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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa



Yap, I missed him so much. Actually I am fond of all geet forums where maan is "papa"
I love his caring nature,bonding with his child and his way of being a family man.

Aapko fever tha, cough tha, chakker aa rahe the,thand lag rahi thi...hua na bulletin...!!...😆

haww..u were making fun of me all the while..:O
katti..katti..katti..:-(
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Awesome...
want an update...FASTTT!!!!!

sorry sisy..bt this one will be updated tomorrow..;-)
thoda intezar karo..mayu dear..;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Teaser:
he was lost admiring them, when he heard his mishti's voice..
"Maan.."
..geet was surprised seeing him there..
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He hugged her tightly.. "missed u.." ..he mumered softly.
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"aeyye.. my cry baby.." maan teased her..

hi.. :-)
Another teaser.. But for 1st time, its about maaneet. Am nervouss..what u all think about it..do tell me..
-Shona.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww cute teaser 2 waiting for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part14
He entered in the house with slow steps, careful to not to make any noise. He wanted to give surprise to his family, thats why hadnt told anyone about him coming back.
As he reached in the hall area.. he himself got a very pleasnt & sweet surprise! The sight, that welcomed him was beautiful & instantly brought a smile on his face.
His three babies.. his champ, his gudiya & his lil sis.. were sleeping so peacefully! He moved towards them slowly and settled on the floor, near them. He kept looking at their sleeping forms. Seeing them after whole 5 days, made him realised that how much he has been missing them actually.
He crasses aaru's face who was stuck between the two girls. Then his eyes moved to his princess..his suddenly felt so emotional..he has missed his kids so much! He leaned forward and kissed all the three on their foreheads, one by one.
He sat there, admiring their clam faces. He looked at annie.. Who was looking like a cute baby..like the one she used to be in her childhood...and wondered, is she the same girl who becomes a real devil..troubling him all the time!

He was still busy admiring them..when he heared his mishti's voice, calling him..
"maan.."
geet was really surprised seeing him there..as he had told them that he will be coming late, at night.
Maan gesture her to be quite..so that his babies wont be disturbed.
He moved towards geet and hugged her tightly to himself & kissed her hair. "missed u so much.." ..he mumered softly.
"i missed u too.." ..geet replied, hugging him back even more tightly. Maan pulled back, hearing her emotional voice..and saw her teary eyes..
He wiped her tears before they could flow.. "aye..my cry baby.." ..he teased her to cheer her mood..and that work pretty well..
"am not a cry baby.." geet tried to show her fake anger but there was slight smile on her lips..which gave her way.
"achh..ur not a cry baby.. But u accept that ur my baby..han..?" maan winked at her teasing her again.. That made her blush..before she could deny it..dadima joined them.
After talking to dadima for few minutes..maan went to his room to freshen up!
*****

geet was trying to wake aaru, who wanted to sleep more. Maansi has waken a few minutes before and was in the lawn with dadima..
"aaru.. baby wake up..dekho, aaj toh gudiya bhi aap se pehle uth gai hai.." ..geet said, cressing aaru's hair.
"uhhn..mumma.." ..aaru mumbled, and turned to othe side.
"aaru..baby uth jao na.." ..geet tried again..
At that moment maan was coming downstair..and he called aaru while apporching him, " aaru.."
though aaru was in half sleep..still he recognised his papa's voice..
"papa..aur sona hai.." ..aaru mumbled, still in sleep.
Maan smiled hearing his reply..and asked.. "aaru..shona..papa ke sath office nahi chalna ..?"
and that did it! Aaru opened his sleepy eyes and sat up. He looked at maan for moment..who now was sitting in front of him... and then jumped with excitment..
"PAPA.." he shouted..hugging maan tightly around his neck.
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update so maan is back its enf before start why so short update waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome updat
But its tooo small
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi dear! Superb update! Maan is back! Teases Geet! He missed his family so much! Aaru happy dat his dad is home! well written, update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update dear
maan is back from his trip😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...
so finally maan cm bk...
welcome bk home...

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