KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#2,NEXT THREAD ADDED

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

Geet gelled up with everyone in Maan's family easily. Except Garv..Avi too became her friend.. I laughed at Geet's thought..when maan was keeping an eye on her to keep her safe in party... 😆 Vidhaut's apology n then geet's forgiveness.. Geet is crazy sometimes..🤣 So now Geet too completed bond. so they can now sense each others trouble easily.. Geet got Maan super power.. so she was able to find that kid.. Maneet kissy wissy kuch jyada ho rahi hain..😉 N I m liking it..😳 I was eagerly waiting for this update..N now waiting for next part..

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

brilliant dear

this maan is crazy. She was asking Qs about werewolf's life n there he was busy in knowing is she wearing her inner?😆😆

she was blank for a sudden when she had marked maan as her, why that happen?

& how come she know where that kid was?

I am your super power. But for now consider me a curse.

What do he mean by this?

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#493

awesomly awesome mindblowing update yar:)

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Superb long long update... Loved reading it...

Glad Maan's family are very caring and mingling well with Geet..It was really funny the way Geet behaved with the guard that harm her.

Maaneet's bed time question game was really interesting to read... Both had marked each other..

I really feel sad reading Geet's monologue... Her past life.. her family.. her ambition.. her life style.. she was forced to abandoned it.. Is this all? Doesn't she have a choice to make.. Why didn't Geet voice it up to Maan?

Geet is confused with her feelings towards Maan.. some point she eager to be with Maan and the next she refuse to acknowledge him.

I think Geet got a special power .. she could sense people's being. But looks like Maan is trying to hide it.. Why? Will it harm Geet?

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d_sonia

@d_sonia

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

Awesome update
Loved it
Amazingly written...
Awe loves maaneet's moments...
Oh how did geet found the kid... Confused a bit..
Loving the story so interesting n thrilling...
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

WOWW...

tht was really an awesome part dear...m totally flat...actually its my condition every time after every part of this FF...😉.

poor maan jealous with a little puppy...😆😆.

m touched with geet's thoughts...it may be an adventurus life being with maan and his mate...but who will want to have paired with a werewolf tht too for life...with loosing her everything...????...she was always an ambitious girl in her life...with high dreams of making her own neche...😕😕

will maan understand this ever...until now maan's character priority is his ego, his family and his clan's values...now when geet has entered his life, he is slowly being aware of her presence, in his heart, his room, his den and his family...but wht about geet...how long can she live as only being his mate and nothing else...🤔...

well...now as geet has bite him and she hav some superpowers😎...was this illusion and focus light is also included in her superpowers...as she can be pulled by this illusion to the place concern....and her and maan's mind are connected now...😵.????...well maan called it curse...????...i know we will hav the answers in next part...but still curious...as our devil writer will update this FF in next month...😈...

m waiting for more dear...

plzz continue soon...

Edited by manikka - 11 years ago