MG SS ~Shadow Of His Love~ {NOTE iN pg 81}

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

awesome update

maan london toh nhi gaya but baithe bithaye problem khadi ho gyi

geet ki engagement dev ke saath fix ho gyi!!!!!!!!!

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Gudiyalovesguru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

excellent part...
lovd it...
and i dnt like dev's name with geet kyunki maan ka name geet ki saath acha lag tha hai...

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Priya21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Dnt seperate maaneet.
Superb nd loving update

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Ash1991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Superb update...
Loved it a lot...
I thought its happy happy ff bt a sad twist coming...don't want any distance btwn maneet...

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Teju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Their airport by bye scene was so cute.. But Geet fearing for something.. Geet N Dev's engagement.. 😲 Gosh.. good that Maan has not gone.. Waiting for next part..

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

part 20 n 21
loved it

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nelufar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Thank you so much guys for the likes and comments that u give me... Love you Guyss ...

~Shadow Of His Love~
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Part 22 >>>>>
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Geet : What?? {Geet shouted }
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pinky: i know you must be shocked na?? But i'm soo happy ur childhood crush is going to be ur Husband soon...
Do you remember How Much You was in love with him??
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geet was still shocked... She don't understand what is happening?? Everything was ok till last night, but now where this Dev come?? aur Meri sagai??????
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Geet to pinky: Pinky I was not in love... Dev was my Crush... JUST CRUSH Not Love {She shouted}
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pinky: Arre baba itna Gussa kyun ho rahe hain?? Mujhe toh dad ne bataya uss din Sameer aaya tha aur Kal dev ke mummy papa aaye the tere liya rishta le ke, aur tu pure din ghar pe bhi nahi thi, So Dad said yes...
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Geet: but uncle ne mujhe toh bataya bhi nahi aur na he pucha hain...
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pinky: Wahe toh keh rahe hu, tu raat to der aaye, aur aate he so gaye toh dad to time he nahi mila...
aur aaj subah hote he woh office chale gaya... so i came and told you...
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Geet: par maine ha kab bola pinky?? {Tear rolled from her eyes} kab bola main ha???
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pinky was shocked to see geet crying : what happened Geetu?? Why r u crying?? Dad ne tere khushi ke liye Ha kaha hain...
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Geet: par maine kab kaha i want to marry Dev??
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pinky: Class 3 se tu uske liye pagal thi, right? U also used to say that, You Love him...
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Flashback :

Geet, pinky and sam was in class 3.. dev was 6 years elder then them ...
Dev always used to protect them... Geet was liking him very much... They way he cared for her frnds, his talks, his fighting with Sam... She start liking everything whatever Dev do...
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Dev also liked her... but it was geet only childhood attraction...
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Some years later when Dev get in class 10 he changed his school and went to abroad for study...
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Geet cried a lot that day... She was missing her very much...
She always used to ask sam when dev will come...
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But after 2 month later she get normal again...
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Flashback End
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Then Jab usse 10th ke baad school change kar liye the, tu kitna roye thi tujhe yaad hain??
Har roz tu SAM se puch te thi kab woh aayega?? toh woh sab kiss liye tha geet???
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Geet: Pinky I was Kid that time... He was my Attraction Just in my school time .. College time toh mujhe Dev ka face bhi yaad nahi tha... How can you say i was in love???
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Pinky: but u was mad for him na???
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geet: that was my childness pinky... i was never in love...
how can u fixed my engegment with asking me?? {She cried this time}
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pinky: that means you want to marry him??
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geet: No {geet shouted} Never...
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pinky: Geet plzz don't cry na...
but Geetu dad said yes to them aab kya kare???
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geet: i don't know anything, just leave me alone for some time plzzz..
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pinky: Baby please chill, we will talk to dev... u take rest ok?
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geet wiped her tears : main bahar jaa rahe hu...
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pinky: but geet...
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geet: pinky please i want to be alone now...
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pinky: okk but come soon...
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Geet called texi and tell him to take her to Maan's Farmhouse...
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she sat in garden and cried a lot...
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Geet to Babaji: Aap na bohot Gande ho.. main aapse kabhi baat nahi karuge... Main aap uncle ko na kese bolu??? kese kahu mujhe apne marzi se Maan se shadi karne hain??
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Dad ne jaate waqt unhe mere zimmedari di thi, main kese unko inkar karo??
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Nahi main Sirf maan se shadi karunge... aur kisise nahi...
Aur Babaji aap na mujhse kabhi baat maat karna... Main sirf maan ki hu aur unki he rahunge... koi Dev mujhe unse aalag nahi kar sakta...
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then she again start crying: I miss you soo mich Mama-papa... Why i'm so alone today? i missed u mama-papa.. plzz come back to me...
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She slept there by tired of crying...
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maan was waiting for geet's call but as she don't call him... he called but geet was sleeping and her mobile was on silent...
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Maan: Mishti ko kya hua hain aaj?? no call no msg???
maybe she went to office??
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maan called in the office but he found that geet was also not there...
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Maan get tensed : Mishti mujhe bina bataye kaha chale gaye???
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He again and again tried to call her but Sleeping beauty still was sleeping ...
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After some time later his phoned rang...
Maan received the call : hello...
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adi: Maan kaha hain tu yaar?? main itne din baad aaya aur tere koi khabar he nahi hain??
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maan: adi woh aaj headache hain.. hum kal milte hain...
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adi: ok... take care...
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Its 5 pm and was raining...
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geet sleep disturb by the rain drops...
she lazyly open her eyes and get the phone nd runned to one side...
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She try to call pinky when she saw that their was 81 miss called from Maan...
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Geet: ohh no maan ko main phone karna he bhul gaye...
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geet directly called maan...
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Maan saw the call nd received it...
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Maan: Mishti are you ok?
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geet : yess maan i'm ok.. i just slept nd can't received ur call...
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maan: what the hell geet... i was almost gone mad nd u was sleeping... Tumhe andaza bhi hain mere dimag man kese kese khayal aa rahe the?? U don't even care for me...
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geet start crying hearing his shouting... cuz nobody ever talk with her like tha... nd also maan said that she don't care for him...
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maan realise that he was shouting on his mishti.,, who is soft like cotton...
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Geet was sobing nd sobing...
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maan: i'm sorry sorry mishti plzz don't cry... i was scared for u... plzz honey i love u a lot...
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geet: i love you more but i don't want to talk to you... byee...
{she said like baby}
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maan: mishti plzzz plzzz listen na...
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geet: no i'm angry...
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maan: ohh my honey plzz .. ok just tell me where we can meet...
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geet: i'll not tell u...
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maan: plz baby...
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geet: okk but u have to give me ice-creams...
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maan smile : promise dunga... now tell...
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geet: in ur farm house...
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maan: what??
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geet: yes...
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maan: but what r u doing there??
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geet: aap pehle aao yaha main bata te hu...
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maan: okk u wait i'm coming just now...
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Precap : Maaneet Marriage 😳😳😳

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Edited by nelufar10 - 11 years ago