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Eagerly waiting continue soon dear😊
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd- 10/ part-139/pg.91/5/8/2014




Part:-139

Maan rushed to geet . He stopped at the door seeing Arpitha @ Ankitha fearing wat will they say.He stood there seeing Geet who is trying to get out of the bed to reach Maan and the drs r trying very hard to stop her and keep her calm.
Drs:- jaldi ayiye Mr. Khurana in ki haalat aur serious ban rahe ,.. yaha aap ki jarurat hai, samaliye aap inhe.
Listening drs words Geet looked at that side fr. where Maan coming,.. "Maan"she called him , and tried hard pushing all of them aside raising fr. bed to go to him and was about to fall when Maan reached her in one step taking her in to his arms,.."Geet" he hugged her , trying to lay her on bed.
Geet hugged him tight,.. asking,.. " Aap kaha chalagaya?ye log mujhe aap ke pass nahi anederahe,.. she asked him holding his shirt collar tightly,.. mai kahi nahi jaungi,.. aap ki pass hi rahungi".
Maan hugged her tightly,.. cant explain his state,.. glad she is safe and sound and all infront of him safe secured. Tears flowing fr. his eyes,.. chocked with emotions. He talked with great difficult with cracking voice,.. haa ,. misty ,.. mai yahi hu ,. thum mere pass hi ho,.. mai idhari hu ,.. thum shaanth hojao,.. ye kuch nahi karsakthe thumhe ,.. mai huna ,. shaanth hojao ,. he patted on her back to calm her,. hugging her to his heart to assure her ,.. more than her,.. assure himself that she is alive. She is safe and secured. He didnt loose her . His life came back to him in his arms now . Drs stood there silent observing her , how much his effect work on her health. Its really dangerous to her ,... this much stress and emotional out burst ,.. anything can happen,.. they r fearing,... but a wonder ,. nothing that sort happened to their astonishment. She imeadiately became calm in his arms only a little bit sobbing,. slowly decreasing as she get peace in his embrace. He kept his hand on her hairs and kept threading her and cooling her.

All this happening right before her family members,. who stood there all shocked,.. stunned ,.. astonished,.. flabergasted,... wat not?
After some time she lifted her head fr. his chest asking confirmation," mai aap ki saath hi rahungi" looking in to his eyes,.. bilkul choti bachhe ki tarah,.. asking a chocolate after her winning session to her papa.He so much wanted to kiss her till breathless and complain her how much he missed her ,.. how much he frightened to loose her.

Her looks gradually intensified observing him fr. top to bottom. His ruffled hairs,.. folded fore head,. dark circles under eyes,.. which indicates his sleepless nights,.. sunkened and wrinkled cheeks,. unshaved,. dropped out body ,. wrinkled dirty ,untidy cloths,.. loosened body,.. suddenly became old looking like 10 more yrs than to his real age,.. shaking features,.. suddenly fallen old age,...
She kept her palm on his cheeks cupping his face " ye kya haal bana rakha hai apne aapka? aap isa kaisa soch sakthe ki mai aap ko chode ke jaungi? kya aap ko apni pyaar per bharosa nahi hai? dekho kya haal bana rakha hai apne aap ko? mai aap ko isa nahi dekh skthi,.. isa bikharthe hue nahi dekhsakthi mai ,..aapka pyaar mujhe waapas laya maan ,. mai babaji se ladkar ayi hu aap keliye,..itni taakat hai aapki pyaar me ,.. bharosa rakhiy,. mujhe waada kijiye ki kabhi isa nahi toot the,.. waada kijiye ,.. she kept her hand infront of him,..
Maan noded his head ,.. haa ,.. misty ,.. he kept his hand on her,. he said it with chcked voice. Geet smiled and kept her head on his shoulder closing her eyes getting some peace having him close to her.
Till now she didnt remembered her family. Her full attention is on Maan . Arpitha ,.. who shocked by this tried to go near her mother saying "maa". but Prasant pulled her back holding her hand noding his head to no. He dont want arpitha to go and disturb their beautiful moment.Now he damn sure she will say something to her mother which eventually effect on geets health.

Geet slowly opened her eyes when something knocked her,.. yes now some thing striked in her making her astound,...She stunned and damb founded remembering something,.. her family ,.. her children ,.. how on earth she can forget them,.. whom she thought her life till now?but soon after she gain her concoius she only searched for Maan ,.. wanted him only,.. waited for him only,.. how can she face them? how on earth she can explain her behaviour to them? wat they think?
Her face turned pale and colourless as the gush of feelings of emberassment,.. shame guilt knocked her ,.. a guilt for forgetting them ,. overlooking them,.. but not to the love for maan. She moved away fr. Maan trying to hide her feelings,.. she slowly looked at her children fearing to see their faces.
Prasant who is observing all this now understand her state. He dont want to make the situation worst. He dont want to give time and chance to Arpitha@ Ankithatho think wrong about Geet. So he imeadiately ushered Arpitha towards geet calling her,.. Maa,.. aap kaise ho? aap tho hume daradiya?
Maan moved out of bed to give space to them.
Then started the winning session of all ,. it continued sometime,.. their worry and geets assurance that she is fine etc,..etc,...
Drs came to her to check her ,..but she denied saying that she is fine ,.
Maan:- haa ,.. geet hum jaanthe hai ki thum bilkul thik ho ,.. per check karnedo taaki hume aur sugun milega,.. hume jaldi se jaldi yaha se jaayenge,.. please misty ,..
She nodded her head to yes .
All went out side to give privacy for check up ,.. all stood out side the room dont know wat to talk to each other,.. feeling difficult to frame sentences. Maan fearing to face both the sisters wat happened inside after geet got concoius.. will arpitha again bursts on him?
Arpitha stand there trying to fanthom the situation and trying to grasp intensity and the depth of her mothers love.
Drs check up pura hogaya ,. they nodded theirs heads in satisfaction,.. Mr. Khurana its really a great wonder,.. really a miracle happened,.. mam bilkul thik hai,... hume pura check up karliya , kuch bhi pblm nahi hai,.. bus operation ki stiches thik hone tak aap ko yaha rukna hoga, baaki bilkul thik hai hum jaldi se jaldi unhe discharge karenge.
Maan:- thank. u dr,.. thank u very much ,. and i am sorry mujhe aap ke saath isa bartaav nahi karna chahiyetha,.. sorry .
Drs:- its o.k. Mr . Khurana hum samajsakthe ,. aap fikar mat kijiye . they left laeving all
Annie came to geet,.. bhabhi mai bahut dargayi thi ki aap ke saat saath mai bhai kobhi khodungi ,.. dekhona bhai ki haalat she cryied hugging geet.
Geet :- aur thum isi tarah rorahi tho thumhara tabiyat khraab hojayegi aur maan ko koun samalega? Arjun and Dev talked to her asking her how is she now?
Geet:- ab sab ye band karo aur ghar jaake araam karo ,.. mai bilkul thik hu,. annie dekho maan kaisa hai inhe ghar lejao aur achhe se khilao aur araam karnedo. bahut late hua sab ghar jao aur araam karo.
Maan;- mai kahi nahi jauga,.. jab tak thum discharge ho tab tak mai yahi rahunga.

Geet:- aap isa kyu kahrahe ho? dekhlo ek baar apni taraf aap ko araam ki jarurat hai ,.. mai aap ko isa nahi dekhsakthi ,.. mai yaha thik hu ,. phir aap ko yaha kya kaam hai? jaayiye ,.. jaake fresh hoke khana khake sojayiye,.. kal ajayiye.
Annie :- haa bhai ,.. bhabhi thik kahrahi hai ,.. aap ko araam ki jarurat hai ,.aur waise bhi bhabhi ko bhi araam ki jarurat haina? arjun and dev also said the same.
Prasant:- haa ,.. sir aap jayiye ,.. hum haina ,. hum maa ki khayaal rakhenge ,.. aap jaayiye.
Maan looked at geet pouting,.. like dont want to leave her
Geet smiled at his baby face and said to go by her eyes and throwed a small light kiss to him to manofy him taking care that nobody observe that.
Maans face lit like a 1000vt bulb receiving that light kiss . He sooo much wanted to return it with great force. He went forcibly looking back towards geet ,.. not at all wanting to leave her,.. leaving his complete soul with her.


link for part -140:- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668596&PID=111756558&#p111756558

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
yeyy..bade time k bad me first...
aww...geet's emotions as well as maan's pain love all are written very well...
hope k ab geet k family samje unke pyar ki gaherai ko...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful ud
all were in shock state
saying maan geet hugging and
assuring each other that she is fine
after maan she want to see her family
dr. checked geet and assure them
she is all fine and fit
geet want maan to take rest
so she plead him through eyes
their eye talk awesome
waiting fr next thanx 4 PM

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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
geet is safe now
she ask for maan after she got concious
arpita was shock to see her mother like this
prashant stop her doing any wrong thing

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
geet going uncontrolled
maan fearing for her daughters reaction
but drs words made him run 2 geet
n she was at peace seeing him
all were shocked seeing geets reaction
n geet cribbing about maan for not taking care of himself

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Posted: 10 years ago
yeh deno sis nai koi darama create nahi kiya
love maaneet moment
geet family saw her love toward maan the dewangi of her
awsum
maan k bad she want her family n guilty also to forget
preshant quick move not let her embress
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
LO YE KHATAM BHI HO GAYA!😲
patanahi next kab milega!😔

ab waiting to know bacho ka reaction towards geet!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
excellent update dear...loved it a lot...

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