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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: leksh
nice update...👏👏👏👏👏

I read the unedited comment... it was wonderful... why did you edit

Thanks Leksh😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash
Poor Maan... even crums are too less for what he is getting here😆 when compared to waht everyone else gets😆😆😆

My Sadist BHB 🤗

happy independence day 😃

hee hee...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

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Originally posted by: Onir
:)

Loved it ❤️

Happy independence day Avi 🤗 Feel so proud to be an Indian 😃

Maan babu has a lot of control to be practiced ... ye ladki Bambi bankar use sach mein pagal kradegi 😆 But great control hai ji 🤣 I'm sure he's going to take his sweet revenge later in their relationship with ten times more craving for her. 😳

You know me so well😆

I loved how you combined patriotism with romance and GHSP days 👏

Pappi chor 🤣 good one seriously 👏 Sab uske Geet se flirt kar rahe hai ... bacche bhi 😆😆but Maan has to be content that she's always going to end up in his arms for him to cocoon her within his love filled embrace. 😳

I have many more people lined up...😉

The whole date with their own private moments were lovely! 😳 And the intermingling of their thoughts introduced in each paragraph following gave a great insight 👍🏼

Boring tha... I always feel geeky writing their parts. I prefer Dr. K to him..

The whole desh bhakti angel you got in middle was well added in. 👏 Especially today when we celebrate our independence 😃 Yes untied we stand and hopefully the youth will bring in more unity, peace and prosperity to this country with is so secular, democratic and accepting of all different religions, castes, professions and people around... 👏

Loved the update ... thanks for updating 🤗

HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY 🤗

To you too Onir!

Thanks for being here..😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
now that's Maaneet special on independence day 😃

loved it ...

bus ek kiss miss hogaya 😉

continue soon

Complaint rejected madam.. 3 kisses were there...😆 Thanks!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: Tyro
pappi chor...😲...wo bhi maan ki pappi chura li...tut..tut...🤣

loved how u blended it all...

Happy Independence Day to u too dear...

Thanks Jyoti 😃 3 lines... progress for me..😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: sona-rai
Awesome full of Maaneet update yar muahhh.
Happy Independence day to u .

Thanks Sona😃

Get ready to deliver twins soon...😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: chavvi16
kyaa baat hai
independece day mein inka romance zinda hai
now thats what am talking about
she shall be the death of him
oh ho innocent kudiye you are gonna drive him crazy with your ada yaar
and poor him having to control so much right
man you so feel for the poor guy
oyye hoyye all were flirting with geet and that of course wont sit well with our hero
how can it right
chalo kuch aur progress between maneet
and yes soldiers are the ones who keep us safe
who fight for us protect us when needed
SALUTE TO THEM ALL FOR WHAT THEY DO FOR US
HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY TO ALL
cheers for pm

Thanks Chavvi. Glad you enjoyed it...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: punam2712
LOVELY UPDATE
MAAN IS HAPPY SHARING SMALL THINGS WITH HER

TODAY IT WAS DINNER AT A DHABA

HE WAS JEALOUS OF EVERYONE WHO EVEN LOOKED AT HER

AND HE DID BHANGRA WITH HER

WHAT A WONDERFUL MEMORY FOR BOTH OF THEM

So glad that you noticed that. Just her small acceptance and he has come out of his shell. I was hoping someone would catch that. Thanks Punam..😃