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hi Anu, I'm sorry for commenting so late. I loved the update. I was surprised that geet confessed I front of everyone. That was a bold step she's taken.. Thanks for the PM :-)
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ye geet bi na... Poor guys had to listed to her lectures ;-) it was overwhelming to see how arpitha n ankitha accepted maan as their father. Awesome ...
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chalo sab thik hogaya...maan aur geet k rishte ko sab ne maan liya...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very uch fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

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Anu... If your not too busy please update na...
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waitng for update jaldi jaldi cant wait
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Anu... when would you update sweety?
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-10 / part-143/pg.no.103/18/09/2014




Part:-143

Dev:- Stop ,. stop it Annie ,. ye rona dona ab band karo,. ye kya hai annie ye khushi ka moka hai, humari bro ki shaadi honewaali hai ,.. aur thum is tarah rorahi ho?ab bas bhi kar,. ab hume bahut kaam hai ,.. shaadi ki plan karnni hai, pandit ji se muhurat nikalwaana hai ,. bahut saare tayaari karni hai ,.. kya thum bhai ko dulha nahi banavoge?
Annie:- Haa,.. bhai mai Maan bhai ko khud apni haathonse dula raja banaungi ,..mai khub masthi karungi ,. aur hum tho ladke waale haina ,.. baaraat leke jaayenge ,..aur mai ek moka bhi nahi chodungi ki ladkiwaale ko chedne me ,.. bhabhi jara aap humse bach ke rahna,..
Arpitha:- Achha ,.tho humbhi ladkiwaale hai ,.. ladkewaale se kuch kam nahi,.. dekhiye ki hum aap ko kaise kharara jawaab denge,..
Annie:- Achha ,. tho dekhenge,..
Arpitha@Ankitha:- tieing their pallus round their waists as if ready for fight,. haa,.. dekhlijiye,..
Arjun:- bas ,.. bas ,.. abhi se ye hallabol chodo pehle ,,.. socho ki kya karna hai ,.. dekho thum dono kaise jhagadrahe yaha ,.. waha dono dulha aur dulhan kaise ek dusere ki ankhome khogaye ,.. dekho dekho ,.. here Maan and geet r looking eachother lost in their own world ,..
bringing them back all cheered ,. in teasing them ,.. they blushed caught by them.
Prasant:- o.k. o.k. bahut hogaya masthi ab Arpitha jara humare lunch ki intezaam karo ,.. sab log bhuki hai ,..
Arpitha:- haa,.. mai tho bhulhi gayi thi ,.. mai abhi iski intezaam karthi hu ,.. Ankitha :- di mai bhi arahi hu ,..
Annie :- haa ankitha mai bhi athi hu ,..madat karthi hu ,..
Arpitha turned to go while something striked her ,.. she came to Maan, :- papa aap kya khaoge? kya banau aap keliye?
Maan completely flattened by her care and concern ,.. she calling him papa,. accepting him whole heartedly as her father.
Geet:- inkeliye kuch achhasa italian banana arpitha ,.. thum ruk ,.. thumhe nahi athi na ,. mai banaungi ,. she tried to get up fr. bed. but all stopped her
Arpi:- nahi maa aap hume bathayiye ,.. hum karenge
Maan:- nahi beta,. iski koi jarurat nahi hai ,.. mai wahi khaunga jo thum sab khayenge ,.. mere liye alagsa bananeki koi jarurat nahi hai,.. aur thum Geet thum tho bistar se bilkul nahi hilogi ,.. samjhe thum?
And all went outside ,. ladies to kitchen and gents discussing about the marriage arangements leaving maneet alone .
Arpith brought juice for geet,.. Maan took it fr. her :- lao mai pilatha hu.
She went closing the door giving some privacy to them.
Maan kept the juice glass to her lips asking her to drink. She drank it quietly looking in to his eyes. He kept looking her lovingly till she completes. His heart still rejoicing again and again reciting her beautiful and bold confession of her love on him.She made him proud, his heart swelled with pride,. thanking his stars to give him her. He now understand his place and position in her life . she kept him above all over her family , who is her everything till now ,.. but now ready to leave them for him. He felt himself low compared to her love on him ,.. mai shaayad itna pyaar nahi karpaunga inse. He wiped her lips with his thumb carassing them,""Itna pyaar karthi ho mujhe se Geet? he said it in hushed voice ,.. "Umm,.." itna pyaar karthi ho thum?Aaj tho thum saabit karke dikhayi ki thum mujhe se kitna pyaar karthe ho? kitna chahthe ho mujhe,.. isi tarah sab ke saamne bayaan karke ,.. elaan karke ,. saare bandhisho thode ke , thumne proove kiya geet ,.. u made me proud geet , u gave respect to me,.. u made me surrender my self to u geet ,.. flattened by ur love ,.. naseeb waala hu geet ,. dunia ki sab se bhagyawaan banaya mujhe thum ne ,.. bahut khush naseeb hu mai ,.. shaayad mai itna pyaar nahi karpaunga geet thumse ,... kaise karsakthe ho thum itna pyaar? kaise geet? he hugged her nuzzling his face in her crook of neck he asked her in voice full of love and with chocked throat.
Geet:- took his face in her palms " ye sab mujhe aap ne sikhaya Maan,.. sab aap se hi sikhlia maine,. Jaan the ho Maan? aap se mulakaat honese pehle mai kaise jirahi thi? ek mitti ki murthy jaise,..na koi hayat ,.. na koi zindagi ,..na koi ehsaas,.. na koi dil,.. kuch bhi nahi hai Maan mujhe me ,.. marthe hue jirahi thi ,.. ek jinda laash ki tarah ,.. per aap aya meri berang ki zindagi me,..aap mujhe jina sikhaya maan ,. saas lena sikhaya ,. hasna sikhaya ,.. chalna sikhaya ,.. pyaar karna sikhaya ,.. sab kuch ,.. sab kuch sikhaya aap ne Maan,.. ab ye murty ek insaan bangayi,. ek naari bangayi jo ab chalna jaanthi hai ,.. hasna jaanthi hai pyaar karna jaanthi hai aur jina jaanthi hai ,. ab mai jiungi tho sirf aur sirf aap keliye ,.. hasungi tho sirf aap keliye ,. pyaar karungi tho sirf aap se ,.. aap ke saath ,. aap keliye ,.. har pal har lemha , har din sirf aur sirf aap ke saath ,.. mai sirf aap keliye Maan,.. she hugged him tightly pouring all her love on him making him drowned completely . He was fully blown out by her love, melting in her , with chocked mumbling voice Geet" he nuzzled his head again in her crook of neck giving smooches which grown to a full mouth kisses as he fully carried away by the passion. He started to kiss her passionately fr. her face to her upper chest as passion took him to a level making him loose himself completely. His face and eyes became red with passion dipicting his desire for her ,.. he became fully aroused ,.. he want her then and there.
Making him more weak and loose hold on him she continued,... with her chocked and hushing voice carassing him every where,.." mai aap se bahut pyaar karthi hu Maan,.. bahut jyaadaa,.. jitna bhi pyaar karu ,.. aur bhi pyaar karneka man karrahe maan ,.. mai ,.. mai ,.. isa ,.. isa ,.. kya karu maan? jisse aap khush ho? kya dedu mai aapko? kya hai mere pass aap ko dene keliye? mai aap ko kaise khush rakhsakthi hu maan? wo khushi jo har ek pati apni patni se expect karthe,..jo khushi har ek patni apni pati ko desake,.. wo saari khushiya mai aap ko dena chahthi hu? kya mai aap ko ye sab de paungi? Maan .. ye aap keliye tho pehla shaadi hai ,.. per ,.. mujhe ,.. mujhe ,.. tho ,.. mai ,.. mai ,..she cried ,.. holding him ,. unable to explain her state,.. Her fear, her insecurities making her weak and vulnerable.
Maan understood her unsaid fears and her turmoil and how much she devastated thinking herself low,.. and he took her lips in his calming her coolig her, grasping and sucking her every fear and insecurities. He sucked her lips growling her nectar swallowing her all fears,..
He said huskyly" still kissing her in her mouth" mere khushi thum ho geet,.. thum hothi tho mujhe sab kuch milthe, mujhe meri zindagi milthe, hum dono saath me ho tho wahi kaafi hai mereliye ,.. ,. aur raahi baath khushi ki ,.. mai jo chahtha hu wo sirf aur sirf thum hi desakthe ho geet,.. aur thum ye mujhe per chodo ,. mujhe kya chahiye ,.. kaise chahiye,.. kab chahiye ,.. aur kaha chahiye ,.. wo mai dekhlunga ,.. mujhe maalum hai thum se ye kaise lena ,.. thum uski chintha math ho ,.. he slowly laid her down,. pulling away her pallu making her only in blouse. He completely leaned on her , pressing himself on her poking his aroused assetst o her making understand her , how much he want her. Thumhare ye meeti meeti baathe sunkar mera ye haal horaha hai,.. he desparately moved to her chest feeling her blossoms,kissing every where, he broked her buttons and pushing her bra strafs,. he nuzzled his face on her blossoms feeling her poking nipples ,.. he hungrily took it in to his mouth,. sucking to quench his long thurst,. she gasped,.. first time ,.. first time ,.. she felt blessed by this pleasure given by him.He stared to nibble giving her utmost pleasure,.. the pleasure where the heavens r opening slowly . He is very slow not at all hurting her taking every care and leading her to heaven. She shuddered like a tender leaf as the currents of pleasure made her jolt. He is loving her like a precious doll not at all wanting to give any stress r pain r scratch on her. even his light light smooches giving her goose bumps all over her body ,..she felt some butterflys flying in her stomach. something in her throbbing for something.she began to crave for more . She clutched his hairs with her fists and pressed him more to herself .. he was completely entralled by her love passion took control on them drowning them in the desire of haveing each other. submitting to each other themselves. they r in their heaven ,. heaven of love . He want to dissolve himself in her ,. want to live in her. not at all want to live as a seperate individual,.. not a man ,.. not even as MSK,..only want to live for her ,.. to her ,. and by her.
Their heaven broked as they heard a knock on the door,. bringing them to real.
Dev:- bro,..
Maan groaned hearing the knock,.. he dont want the distraction , dont want to stop,. but they have to,he hummed"mujhe nahi rukna,.. I want u misty",..he said pouting,.. geet smiled seeing his pouting and kissed his lips," Achha hua koi agaya nahi tho pata nahi hum kitne galat karne waale ,.. shaadi se pehle ye galat hotha hai maan,.. bus kuch din aur ,.. baad me hume koi nahi ruksakthe" she kissed his face and on all his body up to his chest soothing his burning body with desire.".kuch din aur ,.. nahi mai thumse aaj hi shaadi karuga ",.. he cribbed like a small kid.
Geet:- thik hai pehle dekho koun hai ,. Maan got up and helped geet to arrange herself she looked him complaining showing him her blouse which buttons have been broken by him ,. he looked her with sorry puppy face ,.. she asked him ,.. with her eyes ab mai kya karu? he covered her with duvet asking her to lay down and adjusted her and went to open the door.
Dev came inside , looking at Maan all red eyes and face still showing his flushed ruffled hairs and messy cloths he could guess wat is going on ,. so he decided to tease him,..:- bro congrates abhi abhi hum pandit se baath ki ,.. unhone aap ki shaadi keliye bahut achhi muhurat nikali ,.. wo itna achhi hai ki 100 saal me ek hi isa din ayegi,. bahut achhe hai ,.. so hum sab yahi tair ki ,. hume bhi sab araange ments keliye wakth chahiyena kyu annie?He winked at her annie got the hint and she added her version,..
Annie:- haa maan bhai ,.. ye bahut achhi hai tab tak tho meri aur ankitha ki deliveries bhi hojayega ,.. hum bhi aap ki shaadi enjoy karsakthe aur bas 6 mahine ,.. 6 mahine tho yuhi ..asani se chalajayega ,.. aur hume bhi bahut wakth milthe saare tayari karne keliye,..she looked at arjun hinting him,..
Maan shocked hearing ,.. 6 months ,.. WHAT? 6 months? he exclaimed screaming in high pitch. Geet muffled her laugh seeing his puppy face ,.. she closed her mouth seeing maans red angry eyes giving glare that ,. thumhe tho mai baad me dekhunga ,...
Arjun:- haa,...jiju ,.. bas 6 months ,. aakhir ye aap ki shaadi hai ,..
the great MSK ka achhi muhurat jaruri haina?
Dev:- bro itna time hume jaruri hai bro ,.. ye khurana khaandaan ki badi bete ka shaadi hai koi isi wise nahi hai ,.. the worlds great business man ka hai ,.. dunia ki mashoor wedding planner ko bulana hai ,. aur bahut saare selebrities ko niyotha dena hai aur saare arrangements humari status ki karna hai ini wakthel agega bro,..aap ki shaadi bahut dhum dhaam se karna hai.
Maan stood all disgusted by this keeping his hands on his waist,'
Prasant:- haa dev,.. hum ladki waale ko aur bhi jyaada tayaari karna hai hume bhi wakth chahiye,..
Maan:- nahi ,.. he said in disgust ,.. nahi iski koi jarurat nahi ,.. aur mai itni din nahi intezaar karsaktha hu , mujhe jaldi shaadi karni hai. ,.said in stern voice ,..
Geet:- per Maan,..
Maan :- nahi ,.. geet thum kuch math bolo and turned to dev thum pandit se bolo aur jaldi muhurat nikalo mai jaldi shaadi karna chahtha hu.
All laughed seeing his desperation, and teased him Maan made puppy face seeing their laugh.
Dev:- came and hold maan by his shoulders and,.. haa bro hum jaanthe hai aap ki jaldbaaji isiliye hum agle hafthe hi aapki shaadi tair ki,. ab khush?Maan blushed as he caught by them
Dev :- humbhi bahut chahthe hai bro aap ki shaadi dekhne keliye ,.. kitne saalonse hum wait karrahe ,.. ab humari khwaish puri honewaali hai ,. hum aaj hi K.M waapas jaarahe wahas haadi ki puri tayaari karenge,.. hum aap ki shaadi me koi kami nahi hone denge bhai. aap chintha math hoyiye ,..ab hum chalthe he turned to geet and said ,. o.k. bhabhi aap jaldi thik hojayiye ,.. shaadi ka din bahut nazdeek hai ,.. thik se araam kariye hum chalthe
Geet:- sorry dev agar maine kuch galat boldiya tho
Dev:- nahi bhabhi aap hume sahi raastha dikhaya ,.. ab hum wahi raasthe me chalthe hai.chalo annie ,.
Annie :- haa ,.. bhai ,.. bye bhabhi khayaal rakhna aap ka aur jaldi thik hojana,.thik hai ,. geet noded.
and all went bidding bye to them
Geet looked at Maan and he understood her unsaid question. He has to answer her.
He sat beside her taking his laptap ,he opened something in it.
Maan:- Geet dekho isse,.
Geet:- kya hai ye Maan?
Maan:- Geet ye sab Delhi ki bahut mashoor palaces ka photoes hai ,.. bahut famouse hai both royalty and glandoiur me like K.M. U select one we r going to livei n that after our marriage. I want in that everything would according to ur taste and class.
He shown her one after the other all pics.
Geet looked lost some where.
Maan:- kya hua geet kuch pasand nahi ayi? koi baat nahi mai aur manwaatha hu [ he know wat is going in her mind ,.. she want to shift him back to K.M.]
Geet sighed.. she took he laptop and kept it side. she moved close to him and went in to his arms as Maan happily took her on to him. She settled herself on his chest . Maan cocooned her lovingly.
She slowly moved up to his face , took his face in her palms and gave smooches on his eyes,nose , all of his face desending to his neck,chest,.she opened his shirt button and started to kiss on his chest taking good time to give him pleasure making him shuder in pleasure,.. his hold on her tightened hugging her more to his torso. How much her simple guesture makes him loose himself leading him to peak. she kept her cheeks on his chest and carassing him there
Geet"- in her hushed voice Maan . mera asli ghar tho ye hai maan,. aap ki dil me,... jaha ,. mai har pal,ha lamha,har ghadi,hardin apni puri jindagi shanthi se , khushi se rahsakthi hu. aur yaha se mujhe koi nahi nikal sakthe ,.. kisi ko itni himmat nahi hai ,.. khud aap bhi nahi nikalsakthe maan ,.. ye mera palace hai ,.. meri mahal maharaja ki kota,. isme mai ekRaani hu ,.. Alampana ki Begum sahiba hu.
aur yaha ki alawa mujhe aur kaha itni shaanthi aur khushi milthe kaha milthe hai mujhe itna pyaar maan? mujhe palace ki kya jarurat hai Maan?making him again drowned in her sweet sweet confession. he was spell bounded in her innocent love.. he was totally melted in her spell mesmerising him. kissing her he want to engulf her to him. digging himself in her enchanting charm.
Geet:- continued,.. Maan its o.k. agar aap K.M. waapas nahi jaana chahthe tho? per kya aap abhi tak maaji klo maaf nahi ki?
Maan:- slowly comimg out of her ,.. baat maafi ki nahi geet,.. mai kab ka maa ko maaf kar chuka hu ,.. kyunki maa ki ye galathiki waje se mujhe aaj thum mila ,.. nahi tho kab ka wo meri shaadi uss sameera ke saath karwadethi ,.. agar isa hotha tho ,.. pata nahi aaj mai kaisi haal me hotha ,.. sukriya der se hi sahi mujhe thum mili ,.. meri zindagi mujhe mila. Mai thumhare saath age zindagi khushi se shaanthi se bina ko dar bina koi zizak jina chahtha hu . mujhe koi tension nahi chahiye ,. mai koi chance nahi lesaktha hu geet ,.mai thumhe kho nahi saktha ,. ji nahi saktha thumhare bina , itni himmat nahi hai mujhe me geet sirf achha beta nahi ,.. balki ,..achha pathi bhi bana haai mujhe,.. mai apni ghar ki jimmedaari nahi chode rahi hu ,. thum ,. humara bachha humari chotisi pariwaar ,.. ye jyaada important hai mere liye ,. thum nahi jaanthe ho geet thum mere liye kitna anmol ho..sab kuch kho saktha hu mai per thumhe nahi geet ,..hum humari pariwaar iski alawa mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhe samajneki khoshish karo geet ,.. mai thumhari ye baath nahi maan saktha.
Geet over whelmed by his love she hugged him.
Geet:- Maan mai ek baath kahu?
Maan:- haa geet bolo,..
Geet:- Maan ,..mai jaanthi hu ki aap kitna amir ho bade khaandaan ki ho ye ghar aap ki status ki nahi hai aap isi choti ghar me nahi rahsakthe ,..per Maan . meri bahut kuch yaade is ghar se jude hue maan. pehli baar jab mai akeli bachhe ko leke delhi ayithi tab ye ghar mujhe ashray di,.. Manchanda uncle aur Aarchana mujhe apnaliya ,. is ghar me hi mai bachhonko pala posa ,.. bada kiya aur unki shaadi bhi isi ghar m hua ,.. aur jaathe jaathe uncle ne ye har mujhe gift ki ,..ye ghar mujhe sab kuch di Maan ,. sab kuch ,. ab ye mujhe aap ko bhi diya ,. phirse mujhe meri zindagi di, yaha mujhe shaanth aur khushi milthe maan ,.. agar aap ko koi etraaj nahi tho kya hum yaha rahsakthe Maan? i promise mai yaha aap ko koi kami hone nahi dungi ,.. aap jo chahe wo pura facilities mai yaha arrange karungi .she cupped his face pleading him,.. please Maan,..hum yaha rahenge maan ,.. aap aur mai ,. sirf hum humari chotisi dunia me ,.. mai har pal har lamha aap ke pass aap ki nazron ki saamne rahna chahthi humesha meri saam ne aap ko paana chahthi hu maan.
Maan:- Jaan thum itna puchneki koi jarurat nahi ,.. jaha thumhari khushi ho waha meri ,. thum jo chahe wahi hoga, thu hari khushi me hi meri khushi hai geet ,.. hum yahi rahenge ,.. humari chotisi dunia yaha basenge hum ,. thum aur mai ,.. aur koi nahi humare beech ,.. mai bhi humesha thumhe mere pass paana chahtha hu ,.. meri bahonme , ab jarasa duriya mujhe se bardash nahi hosaktha ,.. bas isa hi mujhe apni bahonme lelo ,isa hipyaar karo mujhe humesha,...he hugged her tight trying to dissolve himself in her.

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's awesome i loved it very much.
So i am waiting for maaneet's marriage.

Super update.

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Aww how beautiful is that...they are going to live in their little nest...sweetsweet
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nice part
finally maneet marriage accepted by alln strated 2 plan 4 their marriage
loved dev tsing maan
maneet moments ..me blushy blushy
so shadhi in aweek
w8ing 4 it

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