MG-Her first word#2 (NEW- OS link pg-107 /jan21)

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chhavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: lehr
cute update 😊

thanks dear:)

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chhavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Ash1991
Sho shweet update...
Loving aru n maani...

thank u..
Glad that u r loving them..:)

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chhavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: ShadiaKhurram
awesome update
having lovely time with his kids

thank u so much for liking:)

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chhavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: AIMAMSK
lovely update dear

thank u so much:)

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chhavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Wow!! Such a lovely story like a beautiful collage of cute and happy family moments and you have captured them in a magnificent way. 👏

I read it twice and had a big smile on my face while reading it, it was so pleasant and refreshing.

Keep up the good work 👍🏼 and I wish you to give many more parts before Maani speaks her first word.

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

I know the story has completed 16 parts already and its little late to comment on each part, but just wanted to recap the highlights I felt in the story nonetheless all parts were equally great with so many wow moments.

First of all - Aaru and Maansi are so cute and adorable, and the whole family too.

And about the parts :

Part 1 - Aaru wants to become PAPA and wants to marry a girl whose name is Mishty. 😆

P3 and P4 - 'Aajkal sharif ladkon ka ghar se nikalana mushkil ho gaya hain' 🤣 and Maansi slapping Maan as if she understood the meaning of 'all girls are stupid'.

P9 and P10 - Aaru innocently saying 'main to chhota sa baby tha na...'

P15 - Aaru stretching his hands wide to convince Maan that he missed him so much and Maansi's big tears after seeing Maan.

and last but not the least, 👏 for you for picking up day-to-day events for this story and depicting them so well.

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Also, if possible please add Geet's interactions with the kids along with Maan in future parts...waiting for the next part.

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 years ago

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chhavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
Wow!! Such a lovely story like a beautiful collage of cute and happy family moments and you have captured them in a magnificent way.👏

I read it twice and had a big smile on my face while reading it, it was so pleasant and refreshing.

Keep up the good work 👍🏼and I wish you to give many more parts before Maani speaks her first word.

thank u so much dear for liking & apriciating this story so much. It feels great to know that it brought a smile on ur face..it means alot to me..i'll surely give u many more moments to smile..i promise u that..keep reading n keep smiling..:-)