MG SS ~Shadow Of His Love~ {NOTE iN pg 81}

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tia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

aww maanu getting naughty lv to make her blush
n now going to London
n geet like an understanding maanu ki geet let him go
his family giving him instruction part was cute
precap waiting
lvd it

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nelufar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

~Shadow Of His Love~
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Part 21
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Geet helped maan to packed his bag... After that Both was sitted in the couch .. geets head was in maan's shoulder...
And maan was playing with her fingers...
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Maan: tum bhi chalo na jaan mere sath...plzz
geet: maan plzz main nahi aa sakte... Kal pinky aa rahe aur yaha office main bhi toh mujhe design complete karna hain...
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maan: Main pure 1 week tumhare bina kese rahunga?? I hate you {innocently}
geet: ohh my Baby I love you too but plzz understand me...
maan: i love you more Mishti nd i understand but you know na "Dil toh bacha hain je" aur tumhare bina raha nahi jata... dekh lena Main aate he Pinky ki papa se tumhara haat mangunga aur hum shadi kar lenge... phir tumhe main ek minute bh khud se durr nahi jane dunga...
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geet: i will be waiting for that day...
maan: Geet flight ka time ho raha hain, i hv to go...
geet: main aaunge apko chorne..
maan: okk Honey..
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Maan take blessings of her mom, dadi nd dad ... nd hugged annie nd vicky...
Shalini: maan take beta .. nd come soon...
maan: yess mom..
dadi: khana time pe lena, aur roz mujhe phone karna...
maan: yess my dadi.. love you...
shalin: Maan i hope u'll manage the meeting welly, koi bhi problem ho call me , ok??? nd yess Do take care, don't take too much stressed...
maan: okk dad... u too take care ok..
shalin: yess bete...
geet was listening all thinks sliently nd was missing her family but she was very thankful to babaji that now they r also her family, Her Maan's Family...
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Maan: dadi main geet ko ghar drop karke Airport chala jaunga...
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dadi: ookk beta but driver ko sath le jaoo, woh Car ghar le aayenge...
maan: okk dadi... Bye All Take care.. Love you
Geet: bye Everyone...
All: bye ...
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Both was totally slient in car... Driver was driving nd both was sitted in back sit...
Geet head was maan's Shoulder...
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Geet {ST}: i don't why babaji but i'm feeling very sacred like if maan will go then we can't be one again... mujhe aasa kyun lagg raha hain... main unhe khud se durr karna nahi chahte... bohot darr lag raha hain babaji.. plzz help me... i want my Maan forever to be with me..
but i can't stop him, he has to finished his work.. plzz babaji help me...
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AT Airport::::
Maan: Jaan take care of urself... don't Cry okk... i will come soon...
geet hugged him tightly and cried..

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maan: plzz honey don't cry ... i love u..
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geet: i love you a lot...
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maan: jaan plzz stop crying ... agar addi yaha hota toh main kabhi nahi jata...
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geet: i know that... but i don't want to leave u...
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maan: okk main nahi jaunga, nw atleast give me a smile...
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geet: but u have to complete this work... uncle trusts you...
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maan: i know baby.. but i can make my mishti cry na?? so i will not leave you...
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geet {wiped her tears} : i will not cry you go...
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Geet kisssed his both cheeks lovingly: Just take care of urself nd never stop loving me ok??
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maan kissed Geet's forehead : I can't geet.. its impossible for me honey... u plzz take care nd miss me... will come soon... nd yess whenever i called u received it, ok???
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geet: ok.. {geet give him a fake smile} : aap jao apko der ho rahe hain..
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maan: Jaan u r okk na?? kya kuch baat hain jo tumhe pareshan kar rahe hain??
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geet: noo maan i'm ok... just feeling tired...
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maan: sure?
geet: yess maan.. now u go... but remember one thing always I love you a lot...
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maan: love too Mishti... take care... bye...
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geet hugged him again said: bye...
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maan turned & start going away from her...
geet was crying, she turned so that maan can't see that...
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but she can't stop herself, she turned...
maan took at her...
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geet run to him & jump on him... and hugged him tightly

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geet: I love you plz don't leave me... Mujhe bohot darr lagg raha hain... plzz Maan i love you...
{geet start cried like a baby}
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maan: ssshhh mishti plzz chup ho jao... i will not leave you promise...
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maan broke the hugged nd wipe her tears...
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maan: sshhh...
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geet: u will not go na??
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maan: no baby, i'll not ...
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geet: main uncle se sorry bhi bol dunge, plzz but u don't leave me...
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maan: ookk my honey... give me just 10 min main ek call karke aata hu...
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geet: okk
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Maan Called In Office:
Maan: hello Raj {trusted employ of KC}
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raj: Yess sir...
maan: u hv to go to london today for noida project ok?
raj: but sir u was going na??
Maan: no i have some problem u go... come to airport nd take the second fight after an hour nd go...
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raj: okk sir..
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maan : i will mail u evrything at night nd in the final meeting adi will join you... bye
raj: bye sir...
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Maan & geet left the airport & maan drop geet at home by promising her that he will handal Shalin & will meet her tomorrow...

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IN KM::::::
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S: But maan raj can't handal it...
m: i trust him dad,,, nd i will also give him mail of files... plzz dad trust me...
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S: i trust u beta ... but what happened suddenly that u back off??
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m: woh dad..
woh..
ohh haa Kal adi aa raha hain, toh mujhe usse kuch important kam hain iss liye i hv to be here...
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s: okk... go now take rest...
m: thnkss dad... I love u...
s:love u beta...
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Next Morning {Sunday}
Geet woke up nd prayed to babaji: babaji maan toh aab mere pass he hain but why i'm still sacred... kya hone wala hain???
plzz help me babaji... plzz keep my maan save... i love him more then myself...
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Geet prayer broke when she heard pinky's sound from hall...
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pinky: Geetu phar aa... dekh main aa gayee...
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geet smiled : pinky nd run to hall nd hugged pinky...
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geet: i missed u baby...
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pinky: i missed u lot geetu...
But now i'm so happy ... Congratsss Geetu...
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geet{st} : kya pinky ko mere aur maan ke bare main pata chal gaya??
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geet: kiss liye pinky???
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pinky: tere saggai jo pakki ho gaye hain??
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geet: what??? {st: Maan ne mujhe sagai ke bare main toh kuch bola he nahi?}
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Pinky: i'm so happy for you... U and UR Childhood Curse DEV {Sammer ka bhai}
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geet: what???????????????????????
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Precap:***********************

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Awsommmiiieee luvd maan geet scenes so cute...but wht da!!! Yeh dev kaha se aa gaya n how can dey fix without asking geet...grrr plz end dis stupid dev chp soon i don't wnt complx btwn maaneet i hope geet says a clear no 2 dev...nxt chp sooon!!!

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

geet was feeling scared to let maanu go to London
n finally she stopped him
aww me also appy as he didnt go
bt omg wt a shock u gave
i so much hate that creepy creature
n yha meri geet kiuss se eng. fix hawww
this eng should never ever happen
wanna kill dev
dont care whether he is positive or negative my hate is eternal for him😆😆
waiting 4 more

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sanum23

@sanum23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

yeh dev kahan se aa gaya

grt geet ne maan ko rok liya

lovely update

waiting

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gill123

@gill123

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Maan ne london jana cancel kar diya geet is engagement with dev but jeh sab kab hoya

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akanshya

@kingofme

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

oh no...

par plesa kuch aisa kar denaa ki dev anu geet ki sagai ruk jaye...

pls pls pls...

kya aisa ho saktha hai maan dev ki jagha sagai karne aa jaye...

would be amazing...

waise waitig for it...

cont soon..

thanks for the pm...

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Geethanda87

@Geethanda87

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

NICE UPDATE...FINALLY GEET NE MAAN KO ROK LIYA
ITS SUPERB I M WAITING NXT UPDATE

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

nice update
geet ne maan ko rok hi liya!
ye dev kaha se aa gaya?
geet aur dev ki sagai??

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#270

part 21
nice part...
Dev and Geet's marriage?
so Maan is staying back...
cont soon dear...

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