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Posted: 11 years ago
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Will be giving update now...
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Part 13- The Unconventional Date

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Geet held the letter close to her heart. Her breathing rate increased slowly, with her head beginning to feel light. She did not know what to expect. Unknowingly to Geet she had been gleaming in that position for a long time.😳Laila crept closely behind her and grabbed the letter from her, causing Geet to shriek loudly.

Laila and Lizzie tossed the letter in the air whilst making smooching noises 🤣 Laila tagged Geet's tresses and tickled her whilst she dropped on the floor. Lizzie yelped with delight as she opened up the letter. Her eyes coaxed for Geet's approval, but cleverly Geet snatched the letter out of the Lizzie hand and trembled towards the kitchen. Laila stamped out of the room, and clung onto Geet's back, causing both friends to tumble and lay across the floor in a pinned position 😆 😆 Geet in a panic scrunched the letter and place it in her mouth. It felt ridiculous, she was chewing like a cow 😆

The girls grin soon turned mischievous. With one loud scream Lizzie soaked Geet freezing water. Geet waddled like a penguin following several shrieks 😃 " What will I do now? I look horrible and my hair did drenched. I'm definitely not going now Geet slumped towards her room with the girls trailing behind. Laila tapped Lizzie and both the girls held their ears, followed by drooping eyes. Laila bounced on the bed and smiled at Geet. " Are we not sisters, I understand that you may not like it but it was just friendly banter. I swear me and Liz will get you ready and trust me you will look smoking. Right Liz????"
Lizzie was busy chewing her hair 😆 " Yeah my dad said I am very beautiful too? Right I think so too!!" Laila rolled her eyes and grinned at Geet causing her too break into a ripple of laughter.

The next hour was intense. Lizzie was in charge of selecting the dress, Laila had inferred it was the most challenging it task for Lizzie's ability 😆. She gently placed a black dress with lace on the bed. Her hair was soon curled into loose ringlets,, with smoky eyes and ruby lips☺️ Geet resembled that diamant chandelier that caught the attention of every individual. She was just mesmerising. Laila and Lizzie snapped countless pictures with the odd faffing about. This was a facebook moment!!!!!!!!!! As the minutes ticked by Geet became more restless with her palms becoming more cold than ever. The magical moment was interrupted with Laila's phone ringing uncontrollably, she silently pecked Geet on her lips and silently assured her before leaving the room, in a hurry.

" Riyu, I'm sorry, I wish I could have picked up quicker. Actually I was in a serious dilemma, you know my room mate she had a date with this amazing hot hunk so I was busy getting her ready!!!! You wont believe it she looks smoking😉😉😉. You know if I wasn't secure I would be scared if you left me for her😎" Laila looked back and winked at Geet with joy. The name Riyu sounded so familiar that it created uneasiness within Geet. Geet grabbed her sketch pad and paced outside towards the gate.


A couple of flats down Maan raised his thumping music. He was moving ahead with Emma. in his mind what was wrong about that. He was hot and so was she.😃😆 Her sultry voice excited him somehow☺️. He causally stripped down, exposing his rock hard abs. He moved to grooming his stubble, leaving his jaw defined more than ever. He sprayed the water across his body, the ripples of the water clung onto him☺️ He was more nude than ever and it felt good to take care of himself He replaced his causal boxers with Calvin Klein fitting ones. He was more confident than ever, he had it all pre planned. Maan glided effortlessly towards his wardrobe selecting a chic black suede suit. He placed every garment carefully on his lean body. The sensation Hugo Boss parfum was lathered across his body. He was ready to wine and dine.😉 Maan walked towards the door when he he retraced his steps, he saw a gorgeous man mirroring his image😳. Maan grin grew wider as he realised that he looked hot!!!!!!!!!☺️

Geet skipped gently towards the gate to see a lean figure standing towards the gate. Her hands gripped the person waist,and travelled towards his chest.😲😛 She placed her head on his back, leading her to infuse his scent. "Will you not look at me Pierre, I want you to see me first? Did I dress correctly?" All of a sudden her name was echoed by a familiar in the distance. Geet peered slowly to see Pierre pacing towards her with a rose in his hand😆 " Hey I would need you to stop hugging this stranger and look at me so I could tell you?" Pierre placed a encouraging gesture towards Geet who was literally gob smacked.🤣🤣🤣
Geet worryingly started to overload her apology towards the stranger, till he turned around. Her jaw dropped when she recognised him😲. She had been hugging maan, how had not she not realised. 😆 With a enlarged smirk he spoke " No need to worry Geet, I'm sure your friend would not mind. Next time make sure you look." With a wink and a loud chuckle he walked towards a mysterious red haired girl.

With great dismay Geet looked on how he delicately gripped her waist. This action of his hurt unknowingly. Green eyed Geet 😆😆 was interrupted by Pierre's silent touch. He placed a gentle peck on her hand and sequentially twirled her around. Geet with utter admiration accepted the rose and guided Pierre towards their perfect date.

Part 2 updated soon...

Edited by x-affy-x - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
awesome update
geet huged maan thinking him as pirrie😆😆😆
maan's holding someone hurted geet, hmmm😉
update soon next part!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cool.! I love them both...
She misunderstood Maan to be Pierre...well who cares as long as we got some Maaneet moments 🤣
Jeez, Maan is so mysterious...

Wailing to read more Twinnie ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

awesome update

geet huged maan thinking him as pirrie😆😆😆
maan's holding someone hurted geet, hmmm😉
update soon next part!!!!!!


Thank you for your wonderful comments 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -AnushaGurtian-

Cool.! I love them both...

She misunderstood Maan to be Pierre...well who cares as long as we got some Maaneet moments 🤣
Jeez, Maan is so mysterious...

Wailing to read more Twinnie ❤️



awww glad you read it and enjoyed it 🤗
lol my Pierre heart broke whilst writing it
Some mystery is great to a character, may stripping moments to come

Hugs Twinie😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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A big thank you to my wonderful Bloomy
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i can imagine how smoking hot n gorgeous both would be looking ...lol

And your explanation made it more hot


Geet misunderstood Maan to be Pierre ...ahaan
Who cares ...i loved it
Infact, i believe Maaneet should go on a date ... Together
Lol


Awesome update aff darling
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful part ⭐️

Oh gosh !! These L gals 😆 😆 they teased geet so much 😉
and geet chewing the letter like a cow 🤣

Ur descriptions made me imagine maaneet sooo hot
and it even reminded me of the scene when maan was gettin ready for the engagement ! Uff !!

And geet misunderstood Maan to be pierre 😆
Amazed to see maan with some other gal 😲 How come that now ??!
Geet was feeling jealous 😉

Their attraction seems nt to end 😆

Loved it ❤️ cant wait for more 😳
Update soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
hii finally got the thread of ur FF...affy dear...
just read the whole in one go..
wow dear too gud...
loving the story..
especially the way u described all the parts...
love ur way of writing...
keep it up dear...

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