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Posted: 11 years ago

I will when I get time
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shivi.g

Read the whole story loved it
Awesome story with such devilishly handsome man and mysterious person.


Thank you for the lovely compliments
Glad you enjoyed the characterisations 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Thesaurus

awesome upd.
affy...loved it..
loving the story so much...
Its going grt dear...
keep it up sweety...
Can't wait for more...
ur a fab. writer.


Thanks so much priti
It means a lot coming from you because your a fabulous writer yourself 🤗
Very heart warming to receive your comments
I will update soon, just don't know when but aiming for the weekend
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anyone who wants to write a on for the update
Please like the introductory post, it'll be so much easier for me
Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
As all of you DD won so a special congrats to her
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Part 2- An unconventional date
Geet and Pierre walked silently on a cool July night. The stars above were tinkling, it felt like heaven was bestowing them. Pierre squeezed Geet's arms in excitement. He led her towards a beautiful opening.😃 As Geet peered towards the bushes Pierre pulled her back.😆
" Geet can I have please have your sketch pad, I have a big surprise awaiting for you. I can't have you holding anything on this night."
Geet placed the pad in Pierre hand with a slight grin. 😛
" Don't go anywhere Geet I will be back in a minute. If you do run away text me beforehand so I don't get heartbroken." Pierre soon disappeared with his chuckle echoing throughout the isolated ground. 🤣🤣
Being surrounded in an empty bush was not Geet's ideal date. 😆What was Pierre thinking when he organised the date.? A sensual waltz rhythm caused Geet to stand upright. She clasped her heels into her hand to attack any freaky animal that came her way. The drumming grew louder and louder. In a panic Geet crossed her legs and hid behind a rock. There was a lot of creaking and a heavy patter followed behind Geet. 😲😒

A hand was placed by delicately on Geet's back. Geet on the other hand began shaking. Her hand was trembling and her whole body shuddered😭. In a spur of moment Geet gripped her heels and smacked it hard on her perpetrator." You bas***d!!!!!🤬 What did you think, you could easily take advantage of me. You dog, I'm going to report you." Geet firmly faced the grass pacing back slowly.

"Geet what what happened???😲 Mama Mia girl you bruised me! Ooowww" exclaimed Pierre. Geet looked up to see a terrified Pierre massaging his head rapidly. Blood was dripping down near the forefront of his brain. The only reaction Geet could give was of shock. Geet ran towards Pierre and gently wiped away his blood flow.
"I'm so sorry, I just got scared but I knew I couldn't leave you. I thought if I hit the person maybe they would run away."😆😆 Geet started to sob apologetically when Pierre started to chuckle. He embraced her tightly and blew the tears away. 😊

" Geet I'm going to a public restroom to clean my wound. I will be back but please do not murder anyone. I do not have a shovel today to hide the body."🤣 Geet grinned slight and pushed him in the direction of the hotel.

Geet decided to move towards the venue. It was a bad day to wear heels because her foot would get stuck every two seconds between the stones. Her eyes were full of disbelief when she saw the Eiffel tower gleaming at her.😳😳 She paced quickly to view her pictures framed in beautiful canvasses, along the corners of the blanket. Her heart weighed down as she saw the roses placed near the blanket with a diamond ring held up by a teddy bear.☺️ He had planned everything with the picnic basket being occupied with every cuisine possible. Geet eagerly waited for Pierre's arrival. She looked across the ground to see many loved couples enjoying the moment. Geet was beginning to turn back when all of a sudden a silk blind fold was placed on her eyes.😲 A soft romantic music played in the background causing Geet to quickly understand Pierre was back.

She placed her hand towards Pierre in an attempt to grip him. Their bodies were finally in contact. She was slowly swaying in sync with his body movement, when Pierre suddenly glided Geet upwards causing their lips to touch. The kiss was aggressive and full of force which was very unlike Pierre.☺️ Geet's body was gently pressed along Pierre's chest, leading his touch to reach towards her navel. Geet instantly turned to face Pierre when he gripped her and placed a mysterious object on her neck. He gently pecked her across all her neck leaving her slightly exposed.😳😳 Geet kept struggling to touch his face when she heard a voice. " Geet I have been looking for you everywhere. I told you to wait for me there. My surprise has been spoilt? Why have you placed a blind fold on your eyes."

Geet was in a state of confusion and shock. Why was he asking her the blindfold when he placed it on her in the first place. Has he already forgotten this moment? Shee shrugged this matter off as he had a poor joking habit. Pierre gently removed the blindfold to show his gleaming face. Geet was so happy to see his face that she embraced him quickly. 😳

He lifted her gently and placed her on the blanket. He placed all food on the basket. They talked for hours and hours and she felt like this night should never end. She was finally feeling optimistic. It felt like the Eiffel Tower was shining its brightness on her life.

As she began to sketch the Eiffel Tower, Pierre's mischievous face reappeared. He selected the cigarettes and moved towards the outer grass area. Geet glanced in his direction but he seems concentrated in puffing the chimney.😃 The Eiffel Tower had a life of its own, it just was peaceful and a serene sight. Geet sipped her strawberry juice slowly when all of a sudden rain started to pour heavily, Geet searched for Pierre manically but she could not find him. She glanced in other directions but the rain was trickling down in her direction. She glanced upwards to see Bill focusing a hosepipe on her. Geet shrieked causing Pierre to run away. In fit of rage she chased him with water pouring on them both. 🤣🤣They both ran in circles until Pierre swirled Geet and showered her leaving her in awet state. She slugged towards the blanket and lay down facing the star. Her shoulder was shrugged by a silly looking Pierre. Geet faced the other way and broke into a rage of laughter. 😆 Both of them faced each other giggling like little children. For a second she remembered her time with Ryan. Geet at once stood up in attempt to remove the tears that were trickling by. The uneasiness in the atmosphere led to the lost joyful moment Geet would ever remember. Through the tons of sniffling moments Geet was faced by a bestowing Pierre who placed an eternity ring on her. ☺️😳😳

"Geet I know for you this may be very soon and I do understand. The moment I first laid my eyes on you I knew you were soul mate. Every minute I spend with I wish it would be my last. I love you lots and I can not visualise myself living my life with you. I hope you accept this token on my behalf to represent my faithfulness to you. "Pierre started to tear up. 😭❤️

Geet embraced Pierre and squeezed his hand. She placed a placed a quick peck on his cheek. Pierre drew Geet towards him, twirling her countless times.🤗 Geet serene moment was interrupted by a stranger glancing in her direction countless times. Geet trudged closer and closer to see it was MAAN! 😲
Edited by x-affy-x - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was an awesome upd.
Loved it.
Cont.soon.
Me first yippee.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Thesaurus

It was an awesome upd.

Loved it.
Cont.soon.
Me first yippee.


awww Priti I didnt even realise you had read it
I am so glad you enjoyed it
Really happy to receive your review 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: x-affy-x


awww Priti I didnt even realise you had read it
I am so glad you enjoyed it
Really happy to receive your review 😃

affy ur an amazing writer dear.
Keep it up.
Sorry my Like is not working.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wht a date
hugs or kisses maan deta hey
propose koi or kerta hey
memories kisi or ki hoti hein
wah geet
three boys at a time

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