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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1001

Originally posted by: Trisha4evr
u ended it😒

so soon...😔

n no maan geet millap...

sad ending??

awesome update... love the confession part...

omg i still cant believe u ended it!!!!

do we get a sequel???

i also have same ques...pls pls think about it😊😊😳

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1002

Originally posted by: dqno1

If Only You Saw Me

Love, like the red rose on your breakfast tray
as we decide to make this a sunday in bed again
Me with my papers, you with the book you are reading
your head on my belly, your face towards me
because you can't bear my sight away from your eyes.

We could have had that
If Only You Saw Me

Passion, which grows ever stronger
like our breaths
when we see each other
from across the room
Not knowing where I end and you begin

We could have had that
If Only You Saw Me

Contentment, watching the flames glow brighter in the fireplace.
Wrapped in each other's arms in that blue and white comforter again
Growing old together.

We could have had that
If Only You Saw Me

I watch you
walk away from me
every cell in my body seeks
just one look for me
just one last sip of happiness from your lips
just one decision that would have made me complete

If Only You Saw Me

👏

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#1003

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

i also have same ques...pls pls think about it😊😊😳

I am signing up people for an epilogue...

What say guys?

Shouldn't Mari give us an epilogue at least?

😃Pretty please...

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1004

brilliant part. Didn't expect this ending but still liked the story.👏

Edited by fict - 11 years ago

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#1005

brilliantly written with superb poem

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#1006

What a confession!!!

His heartfelt feelings, each word soulfully uttered and touching ones heart deep into the soul😳

Only to be ruthlessly rejected

The love filled heart shattered in matter of few seconds🥺

Oh! Geet what did u do? Why?????😭

I could well relate to his pain and his outburst

It seems MSK in making

Geet had a fair idea of his feelings she could have done damage control much earlier saving him from this pain😕

which will always hurt him and haunt her😒

They part ways!

Maan tries to seek solace at his secret place where he remembers his convo with his Dad and how he had advised him that we should take each rejection and failure in our stride work more on it😊

But the pain, hurt, the feeling of rejection and his ego overpowers his heart

Geet guilty trying to reach out to Maan but

Maan not giving in😒

So painful Maari the hostel and airport scene just brought tears in my eyes too🥺

But just beautifully penned down

Loved it though hated it too😵

Can't see them in pain 😭

Though I have a bonus to jump over to Wired Hearts and continue😳

A new beginning

😊

Red face 😡 in advance u better give a happywala story this time warna...

🤗

Edited by heytal - 11 years ago

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humeraa

@humeraa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1007

Beautiful Story👏👏👏

...But no sad ending plzzz😕😕

I wish for an epilouge if possible😭😭😭

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1008

it was actually heart breaking like maan's... though geet isnt to be blamed fully but yes somewhere she knew & she should have tried to get her point clear... & maan i can actually feel his pain of a broken heart d girl of his dream from years has rejected him & yet he cant hate her or forget...
i totally iagree wid title & d poem at last dat maybe if she had turned & seen him it would have been a different ending... but d way u made us feel every emotions of each characters was fabulous... & as much i may sound greedy can i hope for season2 of dis amazing & emotional story of our MAANEET...