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Posted: 11 years ago

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just read all the parts

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anuradha.nandam

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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/part-122/22/3/2014

Part-122

Here in Simla,...

Geet wake up by the light sun rays on her face. She slowly opened her eyes trying to rigister her surroundings, when she felt cold on her upper body . She looked at her and the compramising position,.. Maan all hugged her burrying his face in her bare ches ttheir bare uppers all glued to eachother,.. she again hugged him keeping her one hand around him and one in his hairs.She blushed red to their closeness yet a bit distance. She remain recalling all the incidents fr. the very begining,.. their first meet,.. ther journey together and their parting again meeting ,.. everything up to today..She recalled each and every moment spend with him,.. his care ,.. his concern ,. his help to their family,.. his respect ,.. love ,. his effection and till today his efforts to show his love to her ,.. everything bring a great contentment happy ,. over joy wat not ,.. everything ,.. she slowly bend to his head and kissed on his head lightly not wanting to disturb him. She decided to lay like that till he wake up filling this heavenly moment in her heart for ever.

But he woke up by her simple act of love on him. He nuzzled his face between her mounts creating havoc in her . He slowly lifted his face to look in to her eyes which r showering immense love on him.He moved to her fore head laying her on her back . He kept his lips on her forehead ,.. kissed her saying ,. good morning,.. yes ,.. ita a wonderfu morning for him to start his day. " isse jyaada khubsoorat shuruwaath tho hohi nahi sakthi" Then to her eyes kissing each one ,.. good morning,.. then to her ears nibbling them ,.. good morning,.. wishpering in her ears creating sensations blasting in her.She shivered like a tender leaf holding him ,.. then to her cheeks,.. good morning then to her nose ,.. to her jawline kissing every where to her lips which r shivering in anticipation to be taken by him ,.. fulfilling their wish ,. sucking ,.. nibbling ,.. biting ,. soothing her already swollen lips ,.. goodmorning,..there to her neck shoulders arms up to ribs then to upwards again to her upper globes which r inviting him to take them,. squeezing ,..pleasuring her making her uncontrolable ,.goodmorning,..thats it she lost it and take him where ever she get contact him ,. kissing madly biting leaving all her marks on him ,.. goodmorning,.. they parted when they felt breathless ,.. all panting maan dipping his face on her nook of neck.

After composing herself Geet:_ Maan hume chalna hoga ,.. der horaha hai.

Maan:-umm,.. he partted fr. her looking still desiring looks

Geet shied and covered herself with hands. Maan smiled and gave her blouse to wear ,. but ofsoos ye hai ki wo ye pehan nahi sakthi as he tored it.

She looked at him with puppy face ,. complaining ,...

He covered her with her pallu and kept his shirt on her covering her. He lifted her up and led her to the wash room to fresh up .

While she is in wash room he tapped the door calling her" geet ur clothes"

She opened the door and keep her hand out to take the clothes. He handed them to her . She took them and hanged them on holder without seeing at them . After her bath she took the towel and wiped herself and reached to the clothes to wear,.. when she got a shock of her life,.. a track pant and a "T" shirt ,. more a jog suit.

She opened the door slightly' Maan,.. ye kounsa kapde diye aap ? shaayad ye aap ka hai.

Maan"- nahi geet wo tumhareliye.

Geet"- mere liye ,.. mai kaise pehansakthi hu maan ye kapde.

Maan:- kyu nahi pehansakthi ho? jab jogging karna hai tho yehi pehanahaina?

Geet:- mai ,..? jogging? aap se kisne kaha ki mai jogging jaarahi hu.

Maan:- mai kahraha hu ,. hum jog per jaarahe.

Geet:- lekin Maan,..

Maan:- Geet please pehnlena,.

Geet slghed ,. she cant deny him after all she weared a backless blouse for him ,.. tho ye kyu nahi?

umm,.. o.k.

After some time she came out ll feeling shy[me wonder wat for it ,.. bina kapde half naked thina uske saath pura raath ab in kapdon me kyu shama rahi hai]

Maan also came get ready" chale geet?" Geet:- umm,.. hum kaha jaarahe hai?

Maan:- geet hum date pe jaarahe.

Geet opened her mouth like haaa,... pehle jogging aur ab ye date kaha se aayi?

Maan led her to the guarrage and went to a bike and began to start it. Geets jaws drawn to the ground , she stood numb not grasping wat is he up to.

Maan :- asked wat geet? kya dekhrahi ho?

Geet:- bike,..?

Maan:- looked at her confused face,..haaa,..

Geet:- aap ko bike chalana bhi aatha hai?

Maan:- kya baath karrahi ho geet? bhulgayi,.. tum MSK se baath karrahi ho ,.. collge . champian bike racer.

Geet:- bike racer,. aap races bhi karthe? wahi jo ,.. ladki ko peeche bithake karthe?

Maan:- haa,.. kyu ,? Maan could see a tinje o 'J on her face ,.. he smirked seeing it ,..kyu ? kyu isa puchrahi ho?

Geet:-ji,.. kuch nahi,.. she looked own

Maan:- jeolous,...umm,.. he came near her cupping her face lifting to look in to his eye ,.. itna pyaar karthe ho mujhese? um,,.. geet bolo? itna pyaar karthe ho mujhese? itna possesssive hothe hue bhi ,.. tum kaise socha ki,. mujhe uss sameera ke saath shaadi kareneka geet?,.. umm,.. bolo ,.. geet?

geet hugged him not able to answer his question,. burrying her face in his chest.

" mujhe maaf kijiye maan ,. us wakth mera pass aur koi raastha nahi tha mere family ko bachaneka,. ye jaanthi hue bhi ki sameera aap keliye sahi nahi hai,.. mai bahut khudgarj bangayi ,.. apni swarth keliye apni pariwaar keliye soch kar mai isa kiya,. apni matlab keliye ,.. abhi bhi mai wahi karrahi huna ? mere khushi keliye mere bache ke saath kuch galat tho nahi krrahi hu na?humaari ye faisla hume kis mode per lekar jayenge?

Maan:- kuch nahi hoga geet? hum kuch galat nahi karrahe ,.. bilkul sahi raasthe pe hai hum ,.. hume haq hai geet ki khushiya paaneka hume purahaq hai,.aur humare bachhe bahut achhe hai bahut samjdaar hai, ,.. wo hume samajsakthe hai ,.. aur wo humesha tumhari khushi chahthe hai,. tho unhe kuch galat nahi lagtha ,.. wo tumhari bache hai ,.. wo kabhi galat nahi sochthe,. mera yakeen mano sab thik hojayega ,.. mai sab kuch thik kardunga. tumhe mujhe per bharosa haina?

Geet:- haa,.. khudse jyaada mujhe aap per viswaas hai maan ,. aur mai kuch nahi jaanthi sirf ye jaanthi hu ,..ki mai aap ke bina ji nahi sakthi.

Maan: -tho phir sab mujhe per chodo .,. tum befikar raho,.. ab chale?

Geet:- umm,..

Maan started bike looked at geet to sit on back seat. She hoped on it on one side like tipical woman.

Maan:- isa nahi geet dono side baitho meri tarah.

Geet:- looked at him all wondered like the earth is going to upside down,. kya ? kya kahrahe ho aap?mai ise kaise bait sakthi hu?

Maan:- kyu nahi baitthe? kya tum koi paraya log ke saath jaarahi ho? apni boy friend ke saath jaarahi ho ,. tho tum kyu nahi baitsakthi? koi apni boy friend ke saath isa baittha hai kya? Geet:- gasped repeating,.. boy friend?

Maan:-- haa,. boy friend ,.. aur tum mera girlfriend,.. date tho wahi karthe.

Geet:- ye kounsa date hai ,. koi. subha subha,.. jogging dress pe date per jaatha hai kya?

Maan:- mai pehlehi kahdiya tumhe ki humaara prem khahaani sab se alag hai ,..tho humaari har kadam bhi alag hi hothi ,. ab baitogi ya nahi?

Geet:- thik hai ,.. thik hai ,.. baitthihu baba and she sat .

Maan:- thik se baito pakadke geet is searching where to hold,.. he took her arms and made her hold around his waist. isa pakadna hai,.. my god geet tumhe bahut kuch sikhna hai,.. tumhe kuch bhi nahi aatha wo girl friend waali baathe.

Geet:- kya kaha aapne ? mujhe kuch bhi nahi aatha?

Maan:- haa,.. such me tumhe kuch bhi nahi aatha tumna bilkul dumbo.

Geet:- achha tho dikhathi hu mai aap ko ki asli g.f. kaise hothi hai,.. be ready,..

Maan:- u.r. most welcome.

with lot of knock joke Maan brought her to a location deep in forest all surrounded by hills and water falls.

Geet jumped looking that location ,.. wah,.. Maan,.. its realy beautiful, lovely,. aapko kaisa pata ye jaga ki baareme?

Maan:- mai ,..jab bhi simla aathahu ,. yaha aatha hu,. ye jaga mujhe bahut pasand hai,.. tumhe pasand aayi?

Geet:- haa ,.. Maan bahut pasand aayi,.. isa lagrahi hai k isaari zindagi yehi bithaneki aap ki saath.

Maan:- tho wahi hoga.

Geet:- ye kaisa hosaktha hai Maan?ye tho jungle hai?

Maan:- kyu nahi hosaktha geet ye saari jaga humari hai geet ,.. humaari apna.

Geet:- matlab ye aap ka property hai?

Maan:- aapka nahi humaara hai ,.. humaara property hai ,. aur ab se ye sab tumhari hai.

Geet shocked listening this,.."Maan",. mujhe kuch nahi chahiye Maan ,.. mai ye sab nahi chahthi hu .

Maan:- geet isa nahi hai ki tum ye saab chahthe ho ,.. tumhe ye jaga pasand haina,. bus hum yaha araamse rahsakthe bina kuch hichhichat.

Geet looked at the water falls,.. Maan mujhe waha jaana hai paani me.

Maan:- haa,.. chalo,. he led her to the stream under the waterfalls.

Geet stopped there thinking,..

Maan:- wat? kya sochrahi ho?

Geet:- Maan humare kapde gil ihojayegi na,. humare pass dusera kapde nahi hai change karneki.

Maan:- pehle tum ye socho ki tumhe waha jaana hai ya nahi?jaana haina? tho kapde ke baath chode baad ki baath baad me dekhenge.

Geet noded her head and went under the falls all drenching herself under the cool sweet ,pure water of the falls dragging Maan with her.

And they played and played like kids splashing water on eachother ,..laughing chaging,. bathing eachother ,. rubbing eachother,. feeling eachother ,.. romancing eachother reaching to their peeks with bursting desires in side.

After a long time they came out after geet reminding him, Maan hume jaana hoga time horahahai .

They came to bike ,.. geet looked at him like ,.. now wat?

Geet:- kahiye janaab ab hum kya karthe ,? kaise jaayenge ise gili kapadome?

Maan:- jab MSK hai tho tumhara pass kyu chintha karrahe ho?

Geet:- haa,.. tho bathayiye,.. the great MSK kya karnewaale hai?

Maan:- haa,..jaadu,..pehle ankhe band karo.

Geet:- kyu? Maan:- karona? Geet:- thik .hai. she closed her eyes.

Maan:-haath phelavo.

she spread her hand ,.. he kept a packet n her hand,.." ye raha tumhare kapde,. change karlo.

Geet opened her eyes ,. tho aap pehlehi ye sab ki intezaam kiya,.. mujhe kyu nahi bathaya?

Maan:- bathaya na tumhe chinta karneki jarurat nahi,.. ab jao change karlo.

Sh moved to behind a tree and opened the paqck,.. she chuckled to his choice o fcolour saree all white and necessary things.. she started to change when she was about to wear saree ,.. only on blouse and petti coat,.. she felt two hands wrapping fr. her back on her waist and hugging her moving his hands to upwards to her curves cupping them and nuzzling his face on her nape kissing her sending tremors of sensations running through her spine to her lower parts.she stopped at once with all love and hapiness filled heart ,.not able to hold this much passion,love by him,.. her heart began to sing a song.

A song all wat feel about him,.. wat she wants fr. him ,.not able to bear his passion she pushed him lightly and ran to some where,.. Maan searched for her calling Geet,... Geet,...

Sudenly he heard a sweet melody voice of her. His legs automatically began to go towards the marvelous melody ,.. all drowned in that magnetic pull . there she stood with all her arms spread calling him in to her arms

Saathiyaa, saathiyaa
Pagle se dil ne yeh kya kiya
Chun liya, chun liya
Tujhko deewane ne chun liya
Dil toh uda uda re aasman mein badalon ke sang
Yeh toh machal machal ke gaa raha hai sunn nayi si dhun

she hugged him as he surrender himself to her all lost in her . the sweetness in her voice dragged his all sences ,.. all captured by her spell.,... yaa,. this is her another face which he didnt know till now. she sings ,.. sings for him only.,.. expressing her innocent love to him,.. her passion to him,. how much she desires him,. everythig making him all spell bound.
Badmash dil toh thag hai bada
Badmash dil yeh tujhse juda
Badmash dil meri sune na zid pe ada
Badmash dil toh thag hai bada
Badmash dil yeh tujhse juda
Badmash dil meri sune na zid pe ada

He took her face in his palms looking deep in to her eyes expecting much more fr. her. she pulled his face to her heart asking him to listen wat her heart says ,.. explaining her state,.. how it felt ,. how it always ignors her and always want to be with him,.etc,..etc,..

Acchi lagey dil ko mere har teri baat re
she moved to back of him hugging him keeping her head onhis shoulder

Saaya tera bann ke chalun itna hai khwaab re
Kaandhe pe sar rakh ke tere katt jaaye raat re

joining her hand with him, keeping their both hands spreading and turning round along with him
Beetenge din thaame tere haathon mein haath re

sh brough ttheir joind hands keeping on her heart ,.. asking him to feel her heart
Yeh kya hua mujhe mera yeh dil fisal fisal gaya
Yeh kya hua mujhe mera jahaan badal badal gaya

he hugged her to his heart all felt content to her innocent surrender and stood like grasping the whole to his heart.

Badmash dil toh thag hai bada
Badmash dil yeh tujhse juda
Badmash dil meri sune na zid pe ada
Badmash dil toh thag hai bada
Badmash dil yeh tujhse juda
Badmash dil meri sune na zid pe ada

She led him to the shade of the tree where the tree made a flower bed with all its dropped flowers
She made him to lay there and came on to his chest

Neendhein nahin chaina nahin badloon mein karwatein
Taare ginu ya main ginu chaadar ke sarwatein

Carassing his face all every whrere,.. she
Yaadon mein tu khwaabon mein tu teri hi chaahatein
Jaaon jidar dhoonda karoon teri hi aahatein

giving smooches on hisface every whrer

Yeh jo hai dil mera yeh dil suna na keh raha yehi
Woh bhi kya zindagi hai zindagi ki jis mein tu nahin

She laid down taking him on her allowing him to love her ,..giving in him as he began to feel his face on her nuzzling ,.. she covered both of them with her pallu.
Badmash dil toh thag hai bada
Badmash dil yeh tujhse juda
Badmash dil meri sune na zid pe ada
Saathiyaa, saathiyaa
Pagle se dil ne yeh kya kiya
Chun liya, chun liya
Tujhko deewane ne chun liya
Dil toh uda uda re aasman mein badalon ke sang
Yeh toh machal machal ke gaa raha hai sunn nayi si dhun
Badmash dil toh thag hai bada
Badmash dil yeh tujhse juda
Badmash dil meri sune na zid pe ada
Badmash dil toh thag hai bada
Badmash dil yeh tujhse juda
Badmash dil meri sune na zid pe ada

I know its a bit long update,..

Bus guys bahut hua romance ,.. aur ab se sirf story pe concentrate karna chahthi hu,. want to move ahead ,. because a lot is there.

Link for part-123
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668596&TPN=48

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago

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Sheetalvasa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Nice update

Pura padh kar comment karungi...Okies!!!

Me first...me first...!!!

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vrinda22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

maneet are living in their romantic love..date in jogging dress..lolz..bike ride..maan has turned a true romeo..love is in air...kabi kabi mann gabratha hai..all these wonderful moments of maneet will turn once they are back to home..nice part..

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

After some time she came out ll feeling shy[me wonder wat for it ,.. bina kapde half naked thina uske saath pura raath ab in kapdon me kyu shama rahi hai]

these lines made me laugh uncontrolled...

wonderful update...

Geet went to date with her boyfriend...they are really enjoying each other's love, passion and moments...hope her daughters and SILs understand her feelings and let her enjoy...

if they create any problem then these moments will be ruined for them...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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Alamelu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Fantastic update with such a giving from both Maneet.

Now they have to face the so called families. I really hope that gets family do not disappoint her and put her at a guilt road to feel and experience love at this age

Mans family tho we know how who will react. Waiting eagerly now for this part

But truly enjoyed this acknowledging and confessing and experiencing the commitment of love phase. So glad they both know how much the other person loves them

Hoping this will help them to face everything thrown their way

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suhaaana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

anu di i will comment after reading all the parts

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 11 years ago

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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/part-123/pg.48/29/3/2014

Part-123

Geet reached home with her students in her bus with maan all fallowing in his car. Maan so much wanted to bring her along with him in car and insisted her , but geet dinyed him saying him that is not good, wat if her coleagues and school people thought about him?

They almost reached early hrs and the bus stopped at the school. Maan waited her to come out after completing formalities.

She hoped in the passenger seat and Maan started the car,.. when suddely it stroked to her that they r going to be part,..dont know when can she met him again. A fear of beeing parted fr. him and a fear of losing him engulfed her. The fear of wat will be happen? wat will be the reaction of her children?will they understand her? r accuse her? accuse her feelings towards Maan?will they loath her behaviour?will they think low of her?wiil have to put a full sop to their budding relation?will have to lose him forever?Tears formed in her eyes ,threatening to fall and she trying to send them back,.. not wanting to show them to him. Her throat chocked ,.. face all become red due to the force she is applying to control herself fr. breakdown. All become chup and gumsum. Maan observed her while driving now and then,. he understand her state. Her turmoil as he is also in that same condition. He took the car faraway fr. the road and stopped closing all the windows.

He pulled her at once all crushing her in to himself kissing her everywhere,. and she bursted ,.. kissing him on face and carassing him ,.. she could only maintain to utter," will everything o.k. Maan?do they understand us?r accuse us?wat can i tell them about our trip?

Maan," haa,.. geet,. sab thik hojayega,.. they will understand us,. tum phikar math kar,.. sab mujhe per chodo,. isa rothehue math jaa apni ghar,.. tumhe kuch bathaneki koi jarurat nahi,.. sab mai dekhlunga,..

Geet:- "jaldi kuch kijiyena" wetting his shirt with her tears.

Maan:- haa geet , ab mai aur der nahi karunga"he promissed her wiping her tears.

She smiled controling herself sitting properly leaving him," aaj office math jaana araam kijiye,.. bahut thaggaya hoga"

Maan:- umm,.. tumbhi,.. araam karo ,and he again started the car and droved to her house.

She looked at him wondering ,weather to ask him to come inside r not?kya ye thik hogi isa saath me jaana?

He looked at her understanding her truma.

Maan:- Thum jao geet, shaayad abhikeliye hum saath me jaana thik nahi hoga.

She looked down and got down the car. He opened the dicky and brought her luggage out and kept them at the door and looked at her till she enter house looking him back and waved her buy and went to mansion.

As soon as Geet entre house Arpitha came running to her ,...Maa,.. aap kab agayi?aur ye kya aap do din se hume phone nahi kiyi? aur mera call bhi nahi liye? kya hua maa? aap thik tho haina? tabiyath thik haina aapki?

Geet stood rooted wondering wat to tell her ,.. moreover wonder ,.. she felt guilt,.. a guilt not able to tell her the truth. she didnt hide anything till now fr.her children.. She is an open book to them till now,.. ,but for the first time in her whole life she is hiding something fr. them which she never want ,...not a simple thing its a big thing a big bluster to them,..dont know how they receive this when they came to know . She is not able to look in to Arpithas eyes. She looked down,. looking some where.

"nahi beta ,.. kuch busy me hu,..time nahi mila,.. sab kuch sirf do din me karna hai tho ,..isliye ,.. mai thik hu .

Arpitha senced something weird in her behaviour,.. but she let it go off.

Challow achha hua aap agayi,.. aap fresh hojayiye,.. mai aap keliye naastha lagathi hu. Geet moved in side hastily as she felt suffoacated to stand before Arpitha."Dishu school chalgayi?

Arpitha:- haa maa,.. wo aapko bahut miss karrahi hai>. zid karrahi hai ki school se chutti leneka aaj aap aarahehaina isliye wo aapki saath bithana chahthi hai.

Geet entrered the haal when she observed some gift packets and sweets and baskets of fruits in hall.

Geet:- ye kya hai arpi? koun bheja hai?

Arp:- wo ,. maa kal karwachout haina,. humari sasural se ayahai ye sargi maa ,. mereliye aur ankitha .keliye

Geet:- ohh,.. and she took towel and went to freshup. All the while thinking about Maan.,..when it striked her "Karwachout"...The one ritual which she didnt do till now.

The great event for every married woman,.. every suhagan tarasthe hai ki apni pati ki lambi umarkeliye ,.. iski doraan unki apni lambi suhaagan keliye vrat rakhe,.. the ritual which dipicts ..of true love ,..true care,.. effection ,.. more over a true companionship. har ek suhagan ki haq hai ki apni pati ki lambi umar keliye aur unki lambi suhaagan keliye ye vrat rakhkar devi maa se aashirwaad paaneka.

But her life never gave a chance to do that ,.. isa koi honichahiye ,.jiskeliye wo ye sab karpaqye,...karotho kiskeliye karhe?wo jaanwar keliye?jisko apni patni aur khud ki betion ki kuch kadarhi nahi,. wo insaan keliye,.. keval kuch paison keliye apni patni ki izzt becha,.. apni betion ko becha,. uskeliye ye sab karna jaruri nahi tha,.. kyun ki wo pati nahi ,.ek insaan bhi nahi ,.. jaanwar hai wo,..he never there with her . She never did it for him . After the marriage of Arpitha and Ankitha also she never took part in it ,.. she send themj to their sasural to perform the puja and vrat . she never do it . neither puja nor vrat.

But now Maan is there with her,..now she want to do it. want to do it for Maan.

pehli baar mai maan keliyeye vrat rakhungi,.. meri Maan ki lambi umar keliye ye mai karungi.,.. Per kaise?kya kahungi mai gharwaale ko?kya kahsakthi hu unhe agar wo mujhe puche tho ki kiskeliye mai ye vrat rakhrahi hu? philal tho mai unse bathanahi sakthi jab tak maan sab kuch thik na kare? tho mai kaya kahu?

tho mai chup rahu? vrat nahirakhu? nahi,.. nahi,.. mujhe ye vrat rakhni hogi,. aur puja karni hai meri Maan keliye ,.. Tho mai kya karu?aur ye baath mai Maan se kaise bathau?wo kya kahega? wo maanjaayegaa?

Mai jaanthi hu wo jarur maanjaayegaa,.. mai kuch puchu ,. aur wo manakare isakabhi nahi hoga.,.. tho vrat kholnekeliye unhe yaha anapadega,.. wo ayegana?

Geet tum itna kyu sochrahi ho? tumhe vrat rakhni hai tho rakh baaki sab devimaa per chode,. she decided and got freshened and came out.

Here outer to her shock Aarpitha stood holding those two sarees [red2white] in her hand as she is unpacking her luggage.

Arpi:_ Maa,.. bahut accha hai ye dono saree,.. aapne mai aur ankitha keliye simla me kharidlia? Geet stood shocked and numb all shockingly by arpithas words.

Arpi:- bahut mehnga dikhrahe maa ,.. kyu itna paisa lagayi isme? bahut achhe hai maa,.. mai kounsa lelu?

Geet became all pale hearing this,.. Maans first gift. she dont know wat to tell her. She canot say no to her,.. as Arpitha knows that she didnt wear that type of sarees till now. Its oblivous that she think those r for her and her sister.

Arpi:- boliye maa,.. mai kounsa lelu inme?red r white?

Geet looked all lost.

before Arpitha say something her cell ringed and she ran to answer it.

Geet ran to those sarees and took them and hugged them to her heart. She didnt have any answer for arpitha. Her eyes filled , she nuzzled her face in those sarees feeling Maan in them. His scent till oozing fr. them . She inhaled that scent to her deep lungs filling it ,.. feeling it.

She immeadiately showed them in her shelf before arpitha comes ,. while she is doing that her eyes fell on the ring which Maan weared while he is proposing her,.. she took it out," achha hua maine wo diamond set mere hand bag me rakha, she took it out and kept them in her inner shelf where no one could reach.

Arpi:- Maa,.. aap bath,..

Geet diverted her in ,..haa arpi,.. jaldi naastha lagayiye,.. mujhe checkar arahi hai.

Ar:- haa,.. maa,. aap jaldi ayiye nd she forgot about the sarees.

While doing b.f. arpitha observed geet all lost somewhere not in her usualself.

Ar:- maa,.. bathayiye aap ki tour ki baath? kaisa hai?

geet didnt hear her.

Arpi:- maa,... maa,.. she shooked her .

geet startled by that and looked at her ,.. kya hai ,.. arpi? kya hua?

Arpi:- ye aap bathayiye ki aap ko kya hua?kaha khoihue ho?kya sochrahi ho?aap thik haina maa?

Geet:- kuch nahi ,.. beta,.. mai thik hu,..

Arpitha s.t.:- jarur kuch hua hoga ,.. kyu maa itni chup hai?

Geet :- shaam ko ghar jaana hai karwaacouth keliye arpitha?

Arpi:- haa,.. maa aap thik haina ? aap chahetho hum nahi jaayenge aur yaha manayenge vrat.

Geet almost in shouting tone ,.. Nahi,... Nahi,... coming to sence then ,.. mera matlab hai,... nahi ,. mai thik hu , tum jaake apna vrat manao.waise bhi ek din ki baath haina?

Ar:- looking confused,.. thik hai.

Geet ka man maan se baath karneka tadap rahe. pata nahi kaise karni hai ,..pehleki baath aur tha,. jab chahe bina kuch jijag wo phone karsakthe thi ,.. per ab kuch bhi karne se pehle bahut sochna padrahe hai ,.. bahut hichhihat horaha hai ,.. she want to tell him about her vrat , but khud decide karnahi paarahe hai. batau?ya na bathau?

Thats it yaar ,...

guys mujhe nahi pata tha ki geet se ye vrat karwaana thik hai ya nahi ,.. bus mujhe ek situation chahiye ,.. jiski doraan unki family ko uski baareme pata chale ,.. because ,.. in my veiw geet cannot confront about her love with their children directly ,.. so there must be a round about way by that her family knows about her feelings and wat she wants. so i took this .

more over as far as i observed in this vrat besides the traditional flavour ,.. there is a beautiful thing which dipicts the beautiful relation of the couple ,.. their true love,.. true care,.. deep effection between themselves ,.. and a perfect and true companionship.

so i thought there is nothing irrespective in this.

even though u find it ,.. think as it like writers liberty.o.kiees...

link for part-124:-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668596&PID=104069942&#p104069942

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago