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Posted: 11 years ago
part 50
awesome...
OMG poor Anjali...
that Karanvir is a beast...
and Angad was so fooled all these years...
hope at least now he does something quick to alert Maan and Geet and Veer with any delay...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago




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Geet kissed his left chest & said,"This heart has so many secrets..till now everything is revealed but this heart trying to hide one secret & am gonna make u reveal!"Maan was abt to speak when Geet muted his sculpted mouth from her lips.She bit his lips pressing it,coaxing it.He groaned & knew she was torturing him.Maan tried to speak when his eyes widened when her lips reached his hard n****e.He groaned badly...

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PART 51


First part contains warning 18+ so read that part from this link-https://srirmg.wordpress.com/2013/09/19/venomous-desire-th4-updated-part-51/



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Geet said pressing her curves to his chiseled chest,"So what is it?"He panted & crushed her small frame cocooning in his strong arms.She moaned softly which made him erect with sheer ecstacy.Poor Maan he was trying to calm himself after that torture but Geet was not letting him.She heard the heart beat which was racing rapidly.After sometime he calmed himself & worn off his erotic thoughts & fantasies & started his story.















Maan said worriedly,"Jaan..am worried abt u,becoz my one of friend has become threat to u!"Geet dint understand & asked,"Maan explain!"He sighed & said,"Jaan..Karan has become enemy of me...he want to hurt me from u!He want u to satisfy his lustful desires just like ur uncle Vikram!"Geet's eyes widened with horror & asked,"What?"He nodded & continued,"Yes jaan & that's why am worried for u!I dont want u to get to know but ur stubbornness making me reveal this news to u!Jaan he want to take revenge of Anjali's death on me from u!"Geet was still confused & asked,"But why?Why people r behind us?Do u mean that he's the one who killed our baby?"Maan nodded to her which made her turn that side with disgust.Her eyes moistened & she said softly,"How much i have suffered becoz of him?But why he did this..he killed a life before it comes to this earth...our flesh & blood...dont he know that am no longer virgin...i was once conceived & was carrying ur baby...our baby!"Maan turned & hugged her from behind his warm skin warmed her & loved her.Her eyes welled up & tears poured down.














Maan said worriedly"Jaan!"But she said,"Maan am ok just am hurted becoz why people try to take revenge for the mistake we never did!"He said,"Jaan!"But she turned & asked,"What i hv done to get this pain Maan...my baby..my angel died before she would lap up inside my arms...why i need to lose everything before i get a thing fully?"His heart felt the pain & last sentence made him so much hurted.He knew that he had stole her virtue forcefully which can never be changed & this made him angry on himself.Geet said,"Are u gonna tell me why he's doing like this instead of cursing urself for that situation?"Maan saw her in awe while she turned towards him & saw him lovingly,"How many times do i hv to tell u Maan that i gave in to u on my will only u dint r***d me!"Maan said painfully,"Geet...whatever i did,i dont hv right to give u any pain..i was drunk & i stole ur virtue which isnt gonna close my sin!"













She said with utmost love,"Maan!"He saw her eyes while she said,"Will u answer me?"He took a deep breath & started his story,"Jaan,Karan was one of our best friend.Me,Veer,Angad,Karan...only 4 no 1 was there in our group.Me,Angad,Veer were from rich family while Karan..he was poor..but we never had any mentality..he was equal to us just like we were equal to him.But his jealousy wasnt permitting him to stop hate us...especially me & Veer..though he was the close friend of Veer...he became best friend to us time after time.Karan was a normal person..but if someone speaks abt his parents then he would become violent.Both Veer & Karan had a very painful childhood.Both parents were neglecting their children & Karan was more affected by them just becoz of this reason only.Karan's parents never had any shame!That's why i think elders say that if a couple become parents then there responsibilities also becomes more!Jaan,Karan never got parents love though they were present..he was cursed & all types of bad habits were lingering inside them.Even his mother too dint give any importance..his father was all the way said to himself as man as he has given birth to a boy...but he dint had any mind to raise him.Karan & Veer grew in this type of environment where Karan & Veer's parents gave importance to s**.They even dint maintain any secrecy which wont affect the mind of little Karan but did that openly in front of him.This made Karan's mind to be corrupted due to that type environment.Though Veer too grew in this environment,but he was saved by Mrs.Shekhawat who was the principal of the school.She knew children's mentality & she always deal with them caringly.When she met Veer then she got to know abt him in his language where once she had caught him calling his mother as s**t.Mrs.Shekhawat immediately searched the root of the problem & forced Veer's mother to give away Veer to her.And from that time Veer got a new birth & new parents who cared him & loved him.But in the case of Karan this never happened..even Veer's purpose of joining Karan to our gang was that he forgets his state & get good behaviour if he mingles with us.Even Karan was like that only as Veer thought but one day his father came & asked forgiveness & took him back.He went far away from us for one year & when he came back to us then he had entirely changed.He had forgotten his goal..first he wanted to become businessman doing hard work..but he had changed his goal & had decided to become psychiartist.We wondered why he changed his goal & even consulted him but he said that what he saw in one year made him to become a psychology doctor.

















Both maaneet were cocooned inside each other's embrace naked while Maan continued,"Mrs.Shekhawat saved Veer but for Karan..no one was there to save him..his parents gave importance to their s** life..while he always saw their consummation...from this there was an deep impact on his mind...which made him think that all the women are s***s & in the course of his life when he attained his adult age he...he...jaan in that one year what happened with him we dont know but he had attacked most beautiful girls of Mumbai by his lustful desires...first we dint know who's doing all this...everyday we were reading the news that every girl has been raped in her sub-conscious stage & some girls also went missing who were not found till now...but whatever was going on that time was connected to Karan only!Then in the course of time we figured that somewhat Karan is connected to all this becoz he always acted weirdly whenever we saw that news.Veer was the first to observe this & he shared it with me.We wanted to know what was going on & kept an eye on him.But alas he had destroyed another life too & she was Anjali..Angad's sister!"Maan felt disgust further while Geet got curious of thinking what Karan did next which is making her husband to feel disgust.


















Geet kept her hand on him & said,"Maan!"Maan said painfully,"Jaan he r*ped Anjali when she was unconscious...& murdered her & put the accuse on me!"Geet was shocked & after sometime she felt angry & she thought,"How dare he?"Here Maan continued & said,"Then Veer made a plan & Naina,Veer's girlfriend helped it as she was also psychiartist too!And Karan was admitted to mental asylum!But now...now he's out loose planning against me even he had kept the camera in our washroom so that he can witness u naked but i destroyed his plan when i discovered it in our washroom.That's why i want u to go to this camp!"Geet asked,Maan what is the purpose of this camp...to become strong to face Karan!"Maan said,"Jaan i dont u to meet him as he's very cunning & is a sadist..that's why am sending u there..till Veer catches him u r gonna stay there!"Geet was abt to speak when he muted her by her palm & said,"Dont worry jaan i will come to meet u every day night in disguise!"Geet pouted & said hugging him tightly,"Am not gonna go no where leaving u alone!"He chuckled & said,"Well jaan u r gonna go..or else i wont leave u alone...& as a matter of fact u hv left ur work halfway now!"She looked up seeing around her when she felt his erection poke her bu**.She widened her eyes & in swift moment she was under him & he pressed her gently.She moaned feeling his rough body rub her skin and... will give tomorrow!





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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing ud dr😳
geet sweetly tortouring maan to knw d truth😉
nd maan loving his wild sherni😆

finaly maan nt able to cntrol nd
agree to told her d truth😃

maan told geet d whole truth abt karan
nd his evil intentions
thank god veer ws saved at that time
bt nt karan
geet stil dnt wnt to leave maan nd go
bt maan made her agree

waiting 4 d nxt dr ud soon

Edited by MANISHAGOEL - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG
me blusing blushing ;)
geet ka tarika maan se sb sach nikalne wale ka
hayeee
smoking hwat ;)

so maan ne geet ko sb sach sach bta diya apna sara past
karan ke baare mai
aur maan geet ko camp mai bejh rha hai taki wo uss karan ki gandi najron se dur ho jaye aur wo aisa kuch na kare


aur ye khn end kar diya
plz update soon
Edited by shalinimg - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so geet came to know everything its good that she knows everything so that in future she can fight

really childhood is very precious they are like wax which ever shape we want we can mould them it depends upon the parents. karan and veer are the best examples
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmm tho ye karan ki story 😕😕
parents ki galti karan ko bhuganti pari
but agar karan thik hona chata he can but usne try hi nahi kiya hay 😡😡..
he can talk to his friends but he did not .
hope now karan will get his punishment 😳😳😳

chalo maan ne geet se har manke sab kuch bol diya 😆😆
geet ko nahi jana
abb chalo maan ne mana liya geet ko 😉😉
ye maaneet sudhar ne wala nahi ahy 😆😆😆
rat ko milne ayega lol bolo 😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
karan is arghhh
so maan told her everything
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Posted: 11 years ago
Parents mistake.. affects children.. came true in Karan's case..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

so geet came to know everything its good that she knows everything so that in future she can fight

really childhood is very precious they are like wax which ever shape we want we can mould them it depends upon the parents. karan and veer are the best examples



yes dear like a wax what we show them they become like that only!😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear, loved it to the core. One thing you told is very true. Some times parents behaviour have a great impact on children. Whether it is good or bad. Veer was saved but not karan, feeling bad for him becasue of his childhood but at the same time hating him now for spoiling so many innocents life mainly for killing anjali and putting the blame on maan. And maneet's pain is well depicted. Continue soon dear 😊

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