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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

I love the moments with Maan and his Niece. They are absolutely the moments of a loving person who craves to give his love to someone.
Geet on the other hand is having nightmares about relationships. That cannot be a person who can easily get into a relationship just like that.
She is getting very desperate for him. Part of love is this desparation and she doesn't know it.
Maan walking away was the right thing to do but heart breaking too. No one should have to settle in life and maybe it is his love for her that he doesn't want her to settle either.

Loved the update. Thanks.

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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daredevilisback

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

You are Awesome yr...

What an emotional part...
You have made me permanant cry baby😭
so heart wrenching parts,,,,

I'm completly fall n in love with your writing style❤️

plz continue soon!!!!!!

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---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Kyo phoolo ke rang le gaya tu
kyu mere chare par apne nishaan
chod gaya tu,
kyu bhid main bhi rahu tanha
is tarah mujhse apna muh mod gaya tu

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neethu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

superb update...but feeling bad for geet.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Kya khub yeh rishta hai hamaara
kabhi gussa hai toffan sa
to kabhi duriya hai ,do kinaaro si
jo kamoshi pahle hoti thi zubaan hamaari
woh aaj khadi hai bich hamaare
sautan si

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
Kyo phoolo ke rang le gaya tu
kyu mere chare par apne nishaan
chod gaya tu,
kyu bhid main bhi rahu tanha
is tarah mujhse apna muh mod gaya tu

Lovely poetry Nishu 👏

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

dudette pm me awesome update geet needs to stop using her past as a shield maan loves her bust she has pushed him away what will it take him having another woman to realized his worth she needs to sort herself before knows what she is doing not every relationship is the same and she just hurt maan again so sad poor maan awesome update

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---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Tujhe bhul jaau main
itna toh main bewafaa nahi.
Tu jaanti hai
ke dekhta hu ,jab man aaina
to tere chare'face' ke siwa
kuch aur nazar mujhe aata nahi.
Par phir tujhe khud se judaa kar diya
jo na karna tha bhul se bhi,
hosh main woh gunaah kar diya.
To samajh lena mujhe,
main chahata hu sirf tujhe.
Sirf ek tu nahi
tera har ansh mera ho,
tu bane meri,
yeh zid meri nahi,
balki iss fasale ka haq
sirf tero ho

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

geet atlast agreed for marriage because it make maan happy but maan doesnt want to get married because of force. Feeling very sab how he is craving for geet to be his wife and to be mother of his child. Hope atleast geet thinks by heart

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---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: dqno1

Lovely poetry Nishu 👏

yipee,its party time.
Finally aap ne ham notice to kiya
mere poem thread par na sahi
yaha hi sahi
kahi toh aapne mujhe
response diya.
Glad you like it

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