Masoom ... maaneet FF pt9 pg142 mar25

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

iCAnt believe .u have started new ff😲...its different but i love ur work like mad ...will love this for sure ...maan ki pari pakaa geet hi hogi ...he is like gentleman types and calm ...😳...

geet is super practical this time 😔

geet doesnt know 4 letters called FEEL

but defo hamara maanu make her fall for him😉

waiting

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gill123

@gill123

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Geet in relation with someone alse but who is maan pari lovely start waiting 4 next

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Huum.. interesting story... Geet seems more practical.. Like she thinks everything as buisness deal.. profit & loss.. etc..
Waiting for next..

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

amazing part
geet is really practical
I think maan pari is geet only

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seher

@love4all

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Awesome part di

Liked it

Oh geet is so practical

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turbulence

@turbulence

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Beautiful. You'r a really true writer muski di, wht wid all the sensations, past and present blends, maan and geet's different lives then the longing, right from pyaar ka ehsaas to dhundlae aks, till now yu hav successfully charmed all of us a lot.

Maan alone and geet getting on with andrew for fun, dadi maa sad for maan's loneliness, sasha's longing and concern for her friend, everything is described very well. Great, very nice and beautiful.

All your fictions always depict every single feeling, emotion and human tendencies very well. No wonder you have soo many good and loyal friends out here who all love you soo much. Wish i was soo lucky as you are.

Presently don't have enough words, pls make do with this much. The next comment will be a looong one, i promise.

P.S: I have sent you pm with my ff links. Pls go thru, comment and tell me hw u find those, okay?