The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 39

Originally posted by: dqno1

THUD!!!!

Mere liye sirf 1 and 3 on both..😃

Han Bhaiyeee SalMaan aur Maan ki baat hi Kuch alag hai 😉😃

Aisse comments padh ke jaan mein jaan aayi...😃

Good Achi baat hai 😃

awesome update dear

Thanks for t lovely long update
Just brilliant

Happy eid to every one
This update was so romantic
Yep jab maan pas Ho tho kya screen wala salman he he

update maneet scene fab

it was awesome dear

Hi Avi,
Finally in 9 days I completed 36 parts of your 'The Locket' and d first feeling that I got as I finished d 36th part is that the story is still very young,abhi to bahut door jaana hai!!!!!
I told you previously that U r one of the best that GF has and now I can say that surely as I've read U.
I m reading stories on Maaneet since almost two years but can you believe for d first time my favorite character is not Maan or Geet [Tho I love them d most in this story too]
The character which appealed to me the most is of Naintara's.I instantly fell in love even when I didnt know that its NT.The crowded bus incident when she heeled d lech and den rebuked d aunty who tried to show false support.And as the story progressed I was more impressed by her and her life story saddened me.

I specially love your style of writing d story in two folds,which later became many folds with Poonam-chandan,Mitali,kabir-megha,Adi-pinky stories.And bravo to you to keep the story as you've planned though our readers demanded only for Maaneet.

Another amusing fact is that our Maan didnt talk much if not for last few updates,he almost kept mum and yet never failed to show his emotions.The best part of Maaneet story was when Maan went to drop Geet to the bus stop and then had an accident,the emotions were overwhelming.Then d part when Geet cried her heart out hugging Maan,god even I got tears.

If i say about Dev-Nt,i loved their initial fight and later their dilemma regarding their heart.The best part of their story was in that village when they had to share a room and Dev kissed her and then the part on Dev's birthday when he brokenheartedly said"Tum sad death night kahogi toh bhi chalega".God my heart went out for him.
Both Poonam's and Mithali's story compelled me to think what fate can make out of us.Kabir and chandan,it hurts to see both poor souls struggling.

Another salient feature of you writing is obviously your excellent use of music.You blend d songs so beautifuly with each emotion.All d VMs at the end are a treat.I havnt seen many of them previously.

But among all the songs my favourite one is the one u used first,for Maan and his parents-"Beqarar dil tu gaye jaa".I m deeply in love with old melodies but i was shocked that I cudnt remember this song,and I downloaded it immediately and since then I listen to it daily,I m jst in love with d lyrics and d situation of Maan's parents and later Maan singing it alone has imprinted in my mind.

I can go on and on but its not possible that I can explain my feelings in one post but I hope You got d gist,that I m deeply in love with d story.And you have one regular reader now onwards.

Bas ek confusion hai,why is d story called 'The Locket"?The mention of the locket has only been once,may be in d 1st part.May be I've to wait for that which I m ready to do.

Thanx to you for giving me d link of d awesome story.Otherwise I wud've missed it.Thanx Avi.

-Sampa

awww soo nice and superb update