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Posted: 11 years ago


Lakshu ..siggi is
Mast dear...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24





Lakshu,Priya,Lily and Mona...🤗


Sorry for late coming sweeties...
Guests r at home...😊



tere yahaan bhi aa gaye??😆

how is ur hand now?

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Lakshu ..siggi is
Mast dear...😛



thanx dear

sabse zyaada mehnat ki hain is baar... ufff

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Posted: 11 years ago

The Mist

For banner credit goes to my dear Laksmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.






Part - 5



Both d family members were just dragging themselves in d process with faking smiles, but their hearts were aching ,, it was mid night and due to bitter cold guests started to leave ,, only family members were there and few Maan's friends ,, they too were very tired and sleepy ,, they occupied some cosy places in warm canopies and resting there.

It was d time of Sacred Pheras ,, Pandit called d bride and groom ,, YSK brought Maan and all d family members settle there around him. Kamal and Preeti brought Geet and made her sit near Maan. Pandit started chanting Mantras and guided Maan and Geet to perform d rituals ,, both were doing everything mechanically ,, this was just a formalities for them to save d family honour ,, this was not a marriage for them, but a duty towards their elders. Two people who never met , knew and talked to each other were going to tied to each other for life long. The Pandit was narrating the meanings of Mantras of every Pheras to them , but their mind and heart were blocked with their own thoughts ,, their dreams were turning into ash in the holy fire of Hawan Kund . Manhinder did the Kanyadaan with a bleeding heart ,, he knew her daughter was doing all this only for his and Yash's respect ,, she never tolerate anything near her related to Sameera and her family,, she hate them and they hate her, but today destiny forced her to accept a relation that was related to this family. He knew today he was going to lose his daughter, he was helpless.


On the other side YSK and Dadima took a sigh of relief that everything finished peacefully. One side YSK was sad about Maan, but other side he was happy that today his and Nidhi's fav girl was becoming a part of their family. Yash and his wife Nidhi liked Geet . He and Dadima didn't like Sameera , but they agreed coz of Maan ,, he loved her and wanted to marry her. Today he thanked god for saving his family from that girl.


All rituals finished and it was d time of Bidaai ,, Geet was in a FH room and Maan was sitting in a lone, dark and misty corner of venue ,, the chilling weather was unable to sooth his burning heart ,, everything was going unbearable for him ,,, he just wanted to run away from all this ,, from everything which was related to her .. Sameera .. who cheated him and played with his and his family's respect. He was feeling suffocated and he was angry and loathing himself for loving that B**** who played with his emotions,, he was hating every single things related to this marriage and His anger and frustration was increasing every passing min.


Geet was sitting in d room all alone ,, her Bui and Preeti were busy in bidaai's arrangements. Now all work load was on them coz Sameera's Maa and her relative were at home and consoling her. Mahinder sent them home after listening that atrocious news ,, this family was only giving him pain. Geet said to her Bui that she won't go that home for Bidaai , so brought her all belongings here. She came to attend this marriage only for her father and Bui's wish ,, she lived in d hostel of I** Delhi.


Geet's POV..


She was burning in anger cursing herself to come here ,, her life turned up side down in few hours and now she was a married girl .. aarrggghh ,, i hate this ,, i don't know what'll come next in front of me. Geet .. You r going to walk on a thorny way ,, u r all alone now ,, Aaj iss ek samjhote ne sab kuch khatam ker diya. Ek Beti hone ka kerz chukka diya tune ,, Inn do khandano ki izzat to tune bach li lekin ab tera kya hoga ? Tere sapne, education, career aur aage life ka kya hoga? Kuch hi ghanto mei Zindgi kahan se kahan pahuch gai..? Mera sab kuch iss gahari Dund mei sama gaya ,, Everything is unclear and uncertain .


Kamal put her bag near her and looked at her blank face painfully ,, he knew she is burning in hell ,, he was so helpless today ,, His lil kiddo sis, his Guddu is going to face d worst side of her life and he was unable to help her. He was chocked with emotions ,, cupped her face and packed on her forehead ,, he hugged her tightly , but she was numb today ,, she lightly reciprocate d hug ,,, her face was blank and eyes were emotionless. Dadi, Bui, Preeti and Mahinder came to perform the last ritual. All were chocked and speechless ,, Kamal and Mahinder escorted her out to sit in a decorated Audi ,, Dev called Maan ,, who came quietly and sat inside d car without looking anywhere. Yash and Mahinder hugged each other and Mahinder joined his hand and requested Dadima and Yash to forgive him.


Mahinder: I' m sorry Maaji aaj mere ghar per aapka bada Apmaan hua hai ,, ho sake to mujhe maf ker dena.


Dadi: Mahinder isme aapka kya dosh beta ,, hume aapse koi shikayat nahi hei ,, aap jo humare liye ker sakte thy aapne ker diya apnii beti deker.


YSK: Mahinder jo hua wo sabke sath hua hei ,, sirf apne ko dosh matt do. Iss bare mei baad mei baat kerte hai.


All Khurana family settled in their respective cars and drove off. Now venue was empty, full of thick layer of mist, chilled and unclear wrapping the ugly truth of this marriage in its density . This bad weather covered up everything ,, nobody knows what happened to whom?


Mahinder ,Rajji, Kamal and Preeti come back to FH's room with heavy hearts ,, they rest there for a while to face the later consequences of this mishap. They completed their remaining work and went to home all tired. The atmosphere of d house was like a battle field,, Brijj was shouting on his Maa and she was sulking and cursing her bad luck ,, her sister and other relatives were consoling and giving their precious advices to them . Mahinder shoot a hard glare at all and left to his room upstairs ,, Kamal and Preeti with lil Sunny followed him ,, Mahinder told them to take some rest and went to his room. Rajji sat there with Sameera's maa to know d facts about this dreadful act of her daughter. Though Rajji never liked this family's way of livings and thoughts but she couldn't avoid it fully coz they belonged to her late elder bro. There was not a single news of Sameera .


Precap - KM ..


Sorry for mistakes.
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Part - 6


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
SO...finally marriage happened...

Feeling Sad for Geet and Maan...


Galti Ek kare aur saza kitnon ko mili...

Will have to see how will they cope p with the situation...


Do continue...


Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago


lakshu .. 😊
net is so slow... hang ho raha hei..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear
maan and geet got married but both are broken and betrayed by their fate
hope maan will not vent his anger out on geet
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Posted: 11 years ago


saddy part

its really sad on the part of the elders that they chose familys reputation over their childs happiness... they didnt even think whether both will be able to accept the other ...

maan is in a real bad situation... one side he had to face rejection and betrayal which is not at all easy for any one to accept... and on the other side he is married to a stranger... but i hope he understands geets situation here... which is worse than him... she too is not only marriied to a stranger but this whole marriage was alein to her...

waiting how they will react when they see each other face to face...


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Posted: 11 years ago
wat wil happen in km
waiting

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