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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma





bechara maan pakda gaya...abb toh maan ki khayer nehi...msk ko aise phanste hue dekhkhe bahut maaza agaya...





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awesome n wonderful update...



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loved it very much...



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thank u very much fr d lovely update...







waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...



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continue soon plz...


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Thanks dear ur commments are too sweet... 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
part 10-12
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93


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~Shadow Of His Love~

Part 13
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maan call geet to cme to xyz hotel for lunch.. Geet get ready nd went to met him... Maan was waiting for geet..
When geet cme to him nd give him a big nd tight hug..
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Geet-thnks a lot maan.. . I'm vry happy today..
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Maan also hugged her back nd said- i'm also very happy for u mishti... .
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Geet broke the hug nd sit beside him.. .
Geet - aapko subah se hua kya hain? Aur yeh mishti kon hain? (make a little angry face)
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maan: someone is getting Jealous... {maan said mockingly}
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geet: Yes I'm...
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maan: Why??
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geet: what why??
Just I don't like you with anyone bass...
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maan {pull her cheeks} : you are really very innocent my mishti...
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geet: MAAN... main jaa rahe hu...
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maan: areee kya hua??
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geet: you talk with ur Mishti.. i want to go...
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maan: {hold her hand} : angel y r u getting angry? U r my mishti.. .
Geet.-Bt i'm geet.. ..
Maan- i knw u r bt for me u r my mishti... Kya main pyar se tumhe mishti nahi bol sakta?? .
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Geet-bula sakte ho par kyu?? .
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Maan- kyun ki tum bohot mithe ho.. Bilkul sweet ki tarah...
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geet {blushed highly}...
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maan: aab itna bhi maat sharma o Mishti, warna pata nahi main ky karr jaa u...
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geet get shocked but his lines made her more red...
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maan smiles...
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maan: Mishti aab hum lunch start kare??
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geet: ok but today i'll treat you...
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maan: no ways... mujhe itni rukhi sukhi treat nahi chahiye... i want something Big...
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geet: what big maan??
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maan: something Sweet... {looking at her lips with a teasing smile}
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geet: Maan baadmashi karna band karoo plzz...
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maan: kyun jii??? Aapko sharam aate hain??
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geet: MAAN if u'll not stop thn i will leave...
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maan: Try kar sakte ho janne ki but remember one thing mishti
Main Tumhare Zindagi Itni jaldi jaane wala nahi hu... aur na he tumhe jaane dunga...
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geet: {st} : Main bhi kaha aapse dur ho na chahte hu MAAN?? I want to live near u always...
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Geet : maan plzz mujhe bohot bhuk lagee hain...
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maan: okk okkk
he call the waiter both order & had their dinner & left from there...
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Maan get call frm her dad that their was no special work for maan in office so SSK tell him to enjoy with geet...
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{SSK is too smart & good}

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geet: maan aab hum kaha jayen ge??
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maan: hmmm kya pata??
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geet: hmmm
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maan: heyy wait a minute i hv to give a panishment...
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geet: for what?? maine kya kiya??
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maan: acha jii aapko yaad nahi hain aap ne kya kiya?
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geet: noo...
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maan: why you tell dad my name??
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geet {bit her lips} : woh toh galti se nikal gaya ...
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maan: so time for panishment...
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geet: noo maan.. plzz maine jaan bhuj ke kuch nahi kiya...
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maan: no baby...
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geet: aap apne Mishti ko jaza bhi do ge?? {asked very much innocently}
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maan: Woh nahi... {drooling on geet }
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geet {smile} : thnks you u r very sweet...
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maan: {back to sense}: no way... u r hv to be punished ...
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geet {baby face} : okk tell me...
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maan: wait let me think...
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geet: punsihment de ne se pehle mere bhi ek baat sun lo aap...
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maan: bolo...
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geet: agar aapse bhi koi galti hoge toh main bhi apko bohot buri saza dunge...
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maan {smiles} : MSK kabhi kuch galat nahi karta...
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geet: MSK bhi insann hain aur har insan se kabhi na kabhi koi galti hote hain...
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maan: sapne dekhna chor do dear... assa nahi hoga...
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geet: dekh le na aap...
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maan: okk we will see...
now u r punishment??? kya du???
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geet : mujhe kya pata??
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maan: angel don't get angry... chalo abhi ke liye tumhare punishment postpone kar dete hain...
hum kahi bahar chalte hain, ok??
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geet: kaha jayenge??
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maan: wahi toh nahi pata... tum batao...
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geet : nahi pata... . Oh haa chalo apke Ghar chalte hain... {EXCITEDLY}
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maan: Mere ghar?? Par kyun?
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geet: arree koi kissi ke ghar kyun jata hain?? Of course apke family se milenge...
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maan: mere family se??
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geet: haaa kyun aap nahi mila na chahte mujhe...
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maan: nahi asse baat nahi hain geet... par yu suddenly iss liye ...
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geet: aap apni frnd ko apne family se nahi mila o ge??
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agar mere mummy-papa aaj hote toh main apko abhi apko unse mila te... par kya karu koi nahi ha na... Uncle ji hain par abhi woh office main honge... {she said sadly}
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maan hold her hand: plz mishty asse maat bolo na... mujhe bohot bura lagta hian... main hu na tumhare sath...
Plzz don't be sad...
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geet smile sadly...
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maan: Agar main tumhe apne family se milaunga toh tum kush ho ge na??
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geet give him a true smile nd nodded...
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maan pull her cheeks : ok dear toh chalo abhi chalte hainn...
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geet hugged him tightly like a baby : thnk you... I promise main unhe disturb nahi karunge...
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maan: i knw u will not... cme sit in the car.. i will call mom...
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geet: ok {geet sited in the car} ...
maan called her mom...
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maan: Hello mom...
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Shalini: bolo beta...
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maan: mom aap abhi kaha ho??
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S: Ghar pe beta...
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M: mom woh...
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s: kya baat hain beta??
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Geet: maan chup kyun ho? bolo na... {she said slowly}
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maan:haa mom Woh Main Aur mere Dost Geet ghar aa rahe hain...
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S {become very happy} : Congrats beta... hume toh pata he nahi tha aap itni jald humari bahu ko humare pass le aayen ge...
Comee soon Beta... I will make arrangements... but tumhare Dadi toh seher se bahar hain, unhe pata chala toh bohot gussa karenge,,, tumne unhe bata ya jo nahi abhi tak...
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Maan: mujhe aap baat toh karne do mom...
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S: abhi kya baa karne hain... jaldi se mere bahu ko yaha le ke aa jao... baad main baat jarenge...
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M: mom assa kuch nahi {Shalini cut the call}
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maan {st} : mom ne mere baat bhi nahi suni ... hope wih kuch garbar na kare geet ke samne...
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geet: kya hua maan?? apke mama ne kya kaha?
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m: kaha ke tumhe jaldi unke pass le jaau..
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g: toh aab ruke kyun ho jaldi car start karo...
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m: kar raha hu mishti...
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Both Enter in KM...
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Maan feeling nervous as he don't knw what will his mom will say to geet...
Geet was feeling very excited to meet maan's mom...
geet loved & respect her elders a lot... She loved the relation of parents with their kids...
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Shalini was waiting for them... She was in kitchen ...
when one servent cme & tell her that maan came,, so went out...
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geet & maan was standing when shalini called maan...
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S: maan bete aap log aa gaye??
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M & G both turned ...
m: yes mom...
Mom she is geet & she is my mom...
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Geet went near Shalini & take blessings...
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S: {was happy to see her behave} : Jee te raho beta...
G: kese ho aap aunty??
s: main thik hu... aap??
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G: main bhi thik hu...
s: cme beta sit... they sited in Sofa...
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Maan was silently listening themmm...
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S: toh beta kya karte ho aap??
G: jii abhi abhi job mile hain as an Junior Arrchitect
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S: thats great beat... kaha rehte ho ??
G: Aunty Xyz road with my uncle...
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S: toh mama- papa kaha hain beta?
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m: mom woh...
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geet didn't let him complete..
G {sadly} : Mama -papa babaji ke pass hain Aunty...
S: I'm so sorry beta...
G: koi baat nahi aunty...
S: maan aap geet se baat karo main abhi kuch nashta late hu aapke liye..
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G: areee nahi aunty hum abhi khana khake he aaye hain..
S: nahi beta aap pehle baaar humare ghar main aaye ho yuhi chale jaoge toh acha nahi lagta na...
G: par aunty?
S: plzz beta..
G: ok aunty but i will also help you..
S: evrything ready beta just kuch kaam baki hain...
G: plzz aunty.
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S: ok beta chalo...
Maan was just watching them... He loved to geet & shalini together... He SMILED...
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geet went & helped Shalini... Both also talking about many thing...
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S & G came out with breakfast ... Nd maan was gone to freshup...
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Shalini told nakul to call maan... maan came & they all eat some snacks togetherly ,,,
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Maan get a call so he excuse himself & went to his room...
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Shalini to geet: geet beta chalo hum mere kamre main jaake baat karte hain..
Geet: ok aunty...
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Precap : geet & shalini's talk continued & maan J {for Zoha maaneet, sorry dear next part main maan jarur J hoga}
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It was really a long update so i'm also expecting long comments plzz 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
awesome part
maan is becoming naughty day by day
bechari geet
loved maans mom and geet bonding
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome update
maan is getting soo naughty
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
nice update
maan teasing geet is so cute
waiting 4 geet-shalini talk
maan babu J
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Wow. love it. love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Awsommmiiieee dis is so cute...nxt chp sooon..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Shalini ne asa to kuch nhi kaha, maan itna pareshaan ho rha tha.
Nyc update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update...
Loved it a lot...
Geet want to meet maans family...shalini n geet already develop a nice bond...
Waiting fr next part..

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