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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

mostly wont be able to come tonite...

will read tom...


Lovely flowers. Thanks..😃 Kal padhna..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Avi koi kyun mar rahi hai 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Firsttt 🥳

Bhb 🤗

maan better win over Sallu 😉
Edited by Loquacious_Aash - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Spell binding update yaara
Maaneet ka jaadu jab chalta hain toh bas sar chad ke bolta hain😳
Simply superb!!!!!

Megha's birthday + Eid + Dabangg😉

Maan has more competition now SRK and SK but he is also MSK😳

Loved the little insight to Maan-Megha bond😊
and Megha-Kabir fiasco was sad
Megha trying to be normal and cordial to Kabir will wait for Megha's POV about Kabir and Kabir in his insecurities and problems trying to shoo her away from him. But still can't help getting attracted to her😕

Finally movie day and Maaneet in a private box😛
Maan aaj Geet ke Babaji se kuch aur bhi maang leta toh shayad mil jaata
Khair Eidi kya kamaal ki mili movie + dinner😉

Avi I just loved the way you wove the song sequence in the update and the description that followed was just fabulous yaara
I felt I am watching them in real☺️
Kudos for the lovely update
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Maan dreaming about the moments he would love to spend with Geet in their future
Seeing them together as one was so touching😳
Dil ko chu gaya❤️

Kabir did come but Megha left
sometimes ones words acts like swords once the damage is done its difficult to undo it
Megha ka dard kaante ban ke uske dil mein chubhe

Maaneet on a dinner date to the dhabha☺️
Waiting
😃

I am truly sorry for all the delay
and thanks for being there U guys really mean a lot
🤗 🤗


Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice... njoyed it... liked the way maan puts sunglasses at the end (dabaang way 😆 )
it was nice happy part after the sad ones... except the kabir crushing the rose 😡... everything else just brings smile on the face... 😊

waiting when kabir doesnt have to crush his rose...

👏👏


Edited by miss_dreamy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

Firsttt 🥳


Bhb 🤗

maan better win over Sallu 😉


chamaat maar dungi 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
:)

So sorry for such a late comment

Coming to the update... indeed wishes did come true ... for one couple it brought intimacy and romance while for other it brought pain and granting of so felt distance... but yet there was one thing common both shared a dimension of love - pleasure as well as pain. 👏

I liked the start itself... the gradual comfort and silent understanding between M-G while they exchanged a warm and silent wish of greeting even in a crowd showed how far they've come from the ones who were though aware of each other but always craved to have that conversation. 😳

The "khan" gang is a tough competition for Maan ... none sparing him a respite... Koi na koi tapak hi jata hai... 🤣 But loved the jokes and gig Maan-Adi had on Salman by the kabootar talk and the towel dance 😆

Tere mast mast do nain is one of my favorite songs and I loved the inclusion here and your version of it in the story... made this song all the more cherished for me ❤️

Kabir-Megha ... poor souls. i don't know about Megha's feelings for him as of now for sure, but yes I can bet a bit on her awareness and her ache with his distancing. Megha wanting to be close to him and offer the only one thing she possess that she can give him freely ... her friendship; While Kabir with his insecurities and the kicks life has made him endure wants to keep distance in fear of hurt and sympathy which he doesn't deserve and also wants to protect both her and himself form something which is inevitable and something that has already deep within him for her. Both have the same connection here of being almost an orphan... I think that's why connects with hi m while he's blinded by his pain and failures and misunderstood her to be a Khurana - someone out of his league. I loved that line "The rose twists in my hand, the thorn pinching me deeply drawing blood." Spoke of their pain in love and so beautifully worded for the situation. 👏👏

Maan bhai is in protective mode here for his dear sister 😉

Geet has started lowering her guard and at least started admitting her true feelings to self for now (Though he too is able to read them through her acts and unspoken words.. ) 😳 The feeling of "Us" she associates for him being with her. 😳👏

Arey waah private movie screening for them ... puri kayanat ne unko milane ki saazish ki hai (Through Avi) 😉

Mayank and his Mrs... tell me how many love stories are going to be blended in... (Not that I mind.. its like a bonus for me 😳) Because of them some cozy and intimate moments for our silent couple 😉

I loved the whole scoreboard and restlessness and comfort it kept providing Maan 😆 Bechara kya kya dhyan mein rakhe Jab Geet itne kareeb hai 😆 But loved how it ended with him loving the movie too as well as the songs as it brought them much closer ... ❤️ With her silent confession of feeling and knowing no Salman but only Maan in her whole existence. 👏

His black blending with the surrounding yet him wanting her sole attention on him 👏👏

The whole movie with their associated intimacy was 👏😳 Her shyness, his bold steps forward for them yet careful for her... and perceptive, her holding onto him showing her comfort and trust on him while him dreaming of their togetherness... 😳😳😳 ❤️ 👏

His fantasies of her being in his kurta sometime in life... but somehow I don't want to name it fantasy but some dreams of true love (Such beautiful love you have shown between them 👏)

Laughed for his dabaang style with sunglasses tucked behind... and them sharing that laughter.. 😳

Waiting for the dhaba date 😳😉

Continue soon... 😊

🤗


Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update. Loved it. How can I not, when u gave us a big dose of Maneet romance.

Geet is shy, but still trying to reach out to Maan.

Maan is in 7th heaven.

Waiting for dhaba romance. Update soon.
Edited by custodian75 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

❤️ ❤️ ❤️

I could scream!!!
The formatting is driving me crazy... ho hi nahi raha...😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


I could scream!!!
The formatting is driving me crazy... ho hi nahi raha...😭😭


What formatting? The chapter is appearing perfect. 😕

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