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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 Pahale gayab hoti ho .. fir naraaz bhi hoti ho..😛
Accha aaj GF per aana then i'll manaofying u..😃
For now .. this...🤗


And this...





main tho aagayi hoon par tu kaha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Congo di
For a new story
Looking forward to read this
Continue soon😃
Edited by aanya84 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23



Updating...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

The Mist

For banner credit goes to my dear Laksmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.




Part - 1



It was a chilled winter night of February , guests were gathered at d beautiful marriage venue - A big farm House. Guests were sitting and standing in groups near bonfires which were placed at many places for warmth ,,they were enjoying the lavish marriage party of Khurana's eldest son Maan Singh Khurana ,, a love marriage. She was d daughter of his dad's late friend and he loved her. The weather turned in its bad mood,, after sharp chilled winds it started misty. The Barat was on d way ,, though d weather was turning worse but people in d barat were dancing and enjoying on fast music and fire work. They were moving slowly coz of bad clearity.

At d venue all were waiting for Bride ...Sameera, who went to dressed up in a beauty parlor. She went with her cousin before few hours, but didn't come back ,, her mother Promila and bro Brijvir was trying her mob number, but that was unreachable , may be coz of bad weather or traffic jam. Wait was the only option for them ,, after half an hour a lady came to Brij with a phone in her hand, she was Brij's Aunty(massi).Brij took d phone and replied looking at pale faced lady.


The girl: Hello, Bhai i' m ******


Brij: hello , where r u? Where is Sameera? Give her phone.

The Girl: Bhai Sameera Di is not here , i'm in d Beauty Parlor , She went to market saying that she forgot something for make-up ,, she made me sit here in parlor's waiting room n went out, but it is almost 1 and half hour she didn't come back.


Brij: What!!! Where r u now?


The girl: I'm talking from the same parlor's phone , i don't know anything here,, when i c asked about Di, they replied that she is not here, she didn't come here, i didn't remember your number so i rang at my Maa's phone. Mai kya karu ab?


Brij: You wait there , I'm coming ,,he called d driver and asked the add ,, he rushed to that place with his friends .


His Aunty secretly narrated everything to Promila and she was shocked ,, her face turned white and beads of sweat appeared on her forehead. Barat was at the Gate of Veneu for welcome ,, Mahinder and his nephew Kamal was there to receive them .


Promila called her sis-in-law Rajji and narrate d whole mess ,, Rajji was hell shocked ,, she was cluless and nothing was coming in her mind. A fear was engulfing her,, her family and brother's respect was on stake ,, not only her, but the Khurana's respect too was on stake. She was sitting numb in a chair and Promila was shedding tears on her bad luck and cursing her daughter. Brij's aunty's phone buzzed and she picked that in a go.


Brij: Maa sameera is not here even her phone is not responding ,, Nothing is coming in my mind ,, what to do? Where we go to search her? Do you know her friends?


Promila : No , i don't know ,, ab kya hoga? Barat aa chuki hai brij .


Brij in anger: mujhe nahi pata kya karna hai? Chacha ko bata do sab,, ab wo jane and cut d call.


Promila looked at Rajji helplessly ,, Rajji stood up and went out with heavy feet to call her bro and son.


She went to near Kamal who was at d gate ,, held his hand and dragged him in a lone place. Kamal was puzzled looking at her face which looking pale. Rajji's hands were shacking ,, she spoke in a cracky voice.


Rajji: Kamal apne Mahinder Mama ko bula ker lao abhi,, jao mei yahin hu.


Kamal left from there ,, he still was very confused over her Maa's weird behaviour. He went close to Mahinder and told him that his Maa was calling him right now , its urgent. Maninder came there and Rajji held his hands in hers and cried out.


Rajji: Bhai anarth ho gaya ,,, Sameera ka kuch pata nahi ,, wo Parlor se wapas nahi aai ,, gayab hai,, na phone hi utha rahi hai.


Mahinder and Kamal: Kya!!!!


They shoot many Q at her ,, She narrated them whole story.


Rajji: Brij and his friends were searching her. Ab kya hoga bhai? Barat aa chuki hai ,, hum unhe kya jawab denge? Hamare sath sath unki izzat bhi mitti mei mil jayegi ,, saying this she started sobbing.


Kamal: Maa , pahale aap rona band karo ,, sab ko shaq ho jayega ki kuch galat hua hai. Mamaji aap himmat rakhiye wo aa jayegi thodi aur wait kartey hai ,, Brij gaya hai na,, koi news dega ,, aap pahale Barat ko receive kijiye ,, baad mei baat kerty hai.


Mahinder in a low voice : Rajji , Kamal theek kehe raha hei ,, jao aur ab Barat ko receive tum karogi mere sath ,, samjhi.


Rajji: ji bhai.


Precap--- entry of angel



Sorry for mistakes.


Part - 2

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Love it graphics

feeling sad to give red smileys for maan in the first part itself... but mein kar bhi kya sakthi hooo😡😡😡 sammera se shaadi karne jaa raha tha????

loved the plot... jo ladki sameera ke saath thi wo kaun this... geet??? now will alll ask geet to sit in the mandap for the sake of family honiur???

will be waiting for the next... iska bhi daily milega???
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
kaun mere kachue ka mazaak uda rahaa tha...
dekh ... mein frst aayi ki nahi...

ab second bhi
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gud strt ,,,asha hua bhag gayee chudail pakka modelling karne gayee hogi,,,,ab angel aur maan ki shadi hogiii,,,,waiting 4 angels entry,,,,😊its gud babie beech mein thora color lite hei,,,check karna...😳
Edited by LILY111144 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
mein bhi aa gayee ,babie jaldi karo ,,,,,nini ayeeing,,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: LILY111144

mein bhi aa gayee ,babie jaldi karo ,,,,,nini ayeeing,,,,



😲 De diya..
Ab kahan bhatak rahi ho..??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: singh24



😲 De diya..
Ab kahan bhatak rahi ho..??

😆...punishmnt,,,,😛

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