye rona-dhona band karo...n agr mujhse pyar karti ho to mera peecha chod do...mujhe is rishte se azad kar do...nai rehna chata main tumhare sath...

Saying this he left...n geet broke down..completely...

She decided to end her life...

She left the house and was walking on the road aimlessly...she was not even in her sense...her hair were in a mess state..her toes bleeding...tear stricken face...dried lips..that's how maan saw her lying unconcious on a road.

Actually maan was passing from that road...that's when he saw a crowd formed in a circular form and murmuring something among themselves...he thought may be some1 had met an accident and may be that person required help...so he get down from his car and entered into crowd and that's when he saw her.

He was shoked to see her in that state. A soft whisper came from his Lips...Geet..

His heart wrenched in pain seeing her lyk that...he always loved her from the college days...but he never confessed her knowing that her parent's were very orthodox and would never get her married in different caste. She was sharma and he is Khurana...

He immediately picked her up, placed her in his car and moved towards the hospital. Got her wounds dressed...doctor gave her saline..( i dunno knw 4 wat saline is given..m writing it just lykd dat)

After some time geet came in her senses...and that's when she saw her surrounding...and recognized it as Hospital...she thought what she is doing in hospital...and who brought her here...she rembered it correctly that she was walking on road aimlessly after her confrontation with dev..

As soon as she rembered dev's name..she broke down into loud sobs...and hearing her loud sobs maan immediately came out from washroom...and hold her...calmed her...and asked her what happened...what she was doing on road...and why she is in such a devasted state...

She saw maan and what she can see in his eyes was totally concern for her...

Seeing her so disturbed...he decided to divert her mind...and he talked with her on all the topics other than the reason for her condition..

Rest will post tommorrow...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

hi congrats on the OS! Awesum cs! Emotional update! Poor Maan n Geet! HAte Dev! Hw cld u! Geet ws ready to kill herself! Bt den Maan gt his Geet! update soon ! Well written n do pm! Thanks

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice part pihu liked it very much poor geet suffered alot because of dev

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Angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome CS and first part

waiting for the next update

please update soon

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geetmerly

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Posted: 11 years ago

so good dear

geet is back in old ways as she has found love in maan's house

pls contd.

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Pihu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-2

After few days...geet recovered fully due to maan's care and love...in these days geet completely forgot about Dev. And on the other side Dev didn't even bothered to know whereabouts of geet. Whether she is alive or not..??? He was happy in his own world with Naina...and he told her parents that geet left him and convinced them for Naina.

It was the day when geet was to be discharged from hospital...geet was thinking where she will go...cz she didn't want to go back to Dev...and she can't go to her parent's house..cz for them Geet is now the responsiblity of Dev & his family..

Maan was also in same dilemma..he was not getting where will geet go now after getting discharge from hospital..cz in all these days no one came to meet geet..

Maan decided to ask geet..

Maan: Ammm..Geet..i wanna ask you something..

Geet: Hmmm...

Maan: Geet where is your family..?? And why were you in that condition when i found u..?? Is there something wrong geet..?? U can tell me everything...trust me geet.

Geet: I trust u Maan..u wanna knw na where my family is..?? And why was i in such a devasted state.

Maan: Yes..!!

Geet: Then listen...and she told her everything from the first day of marriage till the day he found her on the road.

He couldn't believe that this much had happened with her. She was so bubbly and jolly when she was in college. There used to be spark in her eyes and always a smiled played on her lips. But now everything vanished. There was no spark in her eyes...only sadness and the mouth which was never quiet is now extremely quiet. Dark circle below her eyes. No smile on her lips.

Maan: Geet...does your family know abt all this..??

Geet: Yes..!! They knew abt Dev and his affair from Naina. But they didn't knew at the time of marriage that dev does not broke his connection with Naina. His parents told my parents at the time of marriage that Dev had broken all the connections from Naina. But once when my brother came to stay with us for few days he came to know to about dev's extra marital affair with Naina. Once Dev slapped me infront of my brother, but my brother didn't interfered. After that i talked to my parents..and told them every thing...instead of taking me away from Dev they asked me to live with him. They told me that if once kid will come in existence than Dev will come to me.

But how the kid would come in existence when we were never together. We never shared one bedroom leave the bed. After saying this geet broke down in front of Maan.

Geet: Tell me na Maan...am i this bad that own husband didn't even spared a glance at me. That my own parent's and my brother to whom i tied rakhi for sooo many years, who wowed to protect me didn't supported me and supported Dev. Bolo na Maan..kya main itni buri hoon.

Seeing Geet like this, he felt the corner of his eyes burning. He thought how could her parent's do this to her. He was also in pain seeing her geet in Pain.

Maan: Ssshhh!! Geet...please don't cry...!! You are not bad...but you are very good. You r very beautiful. Your heart is very beautiful. You know Dev don't know by letting you go from his life...he lost a gem. Geet plzz don't cry for the person who didn't valued you. Who didn't respected you.

Maan: Geet...meri ek baat manogi...?

Geet: Kya Maan..??

Maan: Tum mere sath mumbai chalo...mere ghar..tum mere sath rehna..

Geet: Maan main kaise aa sakti hu tumhare ghar..?? I mean...tumahri family kya sochegi...dadi kya sochengi..??

(Geet know Maan's family and vive-versa)

Maan: Dadi kuch nahi sochengi...tum to janti ho na dadi ko...wo tumse kitna pyar karti...wo to tumhe mujhse b jyada chahti hain...

Geet: But Maan, tab ki baat alag thi...ab situation kuch aur hai...i mean mujhe meri apni family and mere husband ne abnadon kar diya hai..

Maan: Geet agar tum ye soch rai ho na ki tumhare husban and tumhari family ne tumhe abandon kar diya hai...is wajah se tumhe dadi nai apnaengi...to tum galat soch rai ho...
Chalo ab...jaldi se fresh ho jao...n ye dress pehna lo...he said while handling a dress to her..jao jaldi m tab tak discharge ki formalities puri kar k aata hoon..

Geet: ok...

Maan left for completing the formalities and here geet went into washroom to get fresh. Both were lost in their thoughts.

Maan' thought: Main apni purani geet ko...apni collg wali geet ko wapas lakar rahunga..mumbai main rhegi to change of envt and change of place ki wajah se use acha lgega..main dadima ko bta deta hu ki main geet ko apne sath la rha hoon...unhe jan na bhi to tha geet ki cndtn k bare main..

Maan called dadima and told her everything.

Maan: Dadima main geet ko apne sath mumbai la raha hoon.

DM: aapne bilkul theek decision liya hai maan bete..

Chaliye bete aap ab geet k paas jaiye and unhe jyada deir akele mat chodiye ga..warna wo bar-2 apne past k bare m soch ti rahengi..

Maan: Theek Hai Dadima...

Maan cut the call and went towards geet's room

On the other hand geet was thinking of her past few days with Maan...she was thinking how he cared for her...how he trust her and asked her to come with him to Mumbai...she thanked god for sending Maan. She thought this is my re-birth. Re-birth of Geet only geet. Geet singhania died that day. And now this life belongs to maan. Now he is the owner of this life...and i'll always be Happy and will not remember my painful past memories. And dat dev he wante ddivorce from me na...theek hai main use divorce de dungi...cz main apni new life ki shuruwat sari purani kadvi yaddon ko khatam kar k karna chahti hoon. Thinking all this she got fresh-n-up and came out wearing the dress given by maan.

At the same time maan came.

Maan: Geet chalein..

Geet: Haan Maan..chalo..

Next day they reached mumbai...

As soon as they reached Km...dadi welcomed geet whole heartedly...

Dadi: aayie geet...bete..kaisi hain aap..??

Geet: M theek hu dadi aap kaisi hain..??

Dadi: Ham b theek hain geet bete...and hamne aapko baut miss kiya

Geet: Maine bhi dadi..

Maan: Ahem!! Ahme!! I thin dadi m bhi hoon yahan!! Ye kya aapko geet mil gyi to aap to mujhe bhool hi gyin..he said while making baby face..

Listening to is baby complaints dadi and geet couldn't stop themselves from smiling...😊

Dadi: Maan apko dekh k kaun kahega ki aap Maan Singh Khurana hain..MD of KC...who is lukng lyk a baby..compalning to his mother for gaining her attention...saying this she smiled and hearing this geet also smiled...but maan pouted his lips..and said..

Maan: Hhuunnhh..!! Udaiye aur udaiye mera mazak...aapko to aapki partner mil gyi na...aapki prank master...ab apko meri kya jarurat..saying this he turned his face to other side..

Seeing maan lyk this geet couldn't control her urge and pulled his cheek and said..

Geet: Awww!! Maan...u r lukng shooo cute...bilkul chote bbay ki tarah...and giggled...dadi also giggled along with geet...

Maan: Geet...mujhe cute mat kahao...meri personality ko suit nai karta and koi b Maan Singh khurana ko cute kehne ki himmat nai karta...

Geet: Hawww!! Maan main to darrr gyi..!! And waise bhi maine MSK ko cute kab kaha maine to mere friend ko cute kaha hai...😆

Dadi: Chaliye Geet aap k liye hamne maan ke room k samna wala room tyar karva diya hai...aap jake fresh ho jaiye...aur thoda rest kar lijiye...aur maan aap bhi apne room m jakar fresh hokar thoda rest kar lijiye...ohir lunch pe milte hain sab.

Geet & Maan: Theek hai dadi...

Both left for their room..and dadi also retired to her room...for time.

For lunch all 3 gathered on dining table...and had lunch...Lunch time was full of masti. Geet & Dadi team up to tease maan..

Days passed like this...with the care of maan and dadi...geet didn't even got a chance chance to think about her past with dev.

One day geet went to maan's room...

Maan: Are geet aao, baitho...

Geet: Maan actually mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi..

Maan: Haan bolo na geet,

Geet: ammm wo Maan..main Dev se divorce chahti hoon...wo actually main apni new life start kar chuki hoon...and main nai chahti ki meri new life main..mere past ki kuch bhi memories ho..

Maan: Geet tum divorce chahti ho na...theek hai...ham kal hi lawyer k paas chalenge..and tumhare divorce ke bare m baat karenge..ok...actualy main bhi kafi dino se tumse yehi baat karna chahta tha...but tumhe khush dekh ke hmesha reh jata...man nai karta tumse tumhare past k bare m kuch bhi baat karne ka...

Geet: Tum bhi na Maan...pehle baat kar lete to ab tk to proceedings bhi start ho gyi hoti. CHalo koi na...der se hi sahi but divorce to file ho jaega...

Maan: Geet...waise tumne kya socha hai apne future k bare m..?? I mean tum aage aur padhna chahti ho ya job karna chahti ho..??

Geet: Nai maan, mera man nai hai abi job ka..na hi aage studies ka...abi main ghar par hi theek hoon...dadi ki help bhi ho jati hai..unka man bhi lga rehta hai...

Maan: theek hai geet, jaisa tumhe theek lage...but m yehi kahunga..ki bhale hi tum kahin job nai kar rahin ya aage studies nai kar rahin...but be in touch with the latest happenings around u...ok.
Geet: ok..chalo ab main chalti hoon...bye..and good night and haan jaldi so jana...ye file se hi mat romance karte rehna raat bhar...😉

Maan: Geet...😡

Geet: gussa kyu ho rae ho kya galat kaha maine btao..?? Jab dekho tab in files m ghuse rehte ho jaise ye file nai balki tumhari biwi ho..

Maan: Geet...tumhara kuch nai ho sakta..and by the way r u feeling bad ki m tumse jyada importance apni files ko deta hoon..??

Geet: Maan mujhe kyu bura lagne laga..m tumhari gf ya wife thodi hu...

Maan murmurs: ho nai to kya...but bahut jald hone wali ho...

Geet: Kuch kaha tumne..??

Maan: nahin to..

Geet: Chalo gudnyt..

Maan: gudnyt..

Geet filed for divorce from dev...and soon their divorce proceeding started. Within 6 months geet got divorced from Dev.

Soon days started to paass...it was one such day when geet entered into her room to find a note from Maan:

Geet main tumse bahut dino se kuch kehna chahta tha...par sahi time ka wait kar rha tha...and aj wo time bhi aa gya. Tumhare liye maine ek dress select kar k gift box m pack kar k tumhare bed pe rkhi hai...tum aj wahi dress pehan k mujhse milne 8 bje xyz par pahunch jana. don't worry mera sabse trusted driver tumhe chod dega..and main tumse pure raste call pe connected rahunga. So be ready and come on time. Will be waiting for you at 8'o Clock.

Maan

Geet saw the box placed on her bed...she opened it and found beautiful frock suit..oh man!! She loved it to the core..

She quickly took a shower and got ready...

She reached the place...and awwwed by the decor...It was all so simple yet so classy..and away from the city's noise and sound...everything was as per the way she like.

Oh...boy!! As soon as maan saw her in his choice of dress...he just couldn't stop himself from drooling openly on her. She got concious seeing him gazing at her.

She softly called his name...Maan. Hearing his nmae he came back to his senses. He took her to the place where sitting arrangement was done...like a true gentlemen he pulled a chair for her..n asked her to be seated.

Geet: Maan ye sab arrangement..

Maan; Kya hua...tumhe pasand nai aya..?? Mujhe lga tha tumhe acha lgega..

Geet: Maan maine aise kab kaha ki mujhe arrangemnts pasand nai aye...mujhe to bahut pasand aaye...but m ye jaan na chahti hu ki ye sab arrangements kyu..?? Aj kuch special hai kya..?? Jahan tak mujhe yaad hai aj na to mera b'day hai and na hi tumhara..?? Tumhe koi bahut bdi deal mili hai..?? Btao na kya hua hai..??

Maan: Tum bolne dogi tab to btaunga na...😉

Hereing this geet mouth opened wide..

Maan: Acha haan is se pehle ki tum apne sherni mode pe aau..ye sab arrangements maine kis reason se kare hain baad m btaunga...surprise hai...pehle khana khao...and saying this he served food to geet and himselves...

Both had chit chat while having dinner...whenever geet would ask him in b/w dinner abt the reason for such arrangement...he would say baad main btaunga..suprise hai...

After dinner he ordered desert...for him he ordered a choclate mousse..and for geet he ordered choclate chip ice-cream. All the while having desert he was watching geet..how restless she is to know the reason behind the arrangement. And he was enjoying her restlessness.

After they finished the desert. Geet spoke

Geet: Maan plzzz ab to btado na...ap mujhse aur wait nai hota..

Maan: Ok..come with me..

He took geet to the pool side held her hand and made her sit in front of him and said:

Maan: He took a deep breath. Looked directly in her eyes and said i luv you geet...i really luv you from the college times. But main janta tha ki tumhare parents hmare rishte ko leke kabhi nai maanenge and tum unke against mai nai jaugi isliye maine tumse kabi kuch nai kaha. Chahta to m tumse tab bhi keh sakta tha jab main tumhe yahan mumbai laya tha...but tumhe shayad lagta ki main tumhe sympathy ke karan apna rha hoon...jo ki bilkul bhi sach nai hota. Isliye maine right time ka wait kiya. Geet main nai janta ki tum mere bare main kya feel karti ho...and agr tum mujhse pyar bhi nai kartin to bhi main tumhare liye puri lyf wait karne ko tayar hoon...but main tumse itna kehna chahoonga ki tum plzzz mere pyar ko tab hi accept karna agr tum mujhse pyar karti ho..isliye nai ki maine tumhari jaan bachai ya hmari friendship ki khatir...tum mere pyar ko mat accept karna.

All the while Geet was luking in his eyes and she could see sincierity in his every word.

Geet: Maan main nai janti ki main tumse pyar karti hoon ya nai. But i really lyk you as a person. And i really enjoy your company. With you around me i feel secure. I trust you blindly. After what Dev had done to me...it was only you upon whom i can rely. Maan main tumhe kho nai sakti...and tumhare sath main apni poori lyf spend kar sakti hoon. And trust me main ye isliye nai keh rai ki tumne meri jaan bachai ya hamri friendship ki wajah se.

Maan: So that means accept my proposal of becoming Mrs. MSK..??

Geet: Nai..

Maan:..??

Geet: Main Mrs. MSK nai balki Mrs Geet MSK ban ne ka propasal accept karti hu...

Hearing this Maan was over the moon...finally love of his life will be soon with him for forever...

After some time Maan drove back to Mansion and all the while he was talking with Geet normally...so as to make her feel comfortable. He don't want her to feel nervous...and don't want any kind of awkwardness in between them.

It was late night when they reached mansion. Dadima already retired to her room. So both and maan headed towards their respective room..before going to his room...maan planted a kiss on geet's forehead..and she gave him a gudnyt hug.

Next day after breakfast Maan told Dadima everything...and she was more happy then Maan. She always wanted Geet as Khurana Bahu. She blessed both of them. She quickly called pandit ji and asked him to come home...while she was waiting impatiently for panditji...with each passing second she was growing more impatient. While Maaneet rolled their eyes seeing their extra anxious dadi. Seeing her this much anxious they thought it was their marriage date to be fixed or her..😆

Finally dadi's wait got over..and pandit ji arrived. She gave him both their kundli's...and asked him to fix a nearest date for marriage...she wanted their marriage to take place asap. After some time pandit ji spoke and said that their are 2 muhurat's for their marriage...one is next day and other is after one moth. So dadi decided to fix their marriage after one moth. As much as she wanted their marriage to happen asap but at the same time she wanted them to enjoy their marriage. After one month their marriage took place. Geet was looking breath taking that day. When she was descending down the stairs Maan forgot to blink his eyes. Same was the case with geet. According to her Maan was looking so dashing that day...that all the girls prent in their marriage ceremony was ogling shamelessly at her would be husband and she was feeling like to burn all of them into ashes. On that day they became Maaneet from Maan & Geet.

Flashback ends

Her thoughts came to hault with the voice of DM. She came to see whether geet needs her help.

DM; Are wah..!! Geet bete appne to bahut achi jhanki sajayi hai...aj to aapke Krishna bhagwan aapse bade khush honge..

Geet: Sachi dadi...jhanki achi bani hai...

Dadi: Haan bete..bahut achi bani hai..acha btaiye aap ko kya help chahiye..

Geet: Kuch nai dadima...sab kuch ho gya..bas ab ye akhand jyot jala doon...phir sab phalihar khate hain...bhog aur panchamrat to main raat ko bana doongi...abhi to bhagwan ko doodh aur mishri ka bhog laga diya hai...

Dadima: Theek hai..

At dining table:

Maan: So, Krishna ji ki Meera...aapka sara kaam ho gya jhanki ka..

Geet: Haan Maan, sab ho gya...ab bas raat ko 12 bje k pehle panchamrat (made from 5 things...curd, honey, sugar, milk and ghee), sabudane ki kheer and bhog bana na hai...phir raat ko 12 bje bhog laga ke...aarti kar k vrat kholna hai...

Maan: Hmm...

At Night geet prepared all the things...and at 12 midnight all of them gathered in pooja ghar of mansion...geet placed all the things..and lighted diya and started singing Krishna Ji ki aarti...

Aarti Kunj Bihari Ki
Shri Girdhar Krishna Murari Ki

Gale Mein Baijanti Mala, Bajave Murali Madhur Bala
Shravan Mein Kundal Jhalakala, Nand Ke Anand Nandlala

Gagan Sam Ang Kanti Kali, Radhika Chamak Rahi Aali
Latan Mein Thadhe Banamali
Bhramar Si Alak, Kasturi Tilak, Chandra Si Jhalak
Lalit Chavi Shyama Pyari Ki
Shri Giradhar Krishnamuraari Ki

Aarti Kunj Bihari Ki
Shri Girdhar Krishna Murari Ki x 2

Kanakmay Mor Mukut Bilse, Devata Darsan Ko Tarse
Gagan So Suman Raasi Barse
Baje Murchang, Madhur Mridang, Gwaalin Sang
Atual Rati Gop Kumaari Ki
Shri Giradhar Krishna Murari Ki

Aarti Kunj Bihari Ki
Shri Girdhar Krishna Murari Ki x 2

Jahaan Te Pragat Bhayi Ganga, Kalush Kali Haarini Shri Ganga,
Smaran Te Hot Moh Bhanga
Basi Shiv Shish, Jataa Ke Biich, Harei Agh Kiich;
Charan Chhavi Shri Banvaari Ki.
Shri Giradhar Krishnamuraari Ki...

Aarti Kunj Bihari Ki
Shri Girdhar Krishna Murari Ki x 2

Chamakati Ujjawal Tat Renu, Baj Rahi Vrindavan Benu
Chahu Disi Gopi Gwaal Dhenu
Hansat Mridu Mand, Chandani Chandra, Katat Bhav Phand
Ter Sun Diin Bhikhaarii Kii
Shri Giradhar Krishnamuraari Ki

Aarti Kunj Bihari Ki
Shri Girdhar Krishna Murari Ki x 5

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After she did the aarti...she gave it to everybody. Then all moved to dining table to break their fast. At Dining Table

Dadi: Geet sahi main...is baar ki janamashtmi bahut achi rahi...itna maza hme kafi salon baad aaya...god bless u beta..

Maan: I agree with dadi...sahi main geet..aj kafi saalon baad janamashtmi pe itna maza aaya hai...

Geet: Thnx dadi and Maan...

They completed their food and retired to their room..

Geet: Maan

Maan: Hmmm...

Geet moved close to him and whispered in his ear: I love you..

Maan stood their rooted in his place...

This is the first time geet said him ILU...

Yeah!! He always knew that she loved him...but its always her action that spoke...she never said to him...

Oh..!! This was the best janamashtmi...

And they lived Happily ever after...Maan by his love erased all the painful memories of Dev from geet's heart nad mind. On next janamashtmi...geet gave birth to a baby boy at exact 12'o clock. They named him Krishna...as he was born on janamasthmi at exact 12'o clock.

The End..

Edited by Parimishty - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hi thanks 4 da pm! Read Pasrt 1 n commented ! Part 2 was fab! Past well incorporated! Geet confesses ! Maan elated! Awesum end! Well written! Happy Janmastami! 😊

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