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Posted: 12 years ago


😔 Kal maine sabka bohot wait kiya... lekin sab ef sath gayab...🥱
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Hello Mona,Lakshu,Priya,Lily and Sona...🤗




hi

kal mere aane ke pehle hi chali gayi😭

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hi

kal mere aane ke pehle hi chali gayi😭


Hi dear, mai kaafi wait ki.. lekin koi nahi aaya to mai bhi chali gai...
Tum late aai thi kya...??😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Hi dear, mai kaafi wait ki.. lekin koi nahi aaya to mai bhi chali gai...
Tum late aai thi kya...??😕



jab main aayi thi tab tumhaara green bathi jal rahi thi... mess post karne ke thode der baad hi tum laal ho gayi



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Posted: 12 years ago


yes i loved her in this attire
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



jab main aayi thi tab tumhaara green bathi jal rahi thi... mess post karne ke thode der baad hi tum laal ho gayi




hmmm.. kya karti fir..?? 2-4 comments deker mei chali gai...socha weekend hai sabhi outing ke liye nikal jatey hai...Its OK dear...Flower
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Posted: 12 years ago





The Downpour... Part 60



Geet woke up with slight smile on her lips. It was natural, filled with happiness of having love in her life.

"But Babaji, please give me strength that I could keep happy this family''

And suddenly then she remembered she had to do toughest and the most important task!! Hurriedly she did aside blanket and stood up. She corrected her dress and came out of room. It was silence spreaded all over. She walked further and heard some sound was coming from kitchen. She advanced there.

Nakul was preparing tea, she saw. Suddenly an idea stuck in her mind. She went Nakul and asked,

"Nakul Bhaiya, what are you doing''

Nakul wished her good morning and said, making tea and coffee for Dadima and Maan. Geet offered him to help and requested that she would give tea to Dadi as she herself was going in her room. Nakul agreed and gave tray of tea. Happily Geet walked to Dadi room.

She was standing out of room and prayed God to grant her success in her mission pacify Dadima. She walked in.

"Good morning Dadima' She said with smile.

"Aree Geet, why did you trouble beta where is Nakul?'' She sat up in surprise. Geet came and sat on bed with her. she poured tea in cup and advanced to her.

"It's okay Dadima, anyway you are doing so much for me, at least this much let me do for you''

SD shook head on her talk. She was very impressed with Geet for her simplicity and innocence and she was so sure that she was best for Maan. They chatted for sometimes formally SD asked about her family and everything and then became engrossed.

##

Maan was back from his exercise. He was going in his room but his heart made him force to go and check Geet, once. His legs changed direction and he walked toward Geet room but not before being sure, no one could watch him.

He peeped in room but found she was not inside. "Seems she already went back outhouse'

Disappointed he was walking back on stair when Nakul called him from back. He turned to him and saw Nakul with coffee tray in hand.

"Maan sir you here?'' He was surprised, finding Maan here instead of his room.

"Why Nakul, why can't I be here?''

"No, nothing.. actually after exercise you always used to return I your room so I …''

"Is there any rule that I can't go anywhere else after exercise, hmm!!'' he crossed arms in attitude. Poor Nakul gulped saliva down cursing himself as why the hell he started this conversation. He didn't reply further.

"Your coffee sir'

"Hmm!!'' Maan took cup..

Maan signed in relief. As he turned back to go his eyes fell on Geet who was coming back from SD room. She was in her usual mood did not see that Maan was watching her having a victorious smile.

"o ho.. so miss Geet Hand was here only!!'' He smirked and suddenly thought for an idea. He looked coffee cup, and then grinned. He spilled some coffee on his vest and hands and dropped cup on floor making it create loud sound which was enough to attract Geet attention. She looked Maan standing on stairs and wiping liquid over his body, she rush to him worried.

"What happened Maan???'' She came and saw broken cup pieces on floor and then worriedly checked him asking again and again if he was oaky.

"I'm alright Geet.. ahh!!'' He groaned when she touched his hand. her worry increased.

"You are too much Maan what's need of you drinking coffee standing on stairs like this haan!!!! Look at you Maan you hurt yourself!!!'' She was literally concerned for him, hearing his painful groans. "Chaily ab you need first-aid!!'' She dragged him in a direction.

"Where is first aid box Maan!!''

He pointed to his room. She dragged him there and told him sit on bed. She got first aid box and applied ointment in his hand. He intentionally whimpered.

"Is it burning ??'' She had tears in her eyes for his discomfort. Maan felt squeeze in heart seeing her in so much sorrow. He had not thought that his prank would hurt her to this extend. He touched her face, "No Geet it's not. You don't worry I'm fine nothing happened me', he said softly, gave her smile but Geet was still in impact of his pain. She started crying.

"Geet… Jaan I'm fine look .. don't cry dear it was just a prank'' In his concern he spit out the truth and now it was his turn to get shocked and then embarrassed when looked Geet burning red face in anger glaring him only.

"Ohoo .. So it was prank!!' She stood up.

"N..no.. I mean ye..yes..i mean..'' He also stood up trembling in coming danger.

"So you made fun of my emotions Maan!!'' She walked to him.

Maan walked back shaking head no. "No Geet.. I just wanted..'

"What wanted haan!!!.. Maan you did big mistake this time!!!'' She kept advancing to him and he moved back till he stopped by the wall behind. He looked she was still coming closer, resting both hands on her waist, in super attitude. That was first time he was seeing her so confident progressing to him. He gulped his saliva down in alarm.

"So you wanted to make fun of me, right!!'' she rested her both hands on wall behind, trapping him same like he used to do.

"No Geet I just…''

"Chup.. bilkul Chup.. samje aap!!!'' She kept her forefinger on his lips. Maan shivered with her sudden touch.

"Now I would punish you' she whispered.

Maan could not able to even close his eyes. Her innocent closeness was driving him crazy. He was just stood there sealing his lips in shut and was staring her with his widen eyes.

She stroked his face softly with her finger, giving goose bumps to him. She bent closer. Maan was so numb to react anything. He closed eyes in anticipations, awaited of next.

Geet smirked. He was now in her control.

"Don't open your eyes Maan till I say you'' She whispered in his ears.

He nodded slightly. It seemed his mind had become hypnotized completely. He could feel her very near. Her smell was so fresh and tempting that not in his dream he would break this moment.

Geet slowly moved back, without making sound. She chuckled seeing him stood like a stupid, closing eyes and breathing heavily and blushing.

"So Mr, Maan Singh Khurana wanted to play prank with me!!'' she thought. She looked around for something, anything which could have used and found his mobile. She took it and clicked his snap and then Maan heard her giggle along with flash sound. He opened eyes at once, found her laughing out loud. She showed his pic in cell and giggled. In no time Maan understood everything.

"Geett!!!!' He runs to her but she was faster and in next moment she was out of room running. Maan pushed hair back. He laughed when thought for his own stupidity.

"Btw Maan, I knew you're teasing me. I had seen you dropping cup on floor'' she laughed and runs away.

Maan also smiled on her mischief, life couldn't be better than this.

##

Later in day, Geet with made all dishes which Maan had given in list. Maan had given her day off to prepare everything. He had meeting so had left very after their encounter. Geet had returned back his cell but not before transferring his pic in her cell and now she was waiting for him to come so she could make Dadi have this special lunch. Though she had already had good time with Dadi in morning and her first try was successful but this time again she was again nervous.

"Don't know what if she doesn't like this food'' she was worried. She called Maan,

"Maan where are you''

"Already here jaan, waiting for you''

"AAp aa gaye??'' she shocked. She made face that he did not tell her about his coming.

"Now don't make face Geet I'm just entering'

She smiled. "Okay, forgive you''

She heard his chuckle. "Maan what if Dadi doesn't like food made by me''

"Don't worry geet. She would definitely like, I am sure''

She felt relief. They cut call. In next few minutes all her dishes were enhancing the beauty of dining table of mansion. SD came and surprised to see various dishes in front of her eyes and Geet was stood there nervous.

"Geet did you make this all dishes beta''

Geet nodded.

"Aree wah ,, today you make everything of Maan favorite!!!''

And this was the time when Maan appeared and Geet eyes fell on him, shocked.



Precap : A Twist 😛



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Posted: 12 years ago



Flower Me 1st... spring



hmmm... maan ki smartness usse bhaari padnewali hai...😆
Really Geet maan ki Sangat mei rahaker apna dimaag use
karne lagi hai...😆 😆
Lets see...lunch kitna Jayakedaar rahata hai Maan ke
liye...😉😆 Fassa...😉
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh lo main yaha sab ko hai bolne aayi hoon aur update bhi hogayi.

hi lakshu, mona, lilly, babie sab kaise ho missing u people a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely upadte
Maaneet moments ...just loved it
Precap...twist...asha aayegi kya

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