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Posted: 12 years ago
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MG SS ~Shadow of his love~

Part 10


geet take maan to the dance floor, maan just smiled nd let her do whatever she want...
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geet put her one hand in maans shoulder nd other on his hand...
maan placed his hand on geet's waist, that make geet shiver...

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maan smile to his affect on geet...
nd the music starts...
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kurnaan hua...

Kurbaan hua
Teri tishnagi mein yun
Kurbaan hua
Teri aashiqui mein yun

Bekhudi mein bekali mein
Bekasi mein hua
Tujhko har duaa di, aur dagaa bhi
Aur fanaa hua


maan was dancing with her very carefully as geet said she didn't want to dance in saree...

Kurbaan huaaa'
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..
Ada pe'wafa pe'.jafa pe
Kurbaan huaaa
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa'

Ru-ba-ru hai tu magar
Tanha hai yeh jahaan


geet was just adoring him...
his eyes that make anyone fall for him...
his hands which make shiver anyone with one touch...
his lips which have a perfectly shaped as M
She want to touch them, feel them...

Jal uthe meri kufr se
Saanson ka yeh samaan
Ooo'
Kya hua
Pal mein jaane kho gaya kyon
Tu mila aur judaa imaan hua yun

Bekhudi mein bekali mein
Bekasi mein hua
Tujhko har duaa di, aur dagaa bhi
Aur fanaa hua

Kurbaan huaaa'
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..
Ada pe'wafa pe'.jafa pe
Kurbaan huaaa
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa'


maan was watching geet with full desire...

firstly their dance was just slow but thn slowly it become passionate...

both was forget everything, they was just feeling each other heartbeats...

Marne ka sabab
Maangta raha dar-ba-dar
Mitne ko toh dil
Pal mein raazi hua
Poori hui har aarzoo
Har daastaan meri
Ke tum shuru hue jahan
Main khatam hua

Kurbaan huaaa'
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..
Ada pe'wafa pe'.jafa pe
Kurbaan huaaa
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa'

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the song ended but maan don't knw why he just don't want to stop
he just want to be near geet...
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everyone on the party was watcing maaneet nd their passionate dance...
girls was burn to see geet with the most hottest guy in the party...
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then some girls went near MAAN...
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1 girl: hey sexy... you r too good in dance, come lets dance with mee
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geet was like O... some girl calling his MAAN, sexy??
2nd girl: no hotie we can make a good pair, come we should dance...
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geet was getting more angry...

3rd: no prince, i'm trained dancer in salsa, come we will dance...
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maan was getting irritated with their comments... He was about to shut but one girl come nd kiss maan in his cheeks..
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Geet was in too much angry... she pushed the girl nd take maan out of this party...
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Firstly Maan was irritated with the girls act, he want to sa something to them but geet take him out...
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geet truned to other side...
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maan: tum mujhe bahar kyun laye ho geet?? atleast mujhe unhe kuch kehne to dete??
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geet: kya kehte haa app?? jab woh ladki apko kiss kar rahe thi tab toh kuch nahi kaha apne...
nd then woh tin chural jab apko SEXY, HOTIE bol rahe the, tab kyun nahi bola apne kuch??
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now maan understand that geet is getting Jealous & now she is too much angry...
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maan: geet main kehne he wala tha but...
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geet: but kya ha?? bohot maza aa raha tha unn ladki o ke sath...
actually main aapko yaha la he lyun jaiye... apke hot hot girlfrnds apka wait kar rahe honge...
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maan: geet listen to me yaar...
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geet: kya sunu main?? kuch nahi sunna mujhe jao aap yaha se...
aur do tin KISS bki honge na...
sirk gaal pe he kyun lips pe kiss karo na...
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maan was getting angry with geet as she was not listening to her...
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maan: you're right i should also kiss them on their lips...
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geet was shocked MY MAAN WILL KISS THEM...
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Maan: i should go...
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maan truned to leave but geet pushed him to the wall nd start KISSING his lips angryliy ...
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maan was shocked, he don't knw what he do... kiss her back or push her??
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but then kiss trying enter in his mouth to give him a full kiss...
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maan was now losing his control , so he gave up nd kiss geet back...
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this was the most passionate moment for them...
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finally want of breath make the kiss broke...
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geet come back to her sense, tearing start coming out frm her eyes...
geet truned to leave
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maan don't want to make her guilt...
so maan hold geet's wrist, turned geet{which make geet fall in his arms}
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geet was trying to push hom but maan tightly hugged her...
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maan: Geet you have the only right on me... to kiss me, to feel me... nobody have the rights without you...
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hearing this comment geet also hugged him tightly nd cried...
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maan: aab toh rona band kar do angel...
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geet didn't sto
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maan: r u crying for what happened between us??
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geet broke the hugged nd looked into his eyes...
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geet: noo maan thats not true...
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maan cupped her face: then what happend?
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geet: actually
woh...
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maan: tell na??
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geet: woh Kiss you very harshly na you maybe get hurted {nd start crying}
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maan{smiles to see her innocence}:ooo my sweet angel i'm fine, i didn't get hurted...
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geet: noo u r a liar...
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maan: i promise main thik hu angel... this was the best moment of my life...
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geet: sachi??
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maan: muchi... now give me a hug...
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geet hugged him tightly...
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geet: you're best..
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maan: i knw that...
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Precap: maan's wish...😳😳
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Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Yipee me first.. hayee that was so lovely. possessive jealous Geet..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
awesome part
geet jealous seeing girls flirting with maan
geet kissed maan
maaneet first kiss
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Wow yaar. Geet toh cha gyi. Waiting 4 maan wish
Edited by priya_21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
sorry yaar,,,,cant press like...😕...lovely update..awww geet got jealous and kiss maan..hayeee😳😳😳😳beautiful maaneet moment..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
awesome update
kiss was superb
geet innocence was hilarious👏
cont soon
waiting 4 maan wish
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Lvd it.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
part 10
lovely...
haye first kiss...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Thank you very much Buddies for ur support..!!!
Love you All who are reading this & liking my writings...
And lots of HugS who r also commenting...
You comments means a lot lot to me...
Thank You...

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~Shadow Of His Love~


Part 11
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>> After their Kiss, Maaneet leave the party & think to went home...
The drive was full silent, geet was still blushing for what happened between them...
Maan was just smiling thinking about geet... how much innocent,she is... nd also too much possesive towards him...
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They reach in geet's house...
Car stop & both was still slient...
Geet open the door to leave but maan hold her wrist & stop her..
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maan: geet tum kuch bhul rahe ho..
geet: kya maan?
maan: tumne kaha tha agr main tumhare sath party main aata hu toh tum mujhe kuch do ge...
geet: ohh haa!! kahiye apko kya chahiye??
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maan: geet i want you to work with me...
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geet: what?
maan: look geet,, you r myfriend i can't see u like this...
main nahi chahta tum har jaga job ke liye ghuri raho... so i want u to join me in my office..
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geet: maan i can't do that...
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maan: why not geet? is anything wrong in working with me?
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geet: no maan.. but still i want to get job by my own... i don;t feel like having job as i'm ur frnd...
plzz maan don't force me...
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maan: look angel i'm not forcing you !! i just want you to work with me...
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geet: Maan i can't... plzz
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maan: plzz naa geet... i promise main tumhe koi special treatment nahi dunga office main... tum sirf ek normal employ banke to kaam kar sakte ho na...
plzz dear at least for me...
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geet: maan plzz... i don't think this is a right decision plzzz...
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maan: geet plzz na yaar... agar tum mere jagh hote toh kya tum mujhe offer nahi karte??
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geet: aur agar mere jagah pe hote to kya aap maante??
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maan: geet mere baat aur hain...
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geet {smiles} : sab ki baat ek he hain maan... main nahi kar sakte apke sath kaam... i will find job by myself...
nd i know my friend will support me...
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maan: ok as ur wish... but tumne promise kiya tha main tumse jo bhi manggunga tum mujhe do ge... nd u r saying no...
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geet: maan plzz na try to understand me...
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maan: as ur wish... good night..
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geet: maan aap gusha karoge toh mujhe neend nahi aa ye ge..plzz na...
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maan: then say yes..
geet: maan !!!
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maan: geet...
ok one idea!!
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geet: kya??
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maan: look kal humare company main junior arcitcet ka job interview hain... so u will gove it...
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geet: maan baat toh ek he hui naa...
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maan: no geet.. bohot farak hain... kyun ki kal dad interview lenge... nd i promise main kuch nahi bolunga unhe.. agar unhone tumhe accept kar liya toh tum kaam karoge na??
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geet: main kese mann lu ke aap kuch nahi bologe apne dad ko?
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maan: don't u trust me??
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geet: i trust you maan... but i still don't feel that its right...
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maan: no need to think more as i'm here to take out all ur tensions... so now u go sleep well...
nd morning cme to office...
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geet: okk... Good night take care...
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maan: good night...
maan went near geet... kiss her forehead ..
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geet: *blushed*
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maan: byee angel...
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geet also kiss maan's cheeks nd tell bye nd run away...
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maan smile & blush...
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maan {st} : tum sabse aalag ho geet... aur sabse khass!!!! Sab kuch apne balbude pe karna chahti ho...
aur koi hota toh pehle baar main ha bool deta...
but You are an angel...
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main aaj ka din kabhi nahi bhulunga geet...
Tonight was the best moment of my life with my friend
with my angel GEET...
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Maan in his home...
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Shalini was waiting for maan...
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maan entered KM nd saw that his mom siting in the sofa...
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maan sit beside his mom...
maan: abhi tak aap sone nahi gaye maa.
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S: nahi beta,, tu bahar rehta hain tih mujhe neend he nahi aate...
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M: maa aap bhi na... mere itni fikaar koro ge toh DAD jealous feel karen ge {teasingly}
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S: chup badmash apne maa se koi asse baat karta hain??
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M: main toh apne dost se baat kar raha hua... mere maa toh soo rahe hain...
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S: smiles...
Maan put his head in his mother's lap...
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S: kya baat hain maan... aapko hume kuch batana hain??
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m: nahi maa...
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s: toh phir?? aapko toh jab bhi humse kuch kehna hota hain tabhi aap humare gidi main soote ho...
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M: nahi maa... aaj bass mann kar raha hain...
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s: aap nahi baatana chahte toh hum apko force nahi karenge...
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m: maa ...
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S: kaho maan kya batana hain...
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M: maa she is very innocent you knw??
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S: kon??
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m: Geet...
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S {smiles} : finally aapko koi toh ladki ache lage..
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m: nahi maa... main wese nhi soch raha.. we r just friends...
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s: woh toh hume dikh he raha hain...
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m: maa plz na...
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s: ok baba... aab bolo woh kese dikh te hain...
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m: Ek massum se Jaan...
Jisse sabse hain pyar...
Jo chotte baato pe ro de te hain baar baar...
Woh main meri ANGEL GEET...

S: wah wah aab mere bete ki angel bhi hain??
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m: haa toh?? woh sirf mere angel hain...
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s: acha?? aur kehte ho wesa kuch nahi hain... maan tum abhi bhi bilkul bache ho...
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m: maa aap mera mazak urrah rahe ho?
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s: noo beta... i'm just telling you that u r still budhu...
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m: aapko pata geet ne bhi mujhe budhu kaha tha...
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S: bilkul sahe kaha hain... apko apne mann ki baat he nahi samaj main aate...
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m: maa nothing is like that... we r just good friends...
aur wese bhi teen din main kisi se pyar toh ho nahi sakta...
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S: pyar hone ke liy ek pal kahi hota hain...
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m: aap bhi na maa... bilkul dadi ki tarah ho gaye ho... har baat main pyar- shadi...
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s: dekh lenge... aur agar wesa kuch hua toh...
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maan stood up & kiss his mom's head
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maan: assa nahi hoga, hum ache dost hain...
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s {smiles} : dekh lenge... now good night beta...
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m: gd ni8 maa
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Maaneet went to sleep with each others thoughts...
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Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan moom ne sahi kahe hai...tum sach mein buddhu ho...pyar toh hogaya mehsoos karna aur ehsaa hona aur manna baki hai...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...




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