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Posted: 11 years ago
shoking precape yeh karan ka murder kab hoga yakkk
ab muje is say chir honai lagi hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
suprb update siri...maan geet ko KM wapas le gaya...yaar ye karan tho bohot dangerous hote ja rh h...geet ne bad dream dekha...
precap2 interesting hai...tho geet ka mangalsutr hi usse karan se fight krne me help krega
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update!!!
Aww! Geet was caressing her tummy to feel her baby!!
Maan also got emotional he also miss his first baby bt now
His baby is back and he will make sure no one can harm his mishty n baby..!
Maaneet's passion on its peak!!
Geet k nakhre abhi se ahuru aage kya hoga Maan ka :P
Kamin karan iska jaldi se chapter close karo how can he think
So cheap yuckk he is a disgusting man!! Ek baar maan k haath lagg jaye phr iski khair nahi.!!!
Again a nightmare??
Geet is ao scared but I'm happy tht they r going back to KM!!
Now Geet will be safe and willbhe under watchful eyes of Maan!!
Precap seema so intresting!!
Loved the way Geet's mangalsutra broke her hypnotised spell!!
Abb karan ki watt lagegi he dared to touch Geet's Mangalsutra!!
Waiting for next!!! Update soon please!!! Can't wait specially aftr reading precap!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
karan hate him..he want to hv his friends wife..
bulshit..
precap interesting..but how geet got in his trap
where is maan n veer
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story...
it is fab...too gud...
update soon...
eagarly waiting...
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum part😊
awww even in sleep geet stroking her belly 😊
hayeee maaneet lost in der own happy world n maan talking with baby soo cuteee 😊
maan nt arguing wid geet regarding which baby t will be as in both case he/she will be his angel 😊 n its absolutely true 😊
ohhh nooo geet nightmare 😭
grrr karan 😡😡😡
precap is hell scary
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wating wating wating
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Posted: 11 years ago
i hate this Karan why is he doing this 😡😡
I hope geet and maan can enjoy this baby😊
update soon pls 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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RECAP

On that time Geet got up screaming badly.She was breathing heavily and sweating profusely.On that time she heard footsteps for which she snapped open her eyes to see Maan running towards her.Maan was scared hearing her scream.As soon as Maan sat beside Geet,she hugged him tight and started crying badly.Maan stroked her back and asked,"What happened jaan?Why did u scream?"Geet hicupped but pulled her from him and spoke with shaky voice,"I saw a nightmare!A very bad dream!In that a man came and touched me and ripped off my clothes and made me naked and ripped my virtue!"Maan was shocked listening to the dream but kissed her forehead and said lovingly,"Jaan it is only dream!Dont take it seriously!Did u do meditation before u sleep?"Geet nodded no to him and he glared at her.Geet softly spoke,"Am sorry!"Maan made her sit properly and closed her almond eyes and said softly,"Now take off ur thoughts and dreams and nightmares,everything!"He saw after sometime Geet getting normal and calm when he whispered something inside her ear which made her move her eye ball to indicate him to go from there








Maan got up and stood far away from her but dint go away from the room and saw her face folding his hands.He prayed her babaji to make her normal.





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PART 59



Military Headquarters Delhi...



Someone was screaming painfully and it came from one of the cells where criminals were kept solitary.Today it was the bad day for the person who was screaming painfully as he had got in the clutches of Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat.Veer gritted his teeth and shouted,"Speak up..where's Karan or else am not gonna leave u like that!"That man was badly beaten and his face were having all types of punch marks.Veer snaked his right muscular arm around his neck and tightened his hold and squeezed his neck as his muscles flexed due to tightness and said,"Spit it out!"That person nodded no to him when Veer shouted,"God damn it...he had raped my senior officer's daughter and if u act like stubborn then he's gonna do that with ur daughter too!Do u have a daughter right who's attaining her teenage and beautiful?"That man got worried hearing his daughter's name and looked up to see Veer's black eyes.

















Veer was sweating profusely due to work out he was doing with his victim.Veer slapped his face once again and said,"U dont have any concern towards ur daughter right?Speak up Chandan!"Chandan who was the servant of that castle where Karan hid his victims in that deep cellar.Chandan was his right hand in everything whom Veer had caught using his brains as Chandan was so cunning and dangerous but he love his daughter who was far away from all this mess and was innocent.Chandan banged his head to the bars of the his cellar and fainted immediately.Veer saw him unconscious and stomped his foot cursing under breath,"Damn it!"
















Veer came outside the cellar and dialled up to the army doctor and said him to come and treat him.Doc came and treated him and went away but Veer was thinking so much.How to spit out the truth from Chandan when he got a phone.Veer answered it immediately suppressing his anger.














"Hello!"said Veer calmly.When a firm cold voice came from that side then Veer stood abruptly spitting fire from his eyes."How r u Veer?"said Karan.Veer exclaimed angrily,"Karan!"Karan said painfully,"Veer,i know u r angry with me but i want to die!"Veer's eyes widened with shock which turned into confusion.On that time someone was seeing him from binoculars.There was a smirk playing on his lips and he was none other than Karan who smirked evilly seeing Veer's expression.Karan smirked but spoke in sad tone or have to say pretended to speak in sad tone,"Veer...after committing so many sins...am feeling am impure...i want to die!"Veer was more confused hearing his remorse.He asked,"Karan where r u?"Karan said,"Veer,will u let me die peacefully?I dont want to tell u my place."On that time Veer turned to his opposite side showing his back to Karan who cursed seeing Veer's position.
















Veer saw his junior officer intently and gestured to locate the phone call.His junior officer nodded and went away.Karan spoke painfully,"Veer...after forcing Anjali...i hv become a soulless person and that's true that i loved her so much but she...she loved Maan...and i got the hint that i cant get her...that's why i need to force her...so that she marries me but...but her attempts and love towards Maan made her to be dead.But i feel...i feel impure...i crushed her innocence Veer...i loved her so much...but this guilt...i cant able to live in this guilt Veer...i want u...i want to die on ur lap...will u help me with that?"For the first time Veer felt Karan is telling truth,becoz whenever he lied Veer always caught him as his voice would shake whenever he's lying to Veer.But Karan's voice was firm and he felt he's actually telling the truth.But he is an army officer he need to be on his guard so he decided to play with Karan.














Now Veer needed to pretend that he's in his trap.Veer spoke worriedly,"Karan am ready to help u!I wanna meet u dude!"Karan smiled evilly seeing his expression and said,"I will let u know buddy!"




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Here Maan made Geet comfortable in their room in KM and left to bring some dinner.After sometime Maan came back holding the tray of Geet's food which made her mouth water.She immediately pounced at him and he chuckled seeing her cute expression.Geet fed him lovingly and he too fed her and then he kept the plates back in the kitchen and came back and saw the scene with wide eyes.There slept Geet naked wrapped only in blanket,her arms and legs were open making him hard while the blanket was wrapped from her cleavage to her b**t.Even her b**t was half-open inviting him to squeeze it.Maan glared at her and asked angrily,"What r u doing Geet?"Geet saw him standing near their bed and she pulled him on her.Maan immediately stopped himself be falling on her stomach where their baby was breathing and shouted,"Geett!"

















Geet pouted and immediately took off her blanket and spread it over him and entered inside it and rubbed her naked body to his rough body which made him breathe sharply.He immediately snkaed his arms around her naked waist under the blanket and said,"Jaan this is not the time!"She pouted and turned that side.She pushed his hand from her waist.He knew he's hurting her distancing himself from her but he cant see her teary face and that happened immediately.He heard her sob in nano second.














Maan immediately turned her and lifted her face to get a teary mess.Her almond eyes were glistening with tears and her eyes gave pain towards him.He asked worriedly,"Why r u crying jaan?"Geet threw his hand from her and got up swiftly and threw her blanket from her naked body and collected her clothes when he came and blocked her way.Maan asked,"Jaan,why r u angry?"He was so much tempted seeing her naked body and she had heard his groan of pleasure.She wiped her tears and glared at him.She asked angrily,"Am sure u r getting bored of me that's why u r not loving me like before!Now am pregnant na so i will become fat and ugly and that's why u r distancing me from u!"Maan asked confused,"When did i said that?"Geet said wiping her pearls,"No need to say..i can understand it from ur gestures!Dont fool me!I know u r getting bored of me and that's why u r not giving attention towards me!Or else u would love like before!U only said na that u cant have enough of me but now am enough and i dont want to u!















Maan closed his eyes thinking that its her mood swings.It has been one month that Geet had stayed in their tree house and had learnt every lesson from Naina.On that time only they got to know that Geet was pregnant and her mood swings were swinging like swing.From that time only Maan avoiding s** with her thinking that he can hurt their baby.But Geet was Geet...she misunderstood him once again and her mood was unstable these days due to pregnancy and due to pregnancy hormones she craved for Maan's love which she wasnt getting from past one month.














Geet was abt to move when he held her naked shoulder which made her to breathe sharply.He chuckled feeling his effect when she glared at him.Maan said with his sugary voice,"Jaan,listen to me...u r pregnant...i cant hurt u like that...u do know how much am aggressive towards u!"She blushed hearing his sugary voice.He continued,"I love u so much jaan and i cant see u in any pain..if it is put by me or others.U want to see my guilty face...!"But she closed his mouth and spoke smiling shyly,"U r not aggressive Maan...controlling urself u have proved that u love and care for me crazily.














Maan gave a shy smile but before he would speak further Geet spoke muting him,"But i dont want u to control!I want u wild and i want ur love...wild love!Dont u see my craving..my longing!Maan i love u!"She bent down and kissed his neck softly.He groaned feeling her petal lips.He pulled her towards him pinning her naked body and making her aware of his full length.He had melted hearing her words.He was happy to get to know that she longs of him.In love people go nuts for each other but they get a relief hearing their partners longs for them then that would be delightful moment which is the chance of love making














Maan took that oppurtunity or have to say used that oppurtunity or else his innocent wify would show silent demeanors towards him.He groaned feeling her pink tongue licking his neck.She softly bit his pulse and licked it which made him intolerable.He groaned and took her right hand which was squeezing his b**t and kept on his shirt button.She squealed in delight when he swatted her behind.She moaned when she felt his hands squeezing her behind.Geet took off his shirt buttons slowly moving her sleek fingers on his rock hard chest which quivered in anticipation.














Maan asked softly,"Do u need demonstration jaan?"Geet nodded and pecked his lips and he immediately lifted her in his arms...





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