MG FF: Tremble - Complete (index on p. 1) - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
she said yes for all the wrong reasons... good update though.. it was painful for Maan again..
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Posted: 11 years ago
he is right...both have to b on d same page...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you SO much everyone for your amazing comments! You guys always blow me away with your incredible feedback. I will be sure to leave replies to each comment, but just wanted to leave a general thank you now. :) Big hugs, all! <3 <3 <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved how u expressed the pain and loneliness as the aftermath of breakup...what took me with surprise was that Geet made a sincere effort to find her happiness again with him but he walked away. Now I just hope Maan realises the effort he needs to put so that she doesn't agree to marry him for his happiness but hers too...Onus is on him to not just walk away but walk back to her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
seeing maan bonding with the little kid shows how much of caring person he z & deep down he yearns to hv a family of his own someone to call his own and to knw he hv seen geet as the mother of his child and has woven so many dreams of their togetherness shows the extent of the importance ,respect and formost the luv he has for geet and it must hav been a huge blow to him wht geet said and did in her drunken state and that happend to b the last straw of his patience which was already on a threshold after he got to knw abt adi and pinky...superbly expressed the dramatic turn of events and it clearly showed geet's helpnessness and maan's stand though it was clearly visible how much of effort iot was for maan to stay away frm her but i guess there wz a limit to his tolerance and geet had conveniently crossed that its tough for geet too even if she succeeds in burying the demons frm her past in day her nightmares will bring them back and next day she will hv to start all over again...both of them were hoping for the other to understand their perspective and in this quest they ended up creating a huge gap btw them and to bridge it back both of them will hv to make ammendments together it wont work just frm one side the standing was already slippery and they now must hv storong grounds to hold on to wht they r gng to build for their future...geet gng back to maan was again a surprising fact and as i wasn't expecting geet to make such a move i also wasn't anticipating the way maan reacted to her consent for their marriage but he knws her quite well to understand why she was agreeing to marry him now which she didn't when he hv been trying to convince her for so long...both of them r fettered by their own beliefs..can't wait to see wht their next step wd b... superb updates & eagerly waiting to read more
thank u so much for the updates!!!!😊😳
Edited by CrabbyEntity - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is so sad I don't blame either but its painful to see them this way . Geet trying to hold back their relation and Maan not trusting Geet this time .
Loved the update ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow wow and wow!! What an amazing ff, just fell in love with it!
Very emotional update, where is their story heading now?? 😒
Cont soon, waiting :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Missed reading the last few ones and just lapped them all up! Oh Kumari, I sooo love to see writers presents Maan as a man with a heatt. More than often one sees an arrogant ghost of a man and a servile Geet and all of them follow the same trajectory with Geet going arrogant and Maan servile at the end... haha.. your writing is so fresh and realistic 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update
Feel the pain both are going through, so sad 😔

Waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just came across this ff...nice and different...can you PM me whenever you update
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