MG-Her first word#2 (NEW- OS link pg-107 /jan21) - Page 30

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I know the story has completed 16 parts already and its little late to comment on each part, but just wanted to recap the highlights I felt in the story nonetheless all parts were equally great with so many wow moments.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">First of all - Aa</font>ru and Maansi are so cute and adorable, and the whole family too.

And about the parts :

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Part 1 - Aaru wants to become PAPAand wants to marry a girl whose name is Mishty. 😆</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">P3 and P4 - 'Aajkal sharif ladkon ka ghar se nikalana mushkil ho gaya hain'🤣and Maansi slapping Maan as if she understood the meaning of 'all girls are stupid'.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">P9 and P10 - Aaru innocently saying 'main to chhota sa baby tha na...'</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">P15 - Aaru stretching his hands wide to convince Maan that he missed him so much and Maansi's big tears after seeing Maan.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">and last but not the least,👏for you for picking up day-to-day events for this story and depicting them so well.</font>

its never late to express ur heart..and i loved how u mentioned these moments...honestly i always try n wish that these kind of little-little moments should catch my readers attention..and am extreamly happy that u were affected by them the way i wanted!
In our day to day life..there are so many incidents like these which makes u smile as well as gives u memorise to charish all ur life! And specially with kids..u can never know when & how they will surprise u with their cute & innocent gestures and new learned things..;-)

Originally posted by: drashtimeetu

Haanji update kab milega
Its tooo long u update

na hi naa hello..meri toh fikar hi nahi hai kisiko..:-(

Finally caught u
shona hws u
kidar gayab

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">Also, if possible please add Geet's interactions with the kids along with Maan in future parts...waiting for the next part.
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ya..i had that in my mind already..all are missing kids bonding with their mumma..;)
will update soon hopefully..:-)

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Finally caught u
shona hws u
kidar gayab

am fine dear..how r u?
I was stuck with some personal problems dear..so couldnt cum online..aur mood bhi nhi tha.

Originally posted by: Shonameet

na hi naa hello..meri toh fikar hi nahi hai kisiko..:-(

Gayab ho gye thw without telling

Originally posted by: drashtimeetu

Gayab ho gye thw without telling

kuch problems thi...though i'll update time to time bt wont be online daily now..

Teaser:
"Maan..aapko toh na main baad me dekh lungi..aur aaru baby ab na aapko wo chocolates bhi nahi milengi, jo papa laaye the.." ..geet warned them both.
Aaru pouted hearing that.. "papa.." he complained about it to his papa, making a sad face. Maan, who couldnt see his champ being upset, pulled aaru to himself and wisphered something...making him to smile again.

Nic teaser
Bt want long long long update

Part17
Downstairs, all were waiting for them. "ye teeno kahan rah gaye..?" ..dadi asked.
"pata nahi..main dekhti hoon.." ..geet replied getting up and headed up stairs.
She could hear gigles & laughs as she got near to their bedroom. She found the room empty..but the voices were coming from the bathroom. Geet stood at the bathroom door, shocked to see their drenched forms. "ye kya ho raha hai..?"..she asked sternly making them to stop their water splashing game abruptly. All three...aaru, maan & maansi looked at her hearing her vioce. "hmm..kya hai ye sab..?"..geet asked pointing at their wet clothes while moving towards them and took maansi from maan. Aaru who enjoyed their little game..answered in excitment filled voice.."mumma..hum barish-barish khel rahe the..aur na bahut maza aaya...haina papa..?" his eyes were shining with glint...which in turn made maan happy and he nodded with a smile..agreeing with his champ.."haan bahut-bahut maza aaya.." ..& he packed his champ on his cheek.
"achha toh aap sab ko sach me bahut maza aaya..han gudiya..?" ..geet asked tickling maansi who laughed & tried her best to escaped making geet chuckle at her attempts. On the other side, maan thought something and looked at his son. They both exchanged a naughty look & next both splashed water at geet..making her stunned for a second..then angery, as she had already had her bath just an hour ago..while maansi who too was feeling the cold water, as she was in geet arms, was laughing & sequeling loudly. Geet kept shouting & warning them to stop..but the father-son were not at all interested in listening her..insted they kept splashing more & more water on her. Atlast, she managed to run out of the bathroom with maansi..while maan & aaru were laughing enjoying her plight.
"maan..aapko toh main baad me dekh lungi..aur aaru baby, ab na aapko wo chocolates bhi nahi milenge..jo papa laaye hai.." ..she warned while wiping her self with a towel.
Hearing this, aaru pouted.. "papa.." he looked at his papa complaining to him with a sad face. Maan, who couldnt see his champ being upset, pulled aaru to himself & wisphered something to him making him smile again.
Both moved to bedroom where geet was..
"Sorry mumma.."
geet looked up hearing the two familier voices and saw maan & aaru, both holding their ears..appologising so sincearly. Aaru was looking at her with hopefull eyes..while maan gestured her through his eyes to accept their sorry. She melted with their looks only..but still wanted to maintain her stern expressions... But she couldnt help chuckeling when she saw them looking at eachother with a thoughtful look..and next they changed the positions of their hands..now maan was on his knees, trying to match aaru's level..and was holding aaru's ears.. while aaru was holding his papa's ears with slight difficulty..
"SORRY na..mummaaa.."
geet shook her head at their antics.. "come here.." she called aaru smiling at him. As aaru came near her she kissed his cheeks.."its ok shona.." geet replied..bringing a smile on aaru's face.
"AUR MAIN..? What about me? I also said na SORRY .." ..maan asked with a naughty grin making geet blush..still she managed to answer back.. "aapko toh punishment milegi.."
"aur woh kyun..?" ..maan asked curiously.
"kyunki..mujhe achhe se pata hai..ke ye shararat aapne hi start ki hogi..haina shona.." geet asked aaru who nodded innocently.
"dekha..i knew it..ab toh aapki punishment pakki.." ..geet said jokingly...but poor aaru baby took it seriously.
"sachii mumma..? Aap papa ko punish karoge..?" ..aaru asked, worried for his papa.
Geet nodded positively to his question while maan was amused as well as delighted, seeing so much concerned for himself on his son's face.
"aur papa ki punishment hai ki..unko na ek bhi chocolate nahi milegi.." ..geet bite her cheeks to stop her smile..as maan raised his brows at her, hearing her "punishment".
Though it was maan who got this so called punishment...but it looks like instead of him, aaru was the one who was being punished here. His expressions were so cute..those pouting lips, that frown & a disapproving look.. He was feeling sorry for his papa and was not at all happy with this punishment that his mumma has decided for his papa.
"mumma...ek bhi nahi...only one..please.." ..aaru tried to help his papa.
A constant smile was playing on maan's lips all the while...as he witnessed his son's care & concern for him.
Geet wanted to laugh at that but continued her act..
"no..bilkul bhi nahi.." .. She refused straightly..wanting to see what more aaru will do now.
But to her surprise, aaru didnt said anything after that..instead he moved close to maan and wisphered but it was still audiable for her... "papa..dont be sad han..hum na..meri wali chocolates share karenge..chupke se..ok..?" ..aaru offered so innocently..that it made both maan & geet to chuckle and feel proud of their cutipie's innocent & pure heart.