Dulhan Wahi jo piya Mann Bhaaye#9(completed) - Page 69

Loved the whole ff di!!

Originally posted by: anu5

Loved the whole ff di!!

Flawlessly penned

Loved the transformation of each character

Especially sameera's!!

Loved geet's emotional bond with each and everyone especially with her bro!!

Beautiful work di!!😊👏

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

Ye bhi khatam😲😲

Itni speed se padhogi to gf par draught aa jaayega stories ka😆😆

Any ways thanks Anu..

This was my first ever attempt in Wriring..

I transformed sameera because she was not bad from the beginning..

Originally posted by: anu5

Congratulations on ur first Story di!!

It's doesn't seems like this is ur first piece of writing di!!

The way u have penned down the story kept me hook up to read the entire ff in a go di!!

Loved each and every update of the story di!!

😊

Even if drought comes I hope u and other writers will cope up with it by writing more new stories !!😉😆

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

haha

aaj yaad aayi mera reply dekhne ki😆😆😆

yes you are right

there will be never a drought of story on GF as every day new writer is emerging here

Originally posted by: anu5

Read this story once again di!! Half way through

I wanted to reply once I finished reading it again

And saw your efforts for keeping this thread alive!! So I badly wanted to reply !!😊

So thought I should reply which I kept pending till date!!

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

thanks Anu

actually I want last thread of my every story to be alive so any new reader atleast can put a comment about my story

👍🏼

Originally posted by: anu5

👍🏼

Completed reading completely di!!

Thanks for writing story on maaneet di!!

👏😊

Fabulous story. Geet has suffered a lot. She was a driver's daughter and sameera's father took her with him when her father died saving sameera's father. She dedicated all her life to this family, taking care of each & every need of them. Loved her bond with her bro who knows more about her than her mother & sister. Sameera took undue advantage of her goodness.

Maan marriage was fixed with sam but she was so negligent towards his family. She was engrossed in her family and dreams to become a model. When dadi wanted to see his bride then they put geet in front of her. Dadi always liked geet over sam.

Maan fell in love with geet but could not express his feelings as he already commited to sam. Liked how he supported geet at every step.

Dadi was awesome. Planning, plotting against sam and indirectly helping geet & maan.

Both dadi & maan were shocked to know that geet was driver's daughter. But finally maans father made them realize how selfless she was and all agreed for their marriage.

Loved how you story progressed and made maan realize his wrong choice of bride. And glad that finally sameera too realized her mistake and became happy with rahul..