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Posted: 12 years ago
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how can a mother stoop so low...

I know Pammi is Maan's step mother but still yaar ek billi ke bachche ko bhi do din saath rakho to usse kitna pyaar ho jaata hai...Maan tou fir bhi insaan hai and uska step son hi sahi beta tou hai...

Dev did good...he throw out Naintara from hospital...I think he knows what Naintara wanted from maan also...

aww Annie was trying to put some sense into Geet's brain but Geet ka tou track hi different hai...but Annie nahin jaanti ki geet ke dil mein pyaar already hai Maan ke liye but she is afraid and don't think herself worth of Maan's love...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pagli geet ne maan keliye rishta jodne aagayi..uff annie teri mehnat bekaar rehgayi...but i hate pammi..uff poora poora poora ka raakshasi ka khandan hai khurana women's mein..waise dev was right..uff i hate it..& loved how maan supported geet & geet was so concerned abt him when he tried to get up!lovely update dear..continue soon!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice dear😊
bidhu geet😆
pammi n naintara r b*****😡
maan try to get up in this condition
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Annie geet se shadi ki baat karna chahati hai par hamari JALI geet ...
Geet maan se pyaar to karti hai par duniya se dar kar chup raheti hai
Pammi😡 phir se geet ke piche pad jati hai
Maan pammi ko gussa karta hai par geet rok deti hai
Dev pammi aur naintara ko khub sunata hai aur dono ko bahar nikal deta hai

Precap.. Maan geet ko shadi ke liye bolta hai...??????

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice parts
maan s accident n his mom n nt n sam cursing geet n insulting her
geet pleading to meet him
dev took geet
maan is f9 now
n dev giving confidence to maan to make geet marry him
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
wii up date tomorrow, actually busy in reading some other ff which resembles mine, i too known 2 days before and i started it reading i have copleted it now but no mood to update tomorrow deffinitely up date please bear with me, and coming to that ff name is azeeb dastean, started by hinal and was copletad be 6n6s... .shetal if find time u too read it yaar, actually i fear now , wat if u readers think that i have copied
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ajeeb dastan Maine read kiya hai usene 12 parts diya hai maine armaan vali story bhi read ki hai
Aap sochati hai Asia kuch nahi hai. Ha. Thodi similar hai par iska matalab copy nahi hai. Copy karke koi 90+ parts tak nahi ja sakte. Don't vary don't panic.we are waiting for update plz fatafat update de do 3 din ho Gaye. plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-7/part-94/24/07/2013







Part:-94
Sameera tried to come to Geet saying,
" Mai ise nahi chodungi, Maan mera hai. mera aur Maan ke beech koi ayatho mai nahi sahthi hu, I will kill u, bitch", with that she started to to pull geet out and , but Maan hold Geets hand and pulled her towards him. She landed on his chest.
Dev pulled out Sameera and throwed her out of the room, saying bhai ko tumhari jarurat nahi.
Maan cocooned her in his arms and hugged her tight , as if he loose , she will vanish. [ Maahi moment]
Geet looked in to his eyes which r showing full of love and care. She cannot understand the meaning of his eyes to find out the thing. She tried to get up , but her body is reacting in different way. It is rejecting her orders. It is not ready to leave Maan. It is wanting more and more closeness and his touch is creating a havoc in her heart, and this bloody body of her not at all listening her. She again tried to get up but not an inch of her body listening her. She looked at him to plead help but he is not at all in the mood to help her. He is fully drowned by the spell of her closeness.. He dont want to leave her. Geet plead him with her eyes but Maan didnt listen.
Dev entered in the room ,he adjusted his throat to get their attention.
Their trance broke and Maan leave her slowly ,she got up and looked at Dev in complaining manner.
Geet:- kya jarurat hai Devji,.. Maaji se itna kuch kahneka? Unhe kitna bura laga hoga? Maa se isa hi baath kaarthe hai kya?
Dev:- Bhabhi,.. aap nahi jaanthe sab log aap jaise boli nahi hothe.
Geet now looked at maan with complaining look.
Maans.t.:- ab inhe kya hua? lagtha hai mujhe se naaraaz hai.
he tried to convince her,Geet;,..
Geet:- sab aapki wajese hua hai?
Maan:- ab maine kya kiya?
Geet:- Aur nahi tho kya? kyu aap maan nahi rahe maaji ka baath? shaadi kyu nahi karthe aap? kya kami hai Sameera me?
[dev went out silently as he felt his presence is not required there, hoping Maan can open up himself to her]
wo acchi hai, aapse pyaar karthe hai, aur kya chahthe hai aap?
Maan:- felt disgusted by the name Sameera, he controled himself and, Geet;,.. mujhe shaadi nahi karni hai.
Geet:- kyu nahi karna? zindagi bhar isa hi akeai rahna chahthe ho kya? aap ko shaadi karni padega, apni ghar bhasana hoga, ghar, pariwaar, bacche sab hona chahiye kya galat hai isme?
Maan:- looked deeply in to her eyes and, Geet mujhe shaadi ki jarurat nahi.
Geet:- kyu nahi hai Maanji;,.. har insaan ko ek jivan saathi ki jarurat padtha hai, zindagi bhar humari akelapan dur karneka, hume ek ehsaas dilaneki hum akeli nahi hai koi hai ki humari har sukh, dukh , baatnekeliye . Shhadi ek atuta bandhan hai jisme zindagi bhar viswaas, pyaar saathgi, har pal har mode per , har acchayi, har burayi per saath saath chalna hotha hai. Ek dusere ki aasara ban sake. Aur shaadi ek ristha hai ki apni pariwaar badhaneki, vansh badaneka. Har maa chahthi hai ki unki bete shaadi karke apni pariwaar ke saath khush rahe, isme Maaji ka kya dosh hai? unki bhi insecurities hothi hai, inke waje se wo isa behave karrahi hai. Ek baar aap unki baath maantheho, wo jarur khush hoga. Agar aapko sameera nahi pasand hai tho, kisi aur se shaadi karlijiye.
Maan:- Geet ye shaadi ka umar nahi hai, mera shaadi ka umar chalagaya hai.
Geet:- koun kaha aapse ye shaadi ka umar nahi hai,... Shaadi ka asli jarurat ab aur anewaali kal hai Maanji;,.. Ab tak shaadi sirf sharirik jarurat pura karneka aur vansh badhane ka hotha hai. Per shaadi ka umar sacchi maine me yahi hotha hai,.. ye aur anewaali kal hi shaadi ka sacchi umar hai, is umar me ek saathgi ka jaruri hotha hai jo humari har baath samajsake bina kaho har mode per humari saath chalneka, kabhi akela pan mehsoos na hone ka, Zindagi bhar aasara bansake, ek viswaas dilaneka hum hai ek dusere keliye, ki hum hai tumhari saath tum akela nahi ho. Aaj tho chodo kal ke baare me sochiye. koi nahi rahega aapki saath siva ek jivansaathi.
Maan:- Agar mai tumhari baath maan bhi jao tho,koun karega mujhe se shaadi? koun hoga raaji ki mujhe se shaadi karneka?
Geet:- kyu nahi karega raaji aapse shaadi karne ka? kya kami hai aap me? bahut bada business man ho, name fame, paisa, dhan doulat hai, acchi khaandan ka bhi hai, acchi pariwaar hai aur bahut handsome bhi ho,[ Maan smiled hearing fr. her mouth bahut handsome],apka umar bilkul pata nahi chaltha apko dekhke koi nahi kah sakthe ki aapka umar. koi bhi ladki shaadi keliye raaji hogi.
Maan:- "Tho kya tum karsakthe ho mujhe se shaa",.. he is about to ask her to marry him but his badluck at that time dr. entered disturbing them and their topic left incomplete.
Dr:- hellow, mr. khurana, kaisa hai aap?
Maan:- better than yesterday, [ feeling highly disgusted by his wrong entry]
Dr. looked him and asked him about his diet and med. and prescribed some more and told, well mr. khurana agar aap is tarah jaldi,jaldi theek hojay tho hum aapko jaldi ghar bhejthe , giving some more instructions he went.
Annie:- came in and asked about drs. advice, bhai,.. mujhe pata hai aap isi tarah jaldi jaldi thik hojayege, bhabhi aapko acchi tarah dekhbhaal karthi hai, mujhe bahut khush hai bhai.
Maan:- arjun kaha hai? Annie:- wo office gaye.
Maan:- ab isse hi pura office samalna hoga.
Geet:- aap iski chintha math kijiye, hum haina, hum sab samalthe hai, aap sirf aaraam kijiye.
Annie:- haa,.. bhai,.. Arjun hai,.. Prasanth ji hai, Aadhi hai,.. kuch din wo handle karegA office, aap chitha math kijiye.
Dev entered and told, bahi,.. agar jaarurat pade tho mai bhi jaunga office aap uski phikar math kijiye, bhabhi raath bahut hogaya mai aapko ghar chode detha hu.
Maan then only remembered that she lives lonely, he looked at her and said, Prasant ko ek baar mujhe pho. karneko kahiye.
Geet:- ji;,.. mai chalthi hu, aap araam kijiye mai kal subha aathi hu.
Maan:- umm,.. goodnight, even though he dont want to send her home, but she may not stay in hospital at night,it is not good.

Precap:= " tum nahi jaanthe ho ki mai use kitna chahtha hu,kitna pyaar kartha hu"


Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it. Very interesting the way ,feet describes marriage. Dr arriving at wrong time. Waiting eagerly for ma an to confess to geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww doctor's entry at wrong time ...baat poori nahin ho paayi...

but jitna Maan ne kaha woh bhi kum nahin hai...

Geet ko usse zaroor ehsaas hona chahiye ki Maan wants to marry her...

may be she will take time to accept her feelings and try to ignore it but she surely must have understood what Maan wanted to say...

Sameera ki itni himmat ...isse dikhayi nahin deta ,samajh nahin aata that if Maan wanted to marry her he should have married her many yrs back...she wa always available for him...but Maan never gave her any importance so she should understand that Maan don't like her at all... marriage to duur ki baat hai...but iski himmat that she very well knows about the feelings Maan carry for Geet still she tried to hit Geet...how could she...and that also in front of Maan only...yaar Anuradha please make Maan give her good punishment when he will be alright...

loved this update...

thanx for pm...


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