MG SS ~Shadow Of His Love~ {NOTE iN pg 81}

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Saru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Loved it !!!!
Update soon !!!!!!

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Awesome update
Geet is so cute .
Let see wht happen next

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

part 6
lovely part dear...
will Geet tell him about her job hunt?

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

part 7
awesome dear...
cont soon dear...

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nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

thnks u so much buddies for ur likes nd comments...
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EID MUBARAK 😊😊

~Shadow Of His Love~

Part 8

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Morning ...

Maan was still sleeping ...
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nd geet can't able to sleep... as she is thinking hw should she ask maan about the party? she was just waiting for morning to call maan...
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As she saw that its 6 am, she immedatedly called maan...
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maan sleep was was broken when hi phn start rinnging..
maan: who wants to disturb me noew in morning??
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but when he saw that it was his angel, he picked up..
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maan: gd morning angel...
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geet: morning maan {sadly/slowly}
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maan: hey angel what happened?? why u r sounding so low??
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geet: woh ek baat karne thi aapse??
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maan: anytime, bolo lya baat hain jo tumhe itna paresan kar rahe hain??
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geet: woh na actully...
hmm
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maan: aage bolo to tabhi to main kuch help kar paunga...
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geet: woh na mere ek frnd ne party rakhe hain or uss main.
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maan: party main kya?.
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geet: sab na apne apne boyfrnd ke sath ja rahe or mere sare frnds chahte hain ke main bhi jauu...but..
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maan {smiles} : but aapka boyfrnd nahi hain right?? toh aab?
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geet: wahi toh... lekin thore log sirf ladke dost ke sath bhi jaa rahe hain...
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maan: soo?
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geet {angryily} : maan aap itne budhu kyun ho?? main kya keh rahe hu zara samjho na...
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maan {try to control his laughter to her baby behaviour}
: mujhe toh kuch samaj main nahi aa raha... tum saf saf bolo na main kya karu??
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geet: ohh babaji kitna budhu dost mila hain mujhe..😉
maan main chahte hu aap mere sath party main chalo agar apko koi problem na ho tah???
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maan: hmmm
woh
actually na...
main... {maan was teasing geet}
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geet: nahi aana hain toh sidhe sidhe na bol do itna natak karne ki jarurat nahi hain,...
bye mujhe aapse koi baat nahu karne...
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maan: arre arre geet mere puri baat toh suno...
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geet: nahi sunna mujhe...
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maan: agar main kahu main pary main jaunga tumahare sath tabhi bhi nahi??
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geet: {get happy} : sachi aap aa o ge??
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maan: anything fo my angel...
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geet: oh maan thnk thank thank thank you so much...
I really LOVE YOU...
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maan: what???😲 {now maan gets happy}
what did u say?? say again??
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geet {back to her sense}: woh kya kaha main.. thank you...
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maan: uske baad...
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geet: kuch bhi toh nahi... {st (geet tu bhi na)}
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maan: u r a liar...
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geet: i'm not...
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maan: then say..
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geet: maan bolo na kuch nahi...
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maan: ok as ur wish...
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geet: plzz na maan gussa maat karo...
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maan: its ok {smiles}
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geet: party aaj raat ko hain 7:00 baje hain nd dress code gents black nd ladies white...
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maan: ok toh main kab aau tumhe pick karne??
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geet: hmm 6:30...
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maan: ok wese main khirki se aau ya door se?? {teasingly}
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geet: aab bahar aake mujhe call karna main aa jaunge...
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maan: as u say... wese mujhe kya mile ga party main aane se??
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geet: anything u want...
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maan: soch lo geet iss bar ice-cream nahi kuch khass chahiye...
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geet: kya khass?
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maan: woh toh baad main bataunga... first say will u give me?
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geet: hmm
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okk...
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maan: pakka??
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geet: pakka promise.. now bye hv a good day...
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maan: u too angel.. bye...
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call ended...

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The day went very firstly...
Maan complete his work in office nd come back home to geet ready...
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maan get ready in his black Armany suit...
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he come dowmstairs to tell his mom that he is going out...
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maan to shalini: maa...
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S: ha maan??
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M: mom i going out for a party maybe will be late...
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S: what?? MAAN SINGH KHURANA who always hates to go to parties now going in party?? r u alright?
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maan {laugh} : yaap maa... i'm good... nd nothing happened to me...
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S: My MAAN is changing... {smiles} nd i like this maan my son...
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M: oh maa aap bhi na..main abhi bhi pehle jesa he hua... now hv to go bbye... dad or dadi se aap bol dena...
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S: Ok beta... take care...
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maan: yes maa.. byee...

Maan left for geet's home...
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maan in outside of geet's house...
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maan called geet
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geet picked up
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maan: hey angel,, ready to go??
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geet: yapp bus do minute aur...
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maan: ok i hv reached u come soon...
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geet: yes just coming...
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geet come downstairs nd say bye to Mr.rajeev...
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geet: uncle i'll late not get tensed. u go to sleep. i hv any other key...
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R: ok beta but take care...
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G: yes uncle bye...
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GEET left to meet MAAN...
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Precap: Party nd 😳
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PS : DO LIKE & BIG COMMENTS 😊😊
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love Nelu 😊

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

awesum...loved maneet convo...waiting fr the nxt updt...updt sooon

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

amazing part
loved it
maaneet convo was just superb

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Party and kya yaar
Superb update.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

maan ko geet special kuch chahiye... i love u sunna hoga usse...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

~Shadow Of His Love~

PART 9

Maan was waiting for Geet beside the car...
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when geet come close to him in tapped in his shoulder...

maan turned &say : finally u co... {stop to see geet in white saree}
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maan start drooling her from top to bottom...

when geet saw her eyes get filled with desire
she start blushing😳😳

geet {smiles} & again tapped in his shoulder: maan 😳

maan {back to his sense} : woh ha geet... { maan was embarrassed}
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geet: hum chale??
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maan: hmm chalo...
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maan open the car door for geet...
geet get sited...
maan start the car...

both was silent but geet was still blushing...

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both reached the party hall...
geet was about to get down from the car but maan stoped her...
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maan: ek min geet...
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geet: kya hua maan??
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maan: come close to geet & take some kajal from her eyes in his hand nd put it behind geet's ears...
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geet closed her eyes tightly...

maan {smile to see geet} : geet apne aankhe khol sakte ho mera kaam ho gaya...
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geet open his eyes & her cheeks become more red...
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maan: chale??
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geet: maan aapne mujhe kajal kyun lagaya??
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maan: cuz today my angel is looking princess in white saree...
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geet: thnks {smiles} & u r also not less then a prince...
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maan: really?

geet: yes...
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maan: ok {smiles} now come we should go to the party..
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geet: yepp...

maan come down & open the door for geet nd give his hand to her...
geet smiles give him her hand...
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Both entered in the party with hand to hand... just like a perfect couple ...
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geet friends come to geet & hugged her...
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meera: hey geet u r looking so beautiful😊😊
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geet smiles : u too meera... long time haa..
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{maan was beside geet}

meera: yaapp yaar acully busy with YASH...
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geet: ooo r u serious?? yash & u???
u both fight nonstop & now u both couple??
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meera: yaa yaa but pyar main larai to hite rehte hain...
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geet: congrats meera...
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meera: thnks & cngrats to u too ...

geet: why??
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meera looked at maan: aree yaar itna HOT boyfrnd jo hain tera...
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geet was shocked thn become happy thn become J as meera called HER maan HOT...
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Maan smiles to see reactions...
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meera: hey hotie... i'm meera, nd u??
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maan: hey I'm MAAN ...
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meera: hot name just like u haa...
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maan: thnks...
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on the other side geet was full burned with jealousy...
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geet to meere: u knw what meera u r just like yash to filrt ...
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meera: oii hoii.. JEALOUS HAA???
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tina & rajji laugh to so see geet...
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maan also smiles...
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geet to maan: sab mera mazak uura rahe hain aur aap sab ki cls lene ki jagah unke sath hash rahe ho?? I HATE YOU...
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Geet was about to go but maan hold her wrist & get close to her...
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maan: hey guys... don't anyone dare to say anything to my angel...
i will not tolerate it.. got it?? {with a serious tone}
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geet smiles nd teased her frnds...
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tina, rajji & meera: okk okk baba... we will not say her anything, fi9???
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maan: hmm.
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tina: ok guys... come hit the dance floor...
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geet: u goo.. i can't dance in saree...
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meera: ye kya geet, party without dance not fare na?? maan ju say something...
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maan: come na angel... i will save u if u get fall in saree...
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geet: no maan plzz...
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maan: as ur wish...
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meera: ook maan u i will dance wih u as geet is not coming...{teasingly}
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geet: who said that i'm not coming,, she hold maan's hand
come maan we will dance...
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maan{smiles} : come...
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precap: KURBAAN HUA & KISS😳 & MAAN'S WISH😳😳😳

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