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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
awww..geet is such a cute angel...😃😃😃😃maan is sooo lovely yaar..wonderful update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Phone pe Maan Singh Khurana kyu na wait kare hame to apne Ice cream puri karni hai! !!
way 2 go Geet! !👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
lovely ud.ice cream ki tym main koyi disturb kare ye mujhe bi nehi pasand
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Geet is a unique piece...
Loved the update...
Geet will now smhow land in kc fr interview...
Waiting fr next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
MG SS ~Shadow of his love~

Part 7:

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Geet was licking her ice-cream & maan was hearning her sounds & smiling...
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After finishing her ice-cream geet paid &
geet to maan: hello aap ho na??
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maan: ha angel main abhi bhi hu...
wese mere hisse ki ice-cream kaha hain??
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geet: apko main kyun ice-cream du??
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maan: wah wah kese dost milli hain mujhe job mill gaye or akele main ice-cream party bhi karle le?? mere bina???
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geet: {smiles sadly} : nahi maan aap galat soch rahe ho..
mujhe job nahi mili...
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maan: what?? toh phir tum ice-cream kyun kha rahe ho??
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geet: aree yeh ka baat hui?? job nahi mili toh kya main ice-cream nahi kha sakte??
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maan: U r totally strange... log udass hote hain yah phir dusre job ke liye yry karte hain par mere dost toh sab se aalag hain...
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geet: ha toh?? toh main kya rone beth jaau??
ek job nahi mili toh kya hu hazro job hain abhi...
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maan {smiling} : i like ur spirit...
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geet: thnks... woh sab choro aab batao phn kyun kiya hain??
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maan: apse baat karne ke liya...
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geet smiles: but aapne toh kal kaha tha hum aaj milenge...
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maan: toh tumhe meri yaad aa rahe hain {teasingly}
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geet: ha nahi
woh chori aap ne aapka wada bhi tor diya.. mujhe aapse baat nahi karne...
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maan: arree maine na thori kaha hain??
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geet: toh phir aap miloge??
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maan: haa baba milunga par mujhe kya mile ga agar main tumse milne aaya toh??
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geet: kya chahiye apko??
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maan: woh main baad main bolunga. pehle tumbolo do ge??
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geet: hmmm.. ok..
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maan: soch loo main kuch bhi maang sakta hu... kuch bhi {with a serious tone}
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geet: {smiles} : soch liye...
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maan: itna bharosa maat karo main bohot dangerous ho sakta hu..
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geet: baaree he ajeeb insan ho aap, jaan bujj ke aap kyun chahte ho main aap pe shak karu??
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maan: nahi main toh bass sure ho raha hu...
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geet: main sure hu.. aap bolo kab miloge?
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maan: abhi toh main office main hu.. hum 6:00pm mille??
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geet: ok..
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maan: abhi tum kaha ho?
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geet: ice-cream parlour ke bhar hu...
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maan: ok toh hum 6 baze yahi millenge...
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geet: done...
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maan: ok now bye baad main milte hain..
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geet: byye..
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After finished office work, maan went to his dad's cabin...
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maan: hey papa..
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shalin{maan's dad}: aree maan... kaam khatam ho gaya?
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maan: ha papa... main abhi thori der ke liye bhar jaa raha hu aapse ghar main milunga..
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S: par beta abhi kaha jaa rahe ho??
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M: woh papa
ha ek frnd se mill ne jaa raha hu...
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S: ok beta.. par ghar dinner time tak aa jana warna apke mama bohot gussa ho jayenge..
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M: jii papa... now byw i'm getting late...
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S: ok...
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maan left...
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Shalin thought: yeh maan ko kya hua hain?? iss se pehle toh kabhi yu frnds millne ke liye yu bhaag ke nahi gaye...
... hmm sayad skuch jaruri kaam hoga...
i'm also getting late for home...
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then he left for home...
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Geet was siting & waiting for maan in ice shop..
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maan came & geet saw him...
geet get up from her sit & directly hugged maan...
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maan hugged her back: hey angel...
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geet: hii...
both broke the hug & sit...
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maan: soo u was missing me??
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geet {blushed} : nahi toh??
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maan: ek din main juuth bol na bhi shuru??
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geet: nahi main jhuth nahi bolte...
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maan: acha matlab tum mujhe miss nahi kar rahe the?
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geet: nahi..
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maan: phir jhuth..
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geet: maan aap kya mujhse jagra karne aaye ho??
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maan: ji nahi main apse millne aaya hu...
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geet: toh phir woh baat choro aur koi baat karte hain..
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maan: ok as u say so...
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maan: acha toh batoo job kyun nahi mila??
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geet: hmm woh actully mere pass experince nahi hain na, iss liye..
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maan: tih kya hua?? agar tumhe koi kaam nahi de ga toh experince kaha se aaye ga??
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geet: Asa aap soch te ho sab nahi...
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maan: par geet..
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GEET: maan plzz na mujhe uss bare main baat nahi karne..
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maan: ok.. wese bhi mere angel ka mood acha rahe wahe toh main chahta hu..
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geet smiles...
geet: acha apko kya chahiye??
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maan: hmmm... jo mangunga woh doge toh?
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geet: haa baba aap bataye kya chahiye??
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maan: hmm jese ki tumne mujhe tumhare ice-cream ke liye itne der wait karwaya so i also want ice-cream..
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geet {smiles} : sirf ice-cream??
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maan: haa, kyun kuch aur mangna tha kya??{teasingly}
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geet: nahi woh...
main order de ke aate hu..
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maan: mere hote huye tum kyun jaoge... tum betho main abhi aata hu..
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geet: okkk...
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After eating ice-cream & both went out from there...
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maan: geet main tumhe drop kar deta hu...
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geet: nahi maan mujhe abhi kuch kaam hain.. abhi ghar nahi jaunge...
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maan: but geet abhi akele kese jaoge main choe deta hu..
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GEET: nahi maan main chale jaunge...
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maan: mujh pe bharosa nahi hain tumhe??
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geet: main assa kab kaha maan?? mujhe aap pe pura bharosa hain..
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maan: toh phir?
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geet: kuch nahi chaliye, mujhe der ho rahe hain...
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maan: that like a good girl.. come..
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maan droped geet in her friend Tina's homein xyz road..
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geet: bye & thanks...
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maan: anytime angel...
talk u 2ommorow... ok..
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geet: ok take care...
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maan: u too...

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geet in tina's room
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tina : hey geet.. kese ho?
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geet: main thik hu yaar... tu bata??
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tina: i'm also good...
acha yeh bata pinky kal SAMEER ki party main aa rahe hain na?
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geet: nahi yaar ho aur aadi kal honeymoon pe ja rahe hain...
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tina:wow great..
tu toh aa rahe hain na??
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geet: tujhe toh pata hain waha sab apne boyfriends ke sath aayenge, aur i'm single...
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tina: aree geet yeh koi baat hui? tu aa rahe hain & that's fix..
geet: no yaar...
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tina: geet plzz na... dekh bohot sare ladkiyo ke boyfriends nahi hain par phir bhi woh log apne ladke dosto ke sath aa rahe hain na?? plzz na yaar kitne din baad hum sab clg frnds ek sath honge...
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geet: but tina mera koi ladka dost bhi nahi hain...
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tina: if u want i can tell any one of my frnds..
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geet: tere frnds...no way... they r too much touchy touchy types...
tina: geet assa maat kar yaar...
ek toh friend hoga na tera...
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geet: {maan} hain par main unke sath kese aa sakte hu..
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tina: geet no its enough u r coming with ur frnd & thats final..
geet: tina par woh nahi mane toh?
tina: tu puch ke dekh...
geet: ok.. but unhone na kaha toh i'm coming with any other boy...
tina: but...
geet: no buts... i'll come if only he came with me...
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tina: okk.. but u hv to force him
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geet: jii nahi main force nahi karne wale...
tina: gggeeett tera na kuch nahi ho sakta...
geet i knw that...
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on the other side...
maan went to his home...
take his dinner & sleep for sometime...
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>> Precap: Geet talking to Maan
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Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
awesome part
maaneet spending time with each other in ice cream parlour
maan dropped geet
tina wanted geet to come for the party
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Mujhe lag rha tha, maan kuch khas mangega. Par asa kuch nhi huya. Nyc update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48



Geet ko job nahin mili and she is eating ice-cream...isse apna ek kissa yaad aa gaya...

I was doing job as a teacher...one day I have some argument with Principal and I left job...when returning home I buy Laddoo to celebrate my freedom...

Maan-Geet moments, their teasings...Geet ne samjha Maan kya mangega but Maan ne tou oce-cream hi maangi...bada unromantic hai banda...

now will Geet ask Maan to accompany her to party...

awesome updates...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




Geet ko job nahin mili and she is eating ice-cream...isse apna ek kissa yaad aa gaya...

I was doing job as a teacher...one day I have some argument with Principal and I left job...when returning home I buy Laddoo to celebrate my freedom...

Maan-Geet moments, their teasings...Geet ne samjha Maan kya mangega but Maan ne tou oce-cream hi maangi...bada unromantic hai banda...

now will Geet ask Maan to accompany her to party...

awesome updates...

thanx for pm...



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thnks you so much dear for such a long comment 😊
and also thnks for sharing ur incident with me 😳
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love Nelu😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
WILMAAN AGREE TO GO TO THE PARTY WITH HER

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