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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

i guessed dat sameera has planned all d things...dat chudail...
awesome n wonderful story...
loved it very much...

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: kabslocks
I have already read this OS.But i forgot the writers name

the writers name is Mel😆

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Mel this is wonderful OS...

is this really written by u...

there is lot of difference in writing style...when in FF aisa lagta hai tum bhagti rehti ho but this OS seems u write with patience...

main tou guess hi nahin kar saki...

hmm so Geet started with spying on Maan because Sameera and Sasha blamed Maan for harassment...and as a women she came forward to help them when Maan denied the allegations and expose him in front of the world...

but Maan was really innocent...Sameera did all this blaming because he never gave any heed to her sexual seducing...

chalo Maan forgave Geet...she was not at fault also because it was her job...first Maan was angry but later realized that she was just doing her job...

perfect end...

thanx for pm...

😆Haan me did😳

see I can have patience you will neevr geuss where I got my inspiration from me will tell you through pm😆

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Beautiful OS buddy.

The story is great.A crime reporter getting personally involved with an allegedly controversial super star,to get her scoop or say to get justice to d damsels.But ends up herself falling for d superstar and then the truth hurts him deeply.

But true love truimphs when d girl saves d superstar fm a gangster attack staking her own life.Theis twins are super cute.

Loved d OS.

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

me was having faint idea u wrote it
bt now its clear
aww me so much lvd this os
geet huh she came to trap maanu bt she herself got trap in his love😆😆
n my maanu aww baby
wo kamini chudail chipkali sam was trying to frame my maanu in false accustion bt bt bt my maanu toh bach gya😆😆😆
me o much want to kich hard that chipkali ya her partner in crime sasha also
n geet ko b not hard bt wanna kick sure for hurting my maau
ya ya i know she dont know that
bt maanu ka face dekh ke samajna tha na bt na
she n her so called truth n punishment
bt lv the way they unite
it was different bt good😆😆😆
jst lvd it
give a halka sa slap from my side to geet
arey for hurting my maanu😆😆

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

superb..

geet faking act to maan n falling in love

maan knowing about it

n denying to meet her

geet proved her love..

short n sweet

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

wow that was something
so they were faking it all
and they told him that geet was lying to him
it broke him
but it all worked out for them

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nishnal

@nishnal

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Heart touching ya...loved it...emotions perfect story superb...,this is what I can say that can change the mood of a person aftr reding this story it did change my mood n I feel happy reading this wonderful piece of urs...add me if I'm not there in ur buddy list plz...!!

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

...😊

1stly 4 PM me...4 this..😳..

Updates..😛.

turely ur updates r just ,

Dear...👏👏..

really..😃

for ur

dear..😃.👍🏼

tons of ...🤗.

last but not the list...😃...

keep the job up dear..👏..

keep ing dear...😃

dear...😳

lov,❤️

Tama

NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.

P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡

P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕

Note:

guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...

but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

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