MG FF: Tremble - Complete (index on p. 1) - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Read All 6 Parts in One Go 😃\
Hatss Off To Your Writing 👏
Mind Blowing , Wonderful 😳
Continue Soon 😊
Last Part was so Emotional 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update !!!
Love how the story is progressing !!!
Hopefully these will figure it out !!!
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Again Maan and his his niece scenes are the chocolate topping on this update...the man needs affection and care. to give and to receive,. now only Anjana is on the receiving end...he feels incomplete coz he couldnt touch his dreams with the lady he loves...and i am glad he didnt accept her offer, its true Both could suffer again if she changes her mind later...Geet didnt recognise the little girl..wonder why?! was she too upset or doesnt she know abt anjana?!
Absence makes the heart go fonder and in this case the hurt deeper... you actually pictured their suffering so well...growing and aching...loved the update!! I am curious to know what u have in store for these hurt souls..will b waiting!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
why is she getting so desperate ... I know she loves hims ...but then accepting everything like this is not right... She should give time to herself

How i hate Maan for again rejecting her ...but even he is right

God ...i cant see them like this
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Posted: 11 years ago
chalo ek bar phir se, ajnabi ban jaye ham dono
chalo ek bar phir se, ajnabi ban jaye ham dono

na mai tumse koi ummid rakhu, dilnavaji ki
na tum meri taraf dekho, galat andaz nazro se
na mere dil ki dhadkan ladkhadaye, meri bato me
na jahir ho tumhari kashmkash ka, raz nazro se
chalo ek bar phir se, ajnabi ban jaye ham dono
chalo ek bar phir se, ajnabi ban jaye ham dono

tumhe bhi koi uljhan, rokti hai peshkadmi se
mujhe bhi log kehte hain, ki ye jalve paraye hai
mere hamrah bhi rusvaiya hai, mere majhi ki
mere hamrah bhi rusvaiya hai, mere majhi ki
tumhare sath bhi, gujri hui rato ke saye hai
chalo ek bar phir se, ajnabi ban jaye ham dono
chalo ek bar phir se, ajnabi ban jaye ham dono

tarruf rog ho jae, to usko bhulna behtar
talluk bojh ban jae, to usko todna achchha
woh afsana jise anjam tak, lana na ho mumkin
woh afsana jise anjam tak, lana na ho mumkin
use ek khubsurat mod dekar, chhodna achchha
chalo ek bar phir se, ajnabi ban jaye ham dono
chalo ek bar phir se, ajnabi ban jaye ham dono
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!!
both are suffering and in pain..
He is trying to get dissolved in his niece and she is trying in books.. but every thing at the end leads to the other's thoughts...
What Geet did was stupid in her alcoholic state... and he lost it completely...
he was kind of pushed off due to her denial to marriage... but in that frustration, he doesnt understand that he is the one who could have helped her come out of that inhibition to marriage...
And on the other side, she is so lost in confusion and pain... and a glimpse of him talking to another woman just confuses her more that she actually told him that she would marry for his happiness.
But in a way, its right, a marriage just done on such hasty decision will do no good...
wondering how these people will sort the mess and try to understand and work things out...
Loved the update.. continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
what do i say ..feeling very bad for geet...was it necessary for him walk away like that..?? but his point is also right...she might blame him in later years for tying her up with him which will be devastating for him then...no idea how they ll come together...but cant see the desperate efforts she s making to convince him...she s suffering tooo much ,, isnt she? or may be am over reacting😕
anyways loving the story...continue sooon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago



Geet is really that much selfish that she came around to him because she was jealous seeing him laughing with other women...good jawaab Maan...

and she wanted to make Maan burdened in the relation showing that she is doing this for his happiness. what a lie...when she returned to him for her happiness not to see him chatting with other females and instead she is giving reason that she want his happiness that si why she wants to marry now...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update..
Love it...
Plz add me to ur pm list..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another lovely update. Thank you so much.

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