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Posted: 11 years ago
both updates awesome. cont soon. thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
hieee...started reading ur ff recently...
honestly first i found reading very tiresome as u write as a whole block..no line breaks spaces n all..
but your story stuck me to ur ff...loved ur story..hayeee..
pls PM me afterwards..i will love to read it..
on karvachuth part..yes it can be turning point in story..
geet ki family agar maaneet ko ek dusre ke liye karvachauth karte dekhe to jaroor unki feelings pe gaur karne lagenge..or shayad ye unke acceptance ki shuruaat hogi...
muje lagta hai dishu h sabse pehle maan ko apnayegi as in apne nana 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


yes it will be right to disclose the truth without telling self through Karwachauth Vrat...

and it will be very big happiness for Maan also that someone is doing so much for him...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago


haa mai bhi deneki sochrahi hu ,.. bus held up in some work hosake tho kal
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update. Could totally understand Geet's uneasiness of not telling her daughter everything, and her fear of their reaction if she tells them everything. I like the idea of karwachauth, and they finding it out on their own.
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 119-123
awesome update
romantic maaneet moments loved it...
bt feeling scared what will happen when they will be back at home!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/part-124/pg.50/4/4/2014




Part-124

Here in Mansion,
Arjun parents send sargi for Annie and Pammi also arranging sargi for both n.t and sameera.
Pammi:-Sameera dhyaan se suno,tumhe subha 4 baje utke ye sargi khana hoga aur baad me pura din tum upwaas rakhna hoga,.. na khana na peena,paani tak nahi peena hoga samajgayi?
Sameera:- kya? pura din kuch bhi khana nahi aur peena nahi paani bhi nahi peena chahiye? buaji,.. ye sab mujhe se nahi hogi aur upwaas se mera tabiyat kharaab hojayegi mera beauty ,. aur mera chehra khraab hogi ,. ye mai harkis nahi hone dungi
Pammi:- sameera samajneki khoshish karo , ye sab mai tumhareliye kahrahi hu , isa karne se hi Maan kophsavoginahi tho nahi .
Sameera:-ye sab karnese Maan mera hojayega,.. wat this trash buaji , aap ye sab kaise maanthe ho?mujhe nahi lagtha isa,.. mai ye sab nahi karungi.
Pammi:-told in disgusting and all frustrated by her denial,.. kamse kam Maan ke saamne kuch math khao.
Naintaracame there, she gathered all information about the trip simla through her detectives.
,.. rehnedo unhe mammiji, ab ye sab karnese kya faidayaha aap sameera se ye sab karwake Maanji ko phasaneki khoshish karrahi ho ,.. waha wo uss geet ke saath simla me honeymoon mana rahe.
Pammi:- kya bakthi ho naintara? tumkya kahrahi ho?
Nai:- haa mammiji ,.. mai thik kahrahi hu, Maanji simla isliye gaye ki uss geet se milne , unki koi meeting nahi the waha.
Pammi:- ye geet ko itni himmat kahase agayi ? mai socha isko inki pariwaarki parwaahai kamse kam unlogonkeliye ye humaari baath maanjayegi ,.. per isanahi hua.
Nai:- nahi mummiji ,. unhe sirf unki parwaahai , mai jaanthi hu wo maanjiko sirf unki paisonkeliye phasarahe hai,mai jaanthi hu kya karna hai, kaise ye chupkali se hum chutkara paasakthe hai.
Pamm:- kaise / kya karna chahthi ho tum?
N.t:-mai aap koabhi kuch nahi batasakthi, sirf karkehi aap ko dikhdungi.
Pammi:- lekin,...
N.T.:- aap phikar math kijiye mammiji bahut jald hum ye gandagi ko humaari raasthe se hataege .. mujhe per yakeen kijiye.
Pammi:- Sameera kyu isa dekhrahi hokambha bana kar khadiho.. kuch sochliya tumhe kya karna hai?tumhe bhi apni taraf se kuch karni hogi na,..
Sameera:- haa,.. buaji,.. N.T.ne geet ke baare me kuch karrahi hai ,.. aur mai maan ko pataneki kuch karthi hu ,.. ek hi mouka nahi chodungi mai,..maansirf mera hai.. aur is baar mai ek mouka bi nahi chodungi maan ko apnane keliye mai kisi bhi had tak jaasakthi hu,kuch bhi karsakthi hu.maan ko isa mere haath se nahi jaane dungi ,.. aap phikar math kijiye sab kuch mai dekhlungi.
Pammi:- dekho kya karrahi ho jara mjhebhi bathao kuch bhi kar per mera saari kiye per paani math phekna.
Samee:- isa kuch nahihoga buaji,.. is baar mai aap ko niraash nahi dunga,.. aur aap ko mujhe per garv mehsoos hoga dekhiyena mai kya karthi hu.
Pammi:- dekhthi hu,.. ki tum kya karthi ho.
s.t.:- mai indono per bharosa karke nahi chup bait sakthi,mujhe kuch karna hoga.
teeno dispersed with their alag alag plans.
Maan came to mansion. He is straight way going to his room without noticing any body.
Pammi:- Aree,.. Maan beta,.. aap kab agaya simla se?
Maans.t.:- tho isse pata chalakimai simla gaya hu, tho kyu aur kiske saath gayi ye bhi jaanliyi hogi.
he looked at her like ,.. isse aap ko kya? without giving any reply to her.
Pammi:- by his look getting cinfuse,.. bolo beta,.. kab agya?
Maan:- jab aap ko patachala ki mai simla gayahu ,.. tho ye bhi aap ko ptachala hoga ki mai kab waapas agaya , phir kyu puchrahi ho? he went to his room without giving any head to ammi.
Pammi:- grinded her teeth for his cold and curt reply and the rudness n his behaviour. She know very well that Maan gaya fr. her grip, but she didnt know he heard her , so only she is trying
trying to get back him to her grip.she was very much frustrated.

Here in Maans room,.. Annie came to his room with his b.f. as he is gettig fresh up .
Annie:- bhai,.. she came and hugged him . how ir u?
Maan:- also hugged her asking how r u?
Annie:- how is ur trip bhai?
Arjun came inside trip nahi Annie,. honeymoon.
Maan blushed hearing honeymoon.
Arjun:- haii,.. hai,...MSK aur blushing,...my god jiju,.. tho mai bath ko pakki samjhu?
Maan nodded his head to yes stillblushing.
Annie shoutedin joy iska matlab bhabhi maangayi/
Maan:- haa annie wo maangayi.
Annie:- my god bhai ,. she hugged him fully excited and joy,.. jumping and swirling him round,.. haii,.. hai,.. mera bhai kishaadi honewaalihai,.. she began to shout loud bhai ki shaadi, bhabhi ghar anewaali hai..
Arjun:- Annie,. ye kya karrahi ho? dheere se bolo sab sunlega,.. ab tho bahut wakth hai ye sab karne ki tum itna excite math hojao control urself ye tumhari tabiyat keliye thik nahi hai,.. aur ye baath abhi bahar nahi jaana chahiye bahut kuch haikarneka,.. kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ,samjhethum?
Annie controled herself and hugged Maan bhai ,.. mai kitnakhush hu ki mai aapse kahnahi paarah hu.
Arjun:- wo tho sahi ,pehle muh tho meetha kar.
Annie :- ek mnt ,mai abhi ayi , she ran out
Aru@Maan:- aaa,.. dheerese annie.., bhago math.
Ar:- congts jiju,.. mai bahut khush hu he hugged ,. akhir aap di ko manaliya.
Maan also hugged him back.
"Tho age kya plan hai ? kya sochrahe aap? di kya chahthi hai ? unhone kuch kaha?
Maan:- kuch nahi ,.. bus wo chahthi hai ki humaari ye rishthe ko sab ki rajamandi chahthi hai,.. unki pariwaar , humara ,.. dunia ka , samaaj ka,. sab ka wo bahutda thi hai kilog kya sochthe hai aurkya kahthe hai ,.. kayi unki waje se unki bachhe ko sir chukana pade,..isa sochrahi hai ,. aur wo mere liye bhi bahut phikar horahi thi ,.. mere reputatio n ka kayi unki waje se log mujhe kuch kahe. ye baath unhe bahut pareshaa karrahe hai
Arju:- haa,. jiju di ne bilkul sahi kaha aur hume sabhi ki rajamandi keliye bahut khoshish karrna hoga . waise mai aur dev prasant se baathkiya
Maan:- kya tum prasant se baath ki?kya kaha unhone?
Arjun:- pehli baar isi baath sunke koi kaisa react hothe ,bilkul waisa hi reactkiya prasant ne.
Maan:- matlab,...
Arju:- phikar karneki koi baath nahi jiju ,.. humj phir khooshish karthe hai ,.. i am sure prasant will deffinitely understand the situation aur tho ab di bhi maangayi tho humaara kaam aur bhi aasaan hoga. hum phirse prasant se baath karenge.
Annie came with a thaali and some sweets in her hand. she fed some sweets tothem
Maan:- ye thaali kiskeliye annie?
Annie:- bhai ,.. hume abhi bhabhi ke pass jaana hai?
Maan:- per kyu?
Arjun:- ye sargi hai jiju,.. kal karwachout haina,.. har aurat ka thohaar hai,ye har aurat apni pati ki lambi umar keliye puja karna, vrat rakna unki haq hai jiju,.. aur is keliye humaari taraf se kuch tofa hai ye. aur annie chahthi haiye sargi aap di ko dede.
Maan:- per humaari shaadi tho abhi huahi nahi.
Arjun:-ye vrat tho honewaali bhi karthe jiju jiska rishtha pakki hogayi hogi,.. jin logonko apni rishthe per atut viswaas ho ,. wo bhi karsakthe. per Annie ,.. di ko ye sab karna pasand hoga ya na hoga?
Maan:-nahi ,.. wo karegi,.. mai jaantha hu iski baare me wo jarur karegi.
Arjun:- ummm,.. itna viswaas?
Maan:- sounding very firmly haa,.. mujhe viswaas hai unki pyaar me.
right then his cell ringed.
Maan picked his cell and smiled seeing the i.d.
seeing his smile they assumed thet the call is fr. geet.
Maan:- halow,. geet,..
Geet:- kya karrahe ho?app?fresh hogaya? naastha ki?
Maan:- umm,.. bus abhi karrahi hu.
Geet:- wo,.. wo ,.. she dont know how to ask him.
Maan:- kya baath hai geet? bolo,.. he looked arjun and annie.and kept the pho. on speekar mode.

Geet himmat laga ke ,. ji ,.. wo kal karwaachout hai... hearing this all looked their faces. Maan asked them with his eyes ,.. kyu maine bathayana?
Aap sunrahehona?geet.
Maan:- haa,.. geet mai sunraha hu. bolo.
Geet:- wo ,.. mujhe ,.. mujhe ,..
Maan:- mere liye vrat rakhna chahthi ho?
Geet:- haa,.. she grinned and then blushed furiously
Maan :- tumhe mere liye ye sab karne ka jarurat nahi haigeet, din bhar upwaasrahetho tumhari tabiyat kharaab hojayegi.
Geet:- pouting ,. nahi mai karungi promise mujhe kuch nahi hoga, mujhe karni hai ye vrat.
Maan:- thik hai thik hai ,.. jaisa tum chaho ,.. ab isa muh math banao

She grinned like a child.
Maan:-ab khush,..
Geet:- umm,.. bahut,..
Maan:- o.k. ghar me koi hai?
Geet:- nahi ,.. mai akeli hu ,.. Arpitha unki ghar chaligayi ,.. ankitha apni sasuraal chaligayi vrat keliye,. kyu?
Maan:- kuch nahi ,.. mai araha hu abhi.
Geet:- aap such me araha ho?
Maan:- haa,.. geet mai araha hu ab call tho cut kar taaki maijaldi pahunjau.
Geet grinned and cut it.
Annie came andhugged him ,.. jaldi chaliye bhai mujhe bhabhi semilna hai jaldi. d the trio went to geets house.


link for part-125:-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668596&PID=104190386&#p104190386
Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww...finally
yaar ye tino chudail ka kya plan hai dekhna padega!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
this trio grrr phir se planning
maan n geet r backto deldi
geet maan k liye karwachouth rakh rahi hai so sweet
loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part..b4 maan reaches the trio is planning something
maan said to ani geet acccepted for marriage
now kc..
y i think kuch hone wala hai..

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